SaHil FF: Eternally Yours, Epilogue, P42, Dec14.2016 - Page 7

I'm going to start with the opening quote:

He made a face, an annoyed huff leaving his lips. Why couldn't he . . . but there it was! A single, bright light in the sky.  A star!

He smiled triumphantly.

 
THIS is our Aahil. 👏 Who still have a small hope that maybe something is in store for him. Something that will make all his deep hidden scars vanish.. And he'll be able to see the light even though it might be around him. But this time he'll see it for sure. 

The quote really hit me hard. It made me think about the characterization of ARI. The man he is and has become despite being through so much in his childhood. He is still courageous for seeking hope... in the dark night..😳  (Don't mind me.. I tend to get emotional and highly writer-ish when I read 😆..)

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I need to confess.. I just read all the parts again and trust me, it was as beautiful and magical to read than it was the first time. ⭐️

I am in love with this story! It's amazing, exciting, mysterious and did I say amazing? You never fail to deliver an awesome chapter where you're left with a need for more. That's how I feel right now... I need more to read... You've got to update soon.

Also can I just say that I absolutely love the Banner! I love the coloring and the pictures you've chosen to include. I can tell that every pic has a meaning to the story.. 👍🏼 

Alright coming to your beautiful work.. The amount of pain and curuousity is so well written. I can't help but feel a tug at my heart whenever I take a glance over the words. The sorrow from Aahil's side of being an abused child.. The determination from Sanam's side in order to reach out for people and help those in need.

I adore the sheer brotherhood Aahil and Rehan share.  I loved how you decided to write how they met each other. I could really notice how Aahil truly reached forward to have a friend. Someone who liked him who he was and not because of his Royal Title.

 "What's wrong with me being Aahil Raza Ibrahim? I feel like I should be apologizing for something that is not my fault."

"Don't be like this," Aahil said after a short, uncomfortable silence. He shifted from one foot to the other. Fiddling with his bag, he put it over the other shoulder. "Just because I have money doesn't mean life was easy for me," he finally got out. "Do you have any idea . . . ?" He stopped and took a deep breath. "It's not easy for me to say this . . . but I'd like to be your friend."

Oh God! I think I just got stabbed by emotions and I'm bleeding heavily. I need to take a deep breath..  And Rehan.. How I miss him so dearly! He was the only person who could really reach out for him.

Rehan turned to stare at Aahil, able to see the pain that Aahil hid from the entire world. For Rehan, Aahil was his brother . . . his family . . . his support. It hurt to see his support hurt liking this.

I was actually surprised when I read Rehan was behind the idea of switching places. I actually thought Aahil would have offered it to him. Nice touch! 👏

And when she had landed in his arms . . . her scent . . . . her voice . . . the way she had felt in his arms . . . all of it had imprinted on him.

Gah... I feel like I'm watching a movie! It's so sophisticated and highly mysterious! And that's what draws me in. I have a thing toward these things.. 

And then they arrive back at Bhopal and met Lateef. I actually smiled sadly upon reading Lateef's words. He has always stayed loyal - at least in my mind he has.

"Do you think I wouldn't recognize the boy that brought me home when I was being beaten up for dressing like a girl? Or the boy who shared his meager amount of food with me?"  She began to cry loudly,

The small conversation Sanam and Seher had in the night.

"The first time my heart felt something."  - There was no need for more explanation. You did such a terrific job at that. Simple words which indicates so much. ❤️

Can't help gushing over how cute Seher and Rehan are. I miss them terribly.. 

I don't know how to let you know just how much I LOVE the idea behind the story! 👏❤️ A huge applause to you, darling. Thank you so much for coming up with such a wonderful idea to pin down.

I wish it was a book.. That way, I could just store it in my book-shelf and take it out whenever I felt like it.. Read whenever I wanted.. - I'm not even being overly kind. It's the honest truth. 🤗

You Are Amazing! (Yeah.. I know it's a long comment, but my thoughts are floating around and I can't seem to gather them all..) But you're still an amazing writer and I hope you'll update real soon. ❤️