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Desire6 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Sory ...couldnt comment on last part...kya karu..my wifi..Angry
jus read last part...too...

amazing ...yaar...i am loving dis version ...bt maneet  is one of my  fav...for me...
Embarrassed
Shyam...jerk AngryAngrywat does he thinks..dat girls once married is like a statue..who ll do n listen to wat he says..nd wat d crap...his mom is aware of him been impotent nd still asking for a heirShocked
does she means..let her bahu have extra marital affairLOLROFL

hehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>..koi gal nahi ...arnav hai na..heheheLOL

oh my dat ..jalebi part...nd dat kiss..isshhh!!!EmbarrassedBlushing
nd heheh!!!!!!!l khushi b na...love her clarification dat she wanted to njoy sweet...nd not d kiss.

jhooti...ROFL
nd Arnav...love how he calls her jalebi..kya namm haiLOL

so he is all set to get his jalebi back...

khushi ka turnmoil nd her monologue ...seems like she is like a lost puppy who has lost her way out...
nd is in a trap...not able to get out..
bt in all again she is dreamin abt arnav..nd not able to remove him of his touch ..seems she is affected by his mere touch..somethin has awaken by him...
bt i guess now ...
arnav knight in shining armoour is all set to save his damsel in distress nd swipe he away to his dream land...
and am waiit for dat...

amazing part..sona..
nd me wiaitn...



Edited by Desire6 - 10 May 2015 at 10:09am

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desire6

Sory ...couldnt comment on last part...kya karu..my wifi..Angry
jus read last part...too...

amazing ...yaar...i am loving dis version ...bt maneet  is one of my  fav...for me...
Embarrassed
Shyam...jerk AngryAngrywat does he thinks..dat girls once married is like a statue..who ll do n listen to wat he says..nd wat d crap...his mom is aware of him been impotent nd still asking for a heirShocked
does she means..let her bahu have extra marital affairLOLROFL

hehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>..koi gal nahi ...arnav hai na..heheheLOL

oh my dat ..jalebi part...nd dat kiss..isshhh!!!EmbarrassedBlushing
nd heheh!!!!!!!l khushi b na...love her clarification dat she wanted to njoy sweet...nd not d kiss.

jhooti...ROFL
nd Arnav...love how he calls her jalebi..kya namm haiLOL

so he is all set to get his jalebi back...

khushi ka turnmoil nd her monologue ...seems like she is like a lost puppy who has lost her way out...
nd is in a trap...not able to get out..
bt in all again she is dreamin abt arnav..nd not able to remove him of his touch ..seems she is affected by his mere touch..somethin has awaken by him...
bt i guess now ...
arnav knight in shining armoour is all set to save his damsel in distress nd swipe he away to his dream land...
and am waiit for dat...

amazing part..sona..
nd me wiaitn...

finally you came...you read...commented and as obviously conquered me...
Wifi toh humesha hifi problem deti hai yaar...
Anyway loved your comments sweetheart.
Ya I know MG version is your favorite...
For me it's obvious all my concepts are my jaanus...
She is indeed in a trap and for sure arnav will rescue her...
Jalebis toh abhi shuru hui hai...lots of jalebi filled romance will be there in future...
Tera comment nhi ata toh din nhi khatam hota.
So now I am happy ...it's always a treat and you know that...
Love ya lots...Star
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Superb Update!!!
Thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Originally posted by ...Shefa...

Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Originally posted by ...Shefa...

Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Originally posted by ...Shefa...

I had read MG's version of this story
now also reading this...it's really nice yrr
Glad to know that dear...hope you will love this version too.Star

I'm sure about it Smile
keeping my fingers crossed...Wink

u will do good Thumbs Up
Thanks dear...Star

u r most welcome Smile

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Syed695

Superb Update!!!
Thanks for the PM!!
Thanks a lot...ur welcome.Star
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Good one.
Poor Khushi. Hating Shyam and his mother. Knowing Shyam's condition how can they behave so low and spoil an innocent girl's life.

Hope Arnav save her from this sham of marriage and get her out of this.
Didn't receive PM wondering whether my id has been deleted from the list.

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Chapter 2

Fantastic Update

So Shyam's mother also knows that he is not attracted to his wife or any woman neither man he just cannot get that sensation into his body , well then he should at least think about Khushi because as time goes she is becoming more blank and empty , while Arnav is out there and wants to make her happy and he seems to love her too

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Nice

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