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NEW ASAD AND ZOYA STORY:WHEN ONLY LOVE REMAINS PART10 ON PAGE67 (Page 68)

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by asya7

Originally posted by suearmaniac

res
mere pehle kadam is story me LOL
readers bhej diye idhar nd mai khud besharmo ke jese ab aarahi hu


NOW UNRESS SOON TOO LOL
hahaha ok i got the underlying meaning of capslock LOL
LOL

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:15am | IP Logged
After their office shock and an entertaining fight
i love ur idea of making zoya meet nzma and while interacting nzma offering zoya to live with that
so fit in the stry and ayan haha wo to hehi bandar
m happy dilshad and zoya formed a strng connect
ek overwhelming chapter ke baad ye entertaining update was superb
i love the way u induce humor and thats a talent nt everybody can do
koi unexpected sa moment rehta he and ur hilarious line crack me up
lyk zoya mistaking asad to be a intruder and beating him with frying pan and that wasn't enough usne pepper spray kiya hahaha ROFL
well done Clap
Their bickerings were too much fun to read

Edited by suearmaniac - 07 November 2015 at 1:33am

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:20am | IP Logged
The para abt home was awesomely written
zoya did left a gel for him LOL
next is the epigraph again of moon and i really really don't knw how to express how much i love it and that gave me positivity somewhr that i can't get over the effect
then u connected it to asya and wow! Stunning how moon blessed the cute kids! Asad was a darling in past
contrary to that he does enjoy irritating her in present haha
loved how moon kept promise i remember when i read asad breaking down i have cried too
that was touching effective his guilt to nt being able to keep hs promise
morning aha zoya made him chuckle wowie ka zowie
past she was sunshine
present she is trying the same
again humorous office scene
poor zoya asad is on paybck mission hahaha
aww she sleeps lyk a child and asad noticing at the same tym being jahapana lol
zoya ke maje aaye
awesome

Edited by suearmaniac - 07 November 2015 at 3:51am

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:20am | IP Logged
and now meri fav fav chapter 6 ki bari
Big smilei really really love the title scoop of friendshipBig smile
u knw the way u wrote the chapter just perfect
cudn't have been better
the way it started and to the end
beautifully written
again the switching frm past to present and frm present to past
how do u do it
u knw this is my fav part
abd the childhood that lonely giirl seeked comfort in icecream
even my heart went out to her
asad too became partner in crime and it was just superbly written
i don't really have words how to describe what i love here
coz i loved every bit of this
zoya's chiitter chatter
asad's annoyance and rolling eyes
both fridge pe tik ke sitting
and eating secrertly
the scoop really started their friendship in past
and here too he found a friend with a zoya yet again
awesomely coordinated
and superb
lol
m i repeating adjectivesLOL
but i really adored this one so much
and that mai koi esa geet gau wali update bhi meri fav
abhi aate he uspe aage res spots pe
but this was terrificClapClap
meri to ye poori story hi fav he titr
and tu bhiHug



Edited by suearmaniac - 08 November 2015 at 9:00am

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
actually m loving the banner made by riddhi so much
those two kids aww
meri gujju gudiya bohat acha banner banaati he
neha wala bhi accha he
ohk so this is kinda my fav part
lol m saying it in every part now aren't i?
LOL okay so i am unable to contol my excitement as i type lol
pehle to asad proposing the idea of taking her out omg!!!
and then when he did zoya's reactions were mind blowingly potrayed with humor as she registered asad hasn't planned jana kaha heLOL
mela Heart
u have no idea how much i love the mela
and seeing it thru ur writing and asya in it was fantabulous
trust me titir i really loved how u executed the scenes according to the lyrics of the song
and talking of song
perfect choiceClap
exceptional piece of writing
i loved every scene and the song oh god u know when i read this back in september i was astonished at how the effect of the whole update wsn't leaving me haha
and m amazed ki mai almost itne months baad unres karne aayi hu and the effect the admiration and excitement is still the same
the para on promise and the past scene
girl take a bow seriouslyClapEmbarrassed
and the hug of new found friendship was well justified
u get 10 on 10LOLBig smile
i think at times i get a little helpless to express how much i love the thing
and with ur updates it happens a lot to me so if u find something repeatedly written in the reviews just think m going crazy as ur fan
lolEmbarrassed


Edited by suearmaniac - 22 January 2016 at 3:10am

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
ohk coming to the next part 8
i am seriously amazed yaar
titir ideas laati kidhar se he
chalte chalte dam sharaaz reallyLOL
but that was an enjoyable read and ui really loved ur idea and thought reachClap
loved that and how easily u make it look like how comfortable they are being with each other
and ah!!! bhaan night ki yaad dila di
aww pillow fight was awesome titir 
i really love the fun they do and asad rolling with laughter hahhaLOL
and titanic haha asad bichara
well the song is nice
song se mujhe wo wali story yaad aagai thousand years
u knw whenever i listen to that song
mujhe titanic kam wo thousand years ke asya ka confrontation zada yaad aata he
i just am so in effect of that story
wo kab update karegi tu?
jaldi karna okieee


Edited by suearmaniac - 22 January 2016 at 6:15am

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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Res 9
9th ke liye yaar no words!!!
this was whole a tearful journey till end 
i mean the events...zoya shrieking and then going unconcious...
doctors taking him as her husband
and his state...
i only have to say for it that u did a wonderful job with describing his thoughts...his fear of loosing 
another zoya
and last me wo sunshine jab bola usy aww i cried
sad but beautifulClap


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Posted: 05 November 2015 at 5:28am | IP Logged
res finally d most awaited updtDay Dreaming
 
Huggie Titir Hug
Hope u r well
but unres kal karungi abhi have 2 leave in sometime Embarrassed
& u know my comnts r long so time toh lagta hai naWink
Take care c yaBig smile
 
Finally managed 2 sit & comnt heheEmbarrassed
Titir u nailed it againTongue
awe it was so pyaar se bhara hua thaEmbarrassedBig smile
Pehle toh it started wid Asad sleeping by Zoya's bed awe it was a sight 2 beholdEmbarrassed & than Doc ka sir khaya asking questions unless he was sure she's fineLOL
than Caretaker coming 2 know her health was also very kind of him
it was so cute scene when Asad didn't correct them when they assumed Asya marriedWink
Than Asad brought her home in his arms awe another wow moment Day Dreaming
that scene was nice when Dillu & Naj were fussing over Zoe hehe QH ka scene yaad aa gyaOuch
Asya's monologues were lovely when they were thinking about their moments Smile
their talk on coffee was lovely Asad is amazed ki Zoe understands him so well
that chocolate bar scene was recreated again & main toh piche chali gayi thi jab I read it Asya under d bed & Zoe eating d milkbarLOL
waise liked it when Zoe refused 1st & later snatched it & they bcame frnds officiallySmile
Now I wish Asya 2 soon realise their identities
& yeah Titir send them back 2 office nahi toh ghar main hi happy dinning table scene daal I wish 2 read that too EmbarrassedLOL
Amazing updt Titir now nxt wala jaldi karna which I know is difficult cuz u started another new story againOuch
Love ya sweetu & take careHug


Edited by jas91 - 18 November 2015 at 6:57am

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