NEW ASAD AND ZOYA STORY:WHEN ONLY LOVE REMAINS PART10 ON PAGE67 - Page 50

NOW UNRESS SOON TOO 😆

hahaha ok i got the underlying meaning of capslock 😆

Titir 🤗
Nariyal phod ke shubharambh karte he comments ka
starting with the title it dragged me here coz i've read dutta's novel whch have a same title nd i thought it may relate
bt when i read ths came out a unique and interesting concept 👏
A fairytale indeed starting frm being a caretaker of grl
awesome plot
the both banners are beautiful! Great job neha and guju gudiya 😛
the epigraph jst left me in awe titir
i already told u how much admiration i have for ur epigraphs
the switching from past to present is smartly done
and story started in dehradun and i have a personal liking for places like dehradun and when u described that my interest literally raised up
writing ke liye to jitni tarif karu kam hai
she caught hs lie? How jb usne jhut bola tb to zoya razia waha the hi nahi?
In present when story came u nailed it with that whole balcony scene! Usme esa kuch he nahi bt the way u wrote and described is commendable and i'm absolutely loving ur writing
thank u for adding the index 😆
a month bck when i read i had a hard tym finding all the chapters
wait its been 1.5 months since i read and sry mai b na ab unres kar ri hu
bt m so happy to see many of my readers here supporting u
and thanks for sharing ths wonderful story titir ❤️
Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

Zoya is so so cute
aww following him everywhere
bt asad ka dar jayaz b tha coz normally servants esa sochte he ki they shudn't befriend kids of maaliks and thats wat i love abt ur story! U always try to be real to come up with natural instances of life and the way u describe the photo of zoya when asad stood in balcony and when zoya sat on bench was so gud read
she got a job bt the name asad bringing memories...and he told her asad malik was his name and she being unknw of him being aak only grew my interest and made me curious how wud they meet and their meeting was great! Well wud comment for that in another res abhi update 2 ki baat karing
piya is sweet and supporting gud that zoya shared with her
asad is a hardworker and moms will be moms
loved the way u penned asad dilshad scene
and that past under the bed dosti ki shuruwat hona so cute
choclate ke liye kuch bhi hahaha
me likey ;) Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

I have a lot to say for 3rd update
bt don't knw how m i gonna do that 😳
that was lovely at first the mother knws their child very well and it was so touching to see the love!
Coming to the exceptionally penned part
and that is the revealing past
u jst nailed it
covering all the aspects in that past a mere para and u knw titir ur words are very very effective and again the realism shown wow!
All sorts of people and nature came out in ths update
people lyk rashid to run frm responsibilities
people lyk those who threw asad out of house
people lyk zeenat anwar to support a lonely child lyk zoya
people lyk dilshad and asad to support ayan and asads maternals to forgive them and support them
children like asad who lost their bachpan
lyk zoya who became his sunshine
the cruelities of lyf shown here were touching and ur writng made it effective
poverty hardwork loss above all the game of destiny!
Asad living in a guilt to nt being able to protect her
that feeling of losing someone knwing she isn't alive and when he stared at the moon that was terrible that guilt
bt it was beautiful how u wrote
bck to present asya in mazar and the gravity pull the connection they felt was well written
i really adored how both of them prayed for each other
and the latter mr. Catch nd ms. Fall bickering was entertaining haha me too salman's fan nt huge as zoya is lol
loved it
and the shock oh! Asad is the boss and 2 months she can't move haha
ths update was so much and more and u did a grt jobEdited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

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After their office shock and an entertaining fight
i love ur idea of making zoya meet nzma and while interacting nzma offering zoya to live with that
so fit in the stry and ayan haha wo to hehi bandar
m happy dilshad and zoya formed a strng connect
ek overwhelming chapter ke baad ye entertaining update was superb
i love the way u induce humor and thats a talent nt everybody can do
koi unexpected sa moment rehta he and ur hilarious line crack me up
lyk zoya mistaking asad to be a intruder and beating him with frying pan and that wasn't enough usne pepper spray kiya hahaha 🤣
well done 👏
Their bickerings were too much fun to readEdited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

The para abt home was awesomely written
zoya did left a gel for him 😆
next is the epigraph again of moon and i really really don't knw how to express how much i love it and that gave me positivity somewhr that i can't get over the effect
then u connected it to asya and wow! Stunning how moon blessed the cute kids! Asad was a darling in past
contrary to that he does enjoy irritating her in present haha
loved how moon kept promise i remember when i read asad breaking down i have cried too
that was touching effective his guilt to nt being able to keep hs promise
morning aha zoya made him chuckle wowie ka zowie
past she was sunshine
present she is trying the same
again humorous office scene
poor zoya asad is on paybck mission hahaha
aww she sleeps lyk a child and asad noticing at the same tym being jahapana lol
zoya ke maje aaye
awesomeEdited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

and now meri fav fav chapter 6 ki bari
😃i really really love the title scoop of friendship😃
u knw the way u wrote the chapter just perfect
cudn't have been better
the way it started and to the end
beautifully written
again the switching frm past to present and frm present to past
how do u do it
u knw this is my fav part
abd the childhood that lonely giirl seeked comfort in icecream
even my heart went out to her
asad too became partner in crime and it was just superbly written
i don't really have words how to describe what i love here
coz i loved every bit of this
zoya's chiitter chatter
asad's annoyance and rolling eyes
both fridge pe tik ke sitting
and eating secrertly
the scoop really started their friendship in past
and here too he found a friend with a zoya yet again
awesomely coordinated
and superb
lol
m i repeating adjectives😆
but i really adored this one so much
and that mai koi esa geet gau wali update bhi meri fav
abhi aate he uspe aage res spots pe
but this was terrific👏👏
meri to ye poori story hi fav he titr
and tu bhi🤗

Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

actually m loving the banner made by riddhi so muchEdited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago