NEW ASAD AND ZOYA STORY:WHEN ONLY LOVE REMAINS PART10 ON PAGE67 - Page 30

Posted: 8 years ago
Another mind blowing update...though the story is adopted but it has your charm with it...!
I love the way you described Moon's presence here!
Their silly promises with their longing for each other all were observed by it silently...
A hope ...yes they will meet and the y will survive...as the moon solely writing their future story together!!
It was really fun to read and I enjoyed every bit of it...
Continue soon and thanks for PM ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by swapno


Another mind blowing update...though the story is adopted but it has your charm with it...!
I love the way you described Moon's presence here!
Their silly promises with their longing for each other all were observed by it silently...
A hope ...yes they will meet and the y will survive...as the moon solely writing their future story together!!
It was really fun to read and I enjoyed every bit of it...
Continue soon and thanks for PM ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks a lot for this lovely comment. It really means a lot that you liked this.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This is actually not an adoption. The story from which i got this idea ends at the childhood and my story starts from after that. So that story gave me the base to build this story. I have changed many things and have also included many new things like this flashback. But I am really glad that you are finding it enjoyable๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
WOW! U r amazing writer..
I like ur writing style..
Everything u describe beautifully...
Loved it..
Waiting for Asya next encounter...
Update next soon
thanx for pm..
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Kanwal4salman


WOW! U r amazing writer..
I like ur writing style..
Everything u describe beautifully...
Loved it..
Waiting for Asya next encounter...
Update next soon
thanx for pm..
Thank you very much for this lovely commemt๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by asya7


Thank you very much for this lovely commemt๐Ÿ˜ƒ

welcome!!
Just update soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful story...
It was an amazing update...
Completely asyalicious...
Their bickering is that we love...
Also the sincerity and pain that they always hide...
The moon's role is making it more special and adorable...
Loved it ...
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by kabhi_asya


Beautiful story...
It was an amazing update...
Completely asyalicious...
Their bickering is that we love...
Also the sincerity and pain that they always hide...
The moon's role is making it more special and adorable...
Loved it ...
Thanks a lot for this sweet and lovely comment and the buddy request. Glad that you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Like Asya interaction
Office scene was nice
Asad stayed for Zoya.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
Posted: 8 years ago
hey ven vl u update next part itsss too cute story plz continue and pm me if possible
Posted: 8 years ago
I read last 2 updts 2gather
so after Asya's dargaah encounter they met in office
& were ready 2 fight again like Tom & jerry
but both have 2 work 2gather as contract is been signed
nxt she saved Naj & became frnds & she asked Zoe 2 stay in KV
KV entry scene was lovely & she bonded wid evry1 quickly
Asya ki 3rd meeting was hilarious usse chor samjh ke peet diya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but nxt day sorry bhi kaha wid medicines.๐Ÿ˜›
Next part i loved d flashback scene 
Asad was very caring always & promised 2 always b there 4 her
Both didn't knew but dono ka rishta tabhi ban gya tha like soulmates
Both were sad remebering this same scene but Zoya made him smile nxt day by gifting sight of a happy family
Asad decided 2 irritae her by giving lot of work but she showed her dedication still
dhere dhere pyaar ho hi jayega i m sure๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
u r doing awesome job dear๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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