OMG I dont know what should I say to you Avni...I am still awed by the beauty of what you have written. I am scared to say but I have NEVER till date felt so attached to KaYa till now...not even while watching the actual episodes.
I dont know whether I should applaud your aesthetic and smooth writing abilities more or the beautiful complexity of your plot...both are a step ahead of each other. It seems CVs have a lesson or two to learn from you in terms of script writing...I mean it! Loved how you showed that a broken relationship is never one big event...its a series of small misunderstandings that sum up to ruin lives.
Cant wait for the next part. Do update soon...will be waiting :)
Such a crisp n balance piece of writing.. Loved it from the start to the end.. Past does take a troll on u at times n it just gets impossible to improve the things.. Kabir in his shell dint realise how much he is damaging Ananya n their relationship.. A lil more patience from Ananya might have worked wonders.. but its difficult to do..So Real.. Really lookin forward to see how kabir would finally take a stand n make it up to Ananya.. :)
Keep updating me about the story please.. Buddy req sent :)
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