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DILEMMA(A NEW STORY) ch-5 on pg 5 (Page 3)

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Lovely !!
is manik have a crush on nandu ???
Cont soon

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wow nice story plz update soon

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hi! everyone once again m here.well when u r sick then the end result of it is like this story.I have written this in diff colour so that u can differenciate between diary parts,pov,conversations,thinkings,scenarios.I hope that I am able to make u understand.

{They all reach there (obviously in mall)}


"so what we r gonna do first" asked nandini.
"ummm... what about movie?what's say?"suggested arti.
"no, what about eating ice cream?"cabir said
"shut up!we have already ate that.Don't u remember joker?"
"Ok ok yaar,why u always shouts on me nandy?"


Between all these discussions someone was staring at nandini,just listening to her.



"how cute is she?she looks like baby of 6 not of 16."manik thinks.

Breaking his trance cabir asked"ohhh...  janab are u present here or..."
"cabir..."replied manik giving look of I will kill u to cabir.
"what have i said something ?nahi na then tell him na madhubala"
"manik just kill him right now n cabir now don't dare to call me madhubala"
"wooo stop it now angry madhubala oops navya n manik"
"isn't manik enough to kill me so why this madhubala too?oh god pls help me"thinks cabir.
"am getting bored now?"nandini said angrily.

{everyone suggested diff things to do but nandini rejects all of them.}


"listen nandini why don't u just tell us what u have already decided to do haan?why all this drama of asking us"said cabir irritatingly.
"cabir...(saying this she hug him)aww... u know me so much,waise i want to give all of u a chance to speak ur wish so thats why all this."smilingly nandini replied.
"u r too much nandu.but all ok now tell us what is ur wish?"
"thanks arti,wo na i want to have pani puri with u all,simple."
"what!!!!!!!!!"everyone exclaimed in union.
"what have i said something wrong?"everyone just stared at her.
"it is ur idea to come here na,so what happen now"asked navya.

"wo actually when we r coming here na i saw a pani puri stall n now i just cant help,want to eat them,pls na"replied nandini.
"arre its ok nandu,don't worry n guyz why we r wasting our time here,lets go there na"said arti trying to save her from everyone's dangerous looks.
"again thanks cutie,thanks for all the things u do to me,waise inke looks to dekho aisa lagra raha hai that they will kill me right now except u n manik"whispered nandini in arti's ear.
whats going on between u two?questioned cabir.
"cabir just listen to her"manik pleads to cabir.
"oh see who is pleading one who is so health conscious.isn't it weird manik?"cabir says again making him irritate.
"pls cabir..."nandini pleads to cabir making cute faces.

And he can't say no to her now so he just nods in yes.


sorry for this short one as m busy myself too.
what if u all get too read manik's diary too?give ur views on this pls.

n I want to u all to point out one good n bad thing here.

u will get to read about manan's feelings for each other through their diaries.


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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 5:05am | IP Logged
nice update
cont soon
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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Glimpse of upcoming chapter
"so that was the first time u both talked to each other"said a middle aged woman.
"umm... it was" woman in her twenties replied
"but u urself told me that u were a lively person so what happened now?why so serious look always?u still miss him?"
"no,not now,we both have moved on in our lives"
"waise going through so much in just 26 yrs of ur life n after that becoming a big name in bollywood is something weird,isn't it?
"yes I think it is,I used to think that life is in ur hand only but it is not,life sometimes gives u so much to experience"
"ok I have to leave now,will see u tomorrow n thanks for sharing ur life story to us so that we can make a movie on it."
"welcome,bur u remember that condition of not revealing that its my story"
"yes I remember"

the middle aged lady leaves saying this.


so howz it?
want to read it further?
pls share ur views

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interesting cont soon

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Lovt ... they are so cute...looking forward to the diaries...

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