DILEMMA(A NEW STORY) ch-5 on pg 5

Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 8 years ago

hello!😊

lovely people.m here to share a story of mine.By the way its my first story I have ever written.I have written many poems though.I am not well so abhi se sorry for any mistake or sorry for writing something that u can't understand. waise mera brain hila hua hai so pls spare me😉

n again sorry.

agar sorry zyada hai to return it back to me ok😆

so here it is-

she was continuously thinking what he had said to her that she is still not mature to handle relationships thats why she avoid these things

"seriously like seriously "she thought to herself.

she take out her beautifully decorated diary n started writing something

n that something is this

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sometimes people don't understand u even if they knew u from years.If u are not having a gf or bf then it doesn't mean that you are immature.It isn't my fault that everyone around me have already found their perfect one.

I am waiting for my perfect one

and will wait till he comes.

By the way why I am wasting my time here thinking about that stupid comment.

I know myself,my feelings,my desires

so there is no point to make him understand my feelings.

and why would I make him understand as he is Mr. Mental

from last 5 yrs what we are doing is fighting with each other only.

but somewhere I m happy that atleast I have one frnd who understands me,myfeelings

she is just like me but she is so shy(but why?)

arti my bestie

I love her❤️

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"nandini" someome called her.

"am coming wait for sec ok my lovely mi"she replied (she called her mom as mi)

"oh shit!"she was late for her classes.she changed in her black jeans n beautiful sleeveless white top and comes out to her living room.

"oh! so you are late again haan? waise m going to read that diary of urs"said rahul her bro.

"I will kill u then"she replied angrily.😡

"nandini aren't u getting late?"said her mom oops mi.

"yes m going,bye."she said while leaving.

"bye nandy, I wish your classes will never end"sighed her bro.

"I have heard that and will reply to it after coming back"saying that she finally left.

her mother and brother giggled listening to her.😛

How is it? pls tell me then only I'll decide to continue this.

love u all even if u don't like it

ch-1 - pg 1

ch-2- pg 2

ch 3- pg 3

glimpse of ch 4- pg 3

ch 4- pg 4

Edited by acaia - 8 years ago

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lavanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey..nice update

..continue it

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start...

The title of the story is nice tooo...dilemma..

Am waiting for the story to unfold..

Update soon...

Love,

Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you😳

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

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Posted: 8 years ago

m in dilemma...

nice start...

do continue

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Dhariya

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Posted: 8 years ago

good start

eagerly waiting for next part

Cont soon

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anika mehjaben nahin

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome start dear i loved bro-sis duo does manik n nandini already in a rltn the name is also interesting cont soon if possib pm me

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Kaju.acacia

@Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aminahin
awesome start dear i loved bro-sis duo does manik n nandini already in a rltn the name is also interesting cont soon if possib pm me

all that conv is of my bro n me thats why it is real :)

nope they aren't in relation

n that mr. mental is her classmate only

😊

u will understand after reading upcoming parts

by the way I think I m able to put u all in dilemma😆

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Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 8 years ago

HELLO ONCE AGAIN😊

So m successful in putting u all in dilemma haan?😊

I want to clear something

that mr.mental is just her classmate nothing else.

u will come to know about each n every character as story will unfold.

(have used short forms if not able to understand them then tell me ok)👍🏼

so here is nxt part

PART-2

{she reached to her class n discovered that their was no classes today as their teacher was absent}

"so what we r gonna do now"said nandini to her frnds.

"obviously wr r going home only na"replied arti making weird face.

"ooo arti we aren't going home ok.lets go to the mall na pls"

arti couldn't say no to her so she just nod

and that brings a huge smile on nandini's face.

someone was staring at them,seeing her so much happy makes him happy too.

suddenly someone comes n tapped on his shoulder.

"hey manik!so there r no classes today so we means nandy,arti,navya,we all r going to nearby mall.

so r u coming with us ?"

"yeah! cabir m in.but let me inform my mum ok."

"ok so came fast"

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MANIK'S POV

strange! m so disheartened to know that now I can't see her smiling now as classes r cancelled

and now see I m going to be with her only.

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"manik! come fast we r leaving."

"haan! aata hoon."

"Is manik coming with us?"nandini asked cabir.

"oh nahi nandy maine to sir ko bulaya hai hamare saath...nandy u need to consult ENT doc ok,maine maanik shout kiya na to manik hi aayega na"

everyone laughed listening this.

"oh shut up everyone no need to laugh on joker's comment"

"oh really nandy!"said cabir

suddenly manik comes to them

"kya hua why u all r laughing?,Is joker had said anything"asked manik.

"waah! see he is my real frnd,he knows me this much,but.wait...have u just called me joker?

if yes, then u urself is monkey"

"wait r we going to waste all r time here fighting?then we r leaving.lets go nandini,arti"said navya

"no need to leave madhubala,we r going and waise bhi someone is desperate to go,hain na manik😉?"

"sshhh... cabir stop it😡"manik replied angrily but slowly so no one can hear this.

do tell me ur views pls.

luv u even when u don't like this

❤️

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Aasha

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice...!!
Continue soon...!!

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anika mehjaben nahin

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Posted: 8 years ago

lovely update but itna chotu kyn plz nxt time badawala update dena cobt soon dear

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