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Completed ! Sadde Drabbles: Drabble a Day for May (Page 14)

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 3:54am | IP Logged
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Brilliant! You understand Randhir and Sanyukta inside out.

What makes this even better is the poetic form in which you have written!

Bravo! :D

xoxo
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Beautiful yr
Moi loved it


This one was really very different
It was very impactful



It said sandhir unsaid story
The pain they have gone through
Never got recognised for their efforts
Alwz dying for appreciation from their loved ones


Rd on one had facades his true emtns behind his rude and mcpiness
Similarily sanyu tries to be strong and determined
Bt in reality they r broken n weak


They can heal each other only


Really perfect

Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika2692001

Clap

Brilliant! You understand Randhir and Sanyukta inside out.

What makes this even better is the poetic form in which you have written!

Bravo! :D

xoxo
Amul Butter


 I know nothing.
Tukka Lag gaya!

Poetry comes to me when I am happy!

Thanks for reading babe!
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by newmoon18

Beautiful yr
Moi loved it


This one was really very different
It was very impactful



It said sandhir unsaid story
The pain they have gone through
Never got recognised for their efforts
Alwz dying for appreciation from their loved ones


Rd on one had facades his true emtns behind his rude and mcpiness
Similarily sanyu tries to be strong and determined
Bt in reality they r broken n weak


They can heal each other only


Really perfect

Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The next one is for you!

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 9:38am | IP Logged
May 22 
Title: Mother Knows best.
Pairing: Sanyukta/Randhir Dhruv/Ragini
(Plot twist: When Randhir Breaks down and open ups to Anju, little does he know that it will change everything)

Randhir holds in a gulp. He can't believe that this of all things is happening.
When Sanyukta told him her mother wanted to talk to him, Randhir went, expecting the worst.
Anju Agarwal had the same eyes as her daughter, the same shape, just darker.
And it was then that Randhir Singh Shekhawat found out where Sanyukta got her hurricane like determination from.
"You are hiding something, something is troubling you. Don't lie to me Randhir." Anju's voice was kind but firm.
No bullshitting here. This lady had all the power.
Just moments ago she was telling him about Dhruv and what a nice man he was.
Randhir could hear the unspoken warning.
Dhruv is a better man. Maybe even a better match for Sanyukta.
Lips trembling, Randhir shook his head. He had to lie. To keep Sanyukta safe. Those thug brothers of Ragini's had almost shot her.
"I am a mother Randhir. I know it when my children lie." Anju's tone was a little softer.
He felt a gentle touch on his shoulder.
"Look Randhir, whatever it is, you don't have to do this alone. You made a few mistakes in the past. I've forgiven you. Don't make me regret it by making another mistake."
Randhir's head had felt so heavy.
So heavy with the burden and the pain he was carrying.
And also, heavy with the amount of concern he heard in the older woman's voice.
Like a streched rubber band, he snapped.
He didn't know have long he had babbled, crying, coughing, Hiccuping till every painful memory and thorny burden was laid at Anju Agarwal's feet.
At some point he'd sat on the floor and cried like a child, only to feel a soft hand run through his hair.
Sanyukta was looking at him with big, teary eyes.
His body was itching to feel her arms around him.
Anju took a deep breath
"Gunde hein. Didn't it occur to you to file an FIR?"
"Uske Bhai hein"
Anju frowned " Dhamki di thi, banduk se saath. Majak nahi hai beta."
"Mein kissi ki life ke saath khelna nahi chahta" Randhir's hands were trembling.
"Beta mein tumhe Sanyu ke future ke saath bhi toh nahi khelne de sakti!" Anju wiped a tear off Sanyukta's face.
"Maa?"Sanyu's pained whisper made Randhir's heart hurt.
If only...
"Dekho Randhir, tumhare irade nek hain. Aur tum sanyukta se pyaar karte ho, wo bhi tumse pyaaar karti hein." Anju smiled "Par agar is baar tumne koi gadbad ki toh...Don't make me regret trusting you"
Randhir and Sanyukta couldn't believe their ears.
Maa was giving their relationship her blessing.
And when Anju Agarwal hugged him, he finally felt the void in his life that only a mother could fill fade away.
----------------
"I'm sorry Ragini. You know I only did as he told me." Randhir hugged Ragini.
"I..I...I can't... I know you did as he said, Silly K..Karan...Always loved me" Ragini pulled back.
Ragini's long hair had been chopped off into a sleek bobcut.
She wore formal clothes and makeup.
No one could know her now. Not even her own family.
Which was the plan.
Dr.Dhruv was to be thanked for that.
The man had interrupted with a knock on the door And Anju had told Randhir he could be trusted.
Dr. Dhruv turned out to be a man of many contacts and with the help of a few friends from the Witness Protection Ragini was now Nikita, Dhruv's fiancee.
He would take her to the US where she'd be safe.
Randhir's promise to Karan would not be broken.
Neither would his oath to keep Sanyukta Safe.
He smiled at Anju Agarwal, his eyes saying what he couldn't trust his mouth to.
Thank you Maa.

Maa.. Randhir now not only had the love of his life back, but also the love of a mother that he'd yearned for all his life.

(Who can ever resist a happy ending?)

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Omg yr this one was mind blowing
I expected sum thing else bt it tuned out to be the best


I so loved it

I can never thought of sum thing like this

Really very well said a mother knows her children bes
She comes after god


Finally rd got what he crave his whole life a mother love

Finally ragini k pata saaf
I seriously finda her annoying
I just hope shq se b uska goodbye ho jye



Rd kept his all promises

Really u nailed it


Wtng for next
Write on vidharth and namit jealousy parth will be a treat bhut rulaya h usne vids ko


Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by newmoon18

Omg yr this one was mind blowing
I expected sum thing else bt it tuned out to be the best


I so loved it

I can never thought of sum thing like this

Really very well said a mother knows her children bes
She comes after god


Finally rd got what he crave his whole life a mother love

Finally ragini k pata saaf
I seriously finda her annoying
I just hope shq se b uska goodbye ho jye



Rd kept his all promises

Really u nailed it


Wtng for next
Write on vidharth and namit jealousy parth will be a treat bhut rulaya h usne vids ko


Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
I'm glad you liked it.
I wanted to keep it simple and sweet.
DR.Dhruv is simply a easy path. Deus Ex Machina!!!


Next up will be Vidarth!
Stay tuned!
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 10:23am | IP Logged
May 23
Title: Green Eyed Monster
Pairing: Vidushi/Parth
(Occurs after Mother Knows Best. Which means Sandhir are a couple)

Parth would have laughed at the kissy faces Randhir was making at his phone.
Only if...
He gritted his teeth.
Namit was back.
That dratted idiot was stick to him like a leech, sucking out his life blood.
Aur uper se he's deaf. FITE mein mat ana ka matlab nahi janta bloody...
Woh thik hai, bachpan se hi ek number ka...
He shook his head. Namit was beyond saving, beyond understanding and definitely beyond redemption.
Aur dusri taraf Vidushi.
That girl.
No not girl, woman.
The woman who was his once upon a time.
"We broke up Parth! Get over it, you have no right to tell me what to do with my life. Just like I never had any right on you." Vidushi had yelled in his face minutes ago and stomped off, leaving him with his right arm raked in nail marks.
They were stinging, but not more than the pain in his head.
Where is she? 
What is she doing now?
Is she with him?
Parth shook his head.
No.. she wouldn't.
His hands immediatly went to his phone to press the 2.
He'd put her on speeddial. 
And then he remembered he'd smashed her phone.
"Are you jealous Parth?" She'd asked, her face mocking but her large eyes full of hope.
He'd scoffed then.
"Me, Jealous? Please. I don't give a damn."
Her face held hurt even as it twisted into a grimace.
"Good, then don't interfere in my life! You are nothing to me."
She'd walked off then, the sound of her heels felt like a slap to his face.
You are nothing to me
Nothing
Nothing.
"Are you jealous Parth?" Sanyukta had asked him as his knuckles turned white in anger, watching  Vidushi walk to Namit and be embraced.
He had his hands all over Vidushi, locked at her waist.
"No, I don't care." Parth had hissed.
Randhir had glared at Parth and pulled Sanyukta away.
"Admit it, you are jealous Parth." Randhir said at night, smirking.
"No I'm not. Namit is a bad person, she needs to stay away from him." Parth hit the punching bag so hard it flew off the wall and hit the floor with a thud.
He'd been hitting it for an hour, imagining it was Namit's face. Or his chest. or his Hands. 
He wanted to rip that basketcase's hands off as well as other appendages.
And part of him wanted to throw Vidushi into a room and lock her up.
To keep her safe.
"Are you jealous Parthu?" Namit's tone was playful, his eyes shining with cruel mirth.
"She's not your toy Namit, stay the hell away!" Parth'd grabbed his collar.
"Is she your favourite toy then Parth, still don't like to share?" Namit laughed 
"I'll kill you if you.." Parth hissed.
"You won't. You are too much of a saint, Tai Chi Baba." Namit had pulled himself out of Parth's grip and smirked "And you know what they say about good guys my hero? Good guys finish last..wait...you are not a good guy to her, not anymore. You are just her annoying ex"
Namit walked away, whistling.
Parth knew that tune.
He despised it.
Jealous
Jealous.
He was
Trying to protect her
Jealous.
He was 
Keeping her from harm.
Jealous.
And she was.
His.
She knew it.
He knew it.
He'd never admit he was jealous, he couldn't give her the satisfaction.
But not saying it didn't restrict him from showing it did it?

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