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In The Kurukshetra of Kalyug [Fan Fiction] (Page 7)

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mohiniapearl

The second chap was full to fatak Clap LOL LOL
too good ! Luved it to the core. Embarrassed The entry of Anshu and the showcase of bad gang Angry
the description of Paramita was also beautiful! Such a frank loving Mommy Smile who knew everything Himanshu's gf, Anshu's love letters and every tear Kinshuk tried to hide...awwi Cry nd she is calling Him superman, Anshu spiderman wow!! But Kinshuk batman Unhappy no didi plz. This Kinshuk is really adorable ! And his ultimate bade bhaiya nature has become my fav Smile (its only a request if possible ).
well this is becoming more exciting day by day Big smile as per your order haven't read chap 3. Hope you update soon Tongue
 
Hey dear.. You can now read chapter 3 LOL Actually Semanti PMs you.. you are not my list na.. so could not PM you.. It is actually a bit slow for us, I have to inform Semanti about it and then she reads and then she PMs her list..and I PM my list.. LOLAnyways, Thank u so much for ur appreciation dear...
And as u requested, I will change Kinshuk's name from Batman. Smile I just matched Batman superman and spiderman Tongue 

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
This story is so well plannedDay Dreaming

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angela_Grokes

This story is so well plannedDay Dreaming
Thanks Smile
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 11:25am | IP Logged
It was lovely especially the poem. You are extremely gifted. Clap
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
fantastic update 
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
first of all really sorry for late reply...Embarrassed...

Part - 1 awesome update...StarStarStar...Anshumaan is a star cricketer who made a century in his first match...ClapClapClap...He loves Priya a sweet girl who too loves him...Cool...Kinshuk is the eldest brother of Anshu who is a sincere and responsible professor...Approve...Himanshu is the second elder brother of Anshu...loved it...HeartHeartHeart...beautifully portrayed...Thumbs Up...

Part - 2 superb update...StarStarStar...U introduced Aranya, a good, well behaved friend of Anshu...Embarrassed...loved the character of Paramita his mother who is a religious lady but a very calm lady who defends her sons in everything and knows all about their secrets...ClapClapClap...I hate this Sushant and Rahul, they are planning against Anshu...Angry...Anshu returned to Kolkata and was happy to meet his brothers but was disappointed on not finding Priya with them...Ouch...

Part - 3 amazing update...Party...an unknown number saved Anshu and his brothers by calling Anshu..ClapClapClap...Anshu became emotional seeing his mother after a long time...Ouch...Priya wished Anshu but Ansu was angry on her...Ermm...Anshu's smile returned back when Priya informed him about his surprise gift which she planned to give him in the party...Wink...Anshu brought gifts for his family and for Priya...Cool...Priya surprised Anshu with her song...Blushing...loved it very much...HeartHeartHeart...

waiting 4 the next update...Day Dreaming...thank u  pm...Big smile...pls continue soon...Smile...

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Very interesting Smile
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates dear
loved them all
beautifully written!
the bromance was wonderful
Anshu-Priya.. really sweet
loved the poem!
do continu soon
Thanks for pms! 

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