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SAANS[MG FF]PART2 installment...pg 8 (Page 8)

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hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! Well written!

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Awesome update, update next part soon.
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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 5:42am | IP Logged
interesting prologue n part 1...
maneet married in childhood...
their is some 12 yr past...
will be waiting...
do pm me whenever you update...
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Waiting on next update
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PART TWO
Geet stood outside the great khurana mansion...she was standing there from past hour...as the guards were not letting her in...she tried calling at their landline...but no one was picking up the phone...and also she didn't have their personal number in which she can call...the guards were just staring at the teenager...who was standing there shivering in heavy rain...covering herself from her hands...but they couldn't do anything...as they had strict orders to not let her inside until she is told to...they were feeling helpless for that poor girl...as they couldn't help her in any way...they just hoped their boss will let he in soon...
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a lady was watching Geet from her window sipping her drink...she don't want to do this to her...but she was helpless as she have to teach her a lesson...that she can never ever match their living standard...and then she heard someone called her from behind...and that was none other than her husband...
"Ragini...tum yeh kya kar rahi...dekho us bachi ko...kaise itne tez baarish main bheeg rahi hai...are tum apne badle ke aag main itna gir jaugi...mujhe pata nahi tha...ye wo RAGINI TO NHI JISE MAINE SHAADI ki thi..."SUSHANT WAS REALLY DISAPPOINTed..he wanted to help geet at least in some way but couldn't do anything for her as he had given a promise to his wife...that he will never interfere in her matters...but Ragini kept her calm...and didn't reply him anything...as she khnew her husband can never understand her predicament...

to be  continued in a short while...do wait for it


Edited by pri.29793 - 13 June 2015 at 9:29pm

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maaneet & child marriage
interesting concept...Thumbs Up
prologe reaction: CryBroken Heart
waiting

plz add me 2 ur pm list


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itna chhota update...

loved it...

thank u very much for the lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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