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Posted: 8 years ago
yes mimi..
u should continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its osm..  Tribute 2 ParthπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
Yap, continue this but Plz don't 4get 2 continue "Who Am I" πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super cute story!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome 
all the best wishes for this story...!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank u guys...Thanks for d support...It means a lot. Many in dis forum knows dat it was a dream which brought my craziness 4 him. I m really glad dat I pen down my dreams wen I remember dem. Dat only helped me in this part.
Parth is someone who left me with a question "Who is he?" and this dream even though I had jot it down in paper, it is fresh in my memory like it happen in real. So I want to dedicate this song for him...

KE TUI BOL?



Mon amar tor kinare
  My heart is with u
Haralo din-dahare
  Had lost it in the day light
Se-to ar manche na re
  Its no more listening to me
Ebar valobashte aye..
  Now come to love me
Tor chayar songee hobo
  I will be a companion of ur shadow
DU haate prem kurobo
  Will pick up love with both my hands
Amake chupti kore
  To tell me silently
MOner kotha bolte aye
  The words of ur heart just come to me.
Ami jete pari, Heshei perote pari
  I can go, walk with a smiling face
Onek onek otol
  Too much determined
Tor kotha othey, Amar kopale jote
   When a conversation starts  about you and my face collects
Darun khushir dool
   Too much happiness 
Ke Tui BOL.. Ke Tui BOL..
   Tell me who u are?Tell me who u are?
Ke Tui BOL.. Ke Tui BOL..
   Tell me who u are?Tell me who u are?
Urte chawar ichhe hotei
  When I wished to fly
Elam kache tor..
  I came near to u
Urte boshe tui takale
  When u see it just flies out
Moneri sohor..
  It- My city of hearts
Ektu durei daakche jibon
   Life is calling me from little far
Jachhi chole tai..
   So I am going there
Vabchi toke aankchi koto
   I am thinking in which way I am drawing u
Rongin bahanay..
   In my colorful excuses..
Jodi mone vabe, Amay songee kore
   If ur heart thinks to make me ur partner to
Megher muluke chol..
   Go in the world of clouds
Tor kotha othey, Amar kopale jote
  When a conversation starts about u my face collects
Darun khushir dool
   Too much happiness 
Ke Tui BOL.. Ke Tui BOL..
  Tell me who u are?Tell me who u are?
Ke Tui BOL.. Ke Tui BOL..
  Tell me who u are?Tell me who u are?


CHAPTER-01


DO YOU SMILE AT SOME STRANGER?


 

If I have to go in my past I have to go right to the start. Start... the first phase how Parth came alive in my senses.

It was much back before his show Kaisi yeh yaariyaan came on screens. One month back from the moment I spotted Kaisi yeh Yaariyaan's promo.

 

I opened my eyes just to find an unknown pair of eyes staring at me.

Where the hell am I?

I was gawking at the view in front of me. How much I could catch, I was only aware that I was standing in some highway.

 

The road in front of me was large, green on both the sides showing the concern of the people towards our environment yet claiming it as only the gift of nature. So neat yet so puzzled!

 

I picked my eyes and found the whether was not at all friendly rather quite alarming.

 

Man! Why am I not in my own house? What am I doing standing on an unknown Highway that too in such an unwanted whether?

 

I panicked in the thought of being in open. I need to find a shelter. Shelter yes! To save myself from the upcoming storm. The lightning in the southern sky was giving me goose bumps.

 

"Oh my God!" just slipped out of my tongue unknowingly.

What the hell am I doing here?

"Hey..." someone said softly and stroked my left cheek.

 

I slightly turned towards left to see the owner of the voice when I saw a broad chest. A guy in black vest was looking at me. I pushed my head backwards to see his face straight. He smiled and I felt my world stopped there in that moment. It's all about feelings and emotions when you feel time stops.

 

Well I am a very practical person and I had never felt that looking at my nearby fresh flesh and blood.

 

Actually, I don't know this guy at all. I had never seen him before this moment so I avoided him for some time. And now he called me, this stranger do feel someone very near and dear one to me. He felt so own, so right to see him smile. Now I feel it's really very hard to jot it down, the feelings of that moment, the peace when he entangled his fingers with mine and guided the endless path, as my eyes could not find the end line of the road. I can just only sing Justin Bieber's You smile I smile now for that moment.

 

I smiled at him, my mind shouted you don't know him and my heart shouted whoever let him be for now don't loose the opportunity to smile back at him.

Well I seriously don't know whether my heart or mind but I know there were exactly two voices inside me and they were mine. I listened to the second one.

I looked at him panickingly. The guy was so tall that I had to constantly bend my head backwards to look at him.

He squeezed my left hand assuring me that we will be safe and my heart skipped a beat or my breathing process stopped for some nano seconds, maybe. I was literally with a stranger and yet I was feeling secured.

He smiled again making me gape at him like a fool. And we started walking on a path of which I can see no end just the last which I can see is the horizon joining the sky and breadth of the road.

 

For every single moment, I felt the same eternal feeling which I never felt any day before this. I felt alive with this unknown guy.

 

And suddenly the next moment when I blink my eyes, they opened to see a semi-dark ceiling where the ceiling fan was rotating at its own speed and motion. It didn't took me long to realize that I was lying on my bed I checked my cell which was kept near my pillow, it revealed it was approximately four in the morning. And I was dreaming, dreaming an unknown guy almost contradicting my mom's words that we dream what we do the whole day.

I immediately left my bed empty and sat on my study table to pen down my dream and after finishing it I realized that I don't know the guy whom I saw in my dream.

 

"Who was he?" this question started roaming inside my head and like always my brain started to collect theories on this question along with a supplementary one that is "Why I saw him?"


 Mimi



Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Owww...U really saw it in dreams??? πŸ₯±
Howevr,Nce update
N Update both "Who Am I" n

" I Love You Virtually" ASAp 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome ...Plsss update daily...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
congo for new story
its awesme
evryone lve parth plz continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: D_mi_cheeky_me.



well 2 understand u guys hav 2 stay tuned. It is related 2 KYY...


You only said in the note that there is no Manik and Nandini, I thought you writing about other characters not in KY2

But after reading the first post, now I get what you meant by no MaNan :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice story. Thanks for the PM>