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cutie15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by cutie15

Yeahh u updated..:)
Mind blowing update..
I dont know why are u not happy wid zoya's past.. but this was something so so emotional..
I got goosebumps reading this..
zoya has suffered so much..! Loved how asad took care of her..nd told her to be there always..
awesome update..
plz plz update soon the next ond nd do pm me.. I didnt received pm for this nd the previous one..:(

Hi Cutiee,

My very excited reader!Smile

Thank you so muchdarling.. I'm glad you liked it.
Yep, not happy with how it came out, I had a lot more planned , more impact full but never got the time to write it all down.. so yeah.. not how I planned it.

Arrey but I always send every one PM's ..ConfusedI don't know what's happening.. many of you guys are complaining in not receiving PM'S.

Anywhoo, I'll make send you a PM alag se next time. dwEmbarrassed

eeep.. thank u soo much.. Embarrassed
will be waiting. . Smile

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radadolcevida Goldie

Joined: 28 December 2013
Posts: 2029

Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:06am | IP Logged
res soon Tongue

Hi chandni (i hope you don't mind to call by your name Big smile) , so sorry for not replying on your story, I used to click on like button but I didn't get time to stay and to write properly. And you know me I didn't want to write just a few words about your story. I wouldn't be fair with you and the story too. After so long, i get the time to comment finally Big smile.
Anyway, i missed two chapters and I must say that you developp a lot about their past and it was needed for the story. Those last chapters bring them closer emotionnally and we can appreciate your skills in writing about emotion and drama in the two last chapters.
Asad's past was really painful but waht to say about Zoya, it was harder I must say. Both saw horrible thing at their young ages. When the love turned to be fake relation (for Asad) and when love turned to be poison (for Zoya). We can perfectly now understand why both choose not to be with someone, at the end, we are always scared to do the same mistake as our parents. Genetic we can say Confused, but emotion are not transmitted like this, anyway emotions has more impact in our heart than genetic.
I really love those last chapters, because it was all about human and how they stood for each other, holding, talking and sharing their pain, as much as their past was painfull to read, as much as I appreciate their bond, it was really beautifully penned. Asad and Zoya was not only making a baby but they are educating their heart to fall in love and to trust another person, which is always hard to do in this life. And this travel was perfectly written.
Asad's last question was important but Zoya's reaction make me scared, what she was hidding more?  I am really curious to know her motivation. And for a change, i have no clue about, maybe she don't want to be alone, even if she choose to live alone to be safe. Having baby can be selfish act in her case, but no one can blame a women to embrace a motherhood, it' s important for any women. Well, I will wait to read your next chapter, dear.
And as usual, beautiful and well written part.
Continue soon Big smile
PS: sorry again for being late, but I spent crazy weeks, but now i am fine and I am back in sha Allah

Edited by radadolcevida - 23 July 2015 at 6:14am

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Chandnii. Goldie

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asifiqbalsh

Very emotional update
Zoya past was hurtful. She shared that with asad & he hold her. Hope they will open with their reservations & confess what they feel for other. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Hey asif,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the update! 

Np! Smile
Chandnii. Goldie

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Posts: 2239

Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Mona darling wonderful partClapClap
thoda zyada emotional tha agreed
Zoya's past was really horrifying I understand now why she is reluctant 2 embrace love even if she may feel it 4 Asad.Cry
But it was really unfortunate as well a sweet loving family got destroyed just bcuz of doubtOuch
I don't get it why her mother always used 2 smile & bear his every abuse was is it bcuz what he doubted was true or she felt their love will change things soon or just 2 keep Zoya away from their dark side.Confused
D way she broe down telling d tale & Asad was their 2 support her was fantastically penned.Clap
It ended again on a cliffy now what's Zoya's reason 2 have a baby I also want 2 know EmbarrassedWink so 4 that updt soon Mona darling cuz I m impatient insaan.LOL
Love of love hugs again 4 a sincere effortHug
PS- itni late lateefi har baar nahi chalegi updt next part soonWinkLOL

Hi Jas! 

Thank you so much, That's so sweet of you! Glad you enjoyed it! Big smile

Yeah, I wanted to get into the details of that but fir time nahi mila itna lamba update likhne ka..
Her mother wasn't cheating, it was just her father was losing his shit and overreacted to anything, basically a drunkard... they don't know what is happening around them, they're drunk 24/7. And Zoya's mom was only trying to get him to understand her by apologizing and not arguing with him, when she knew things got out of hand. But there isn't much you can do with a man who is under the influence of drugs. And she was alone with a daughter who she too had to take care of, plus she never knew it would get so bad for real. so anyway.

I wish I could think soon, penstuff down quickly and basically get the time. toh main pakka jaldi jaldi updates deti.. I too am a reader, I know wait karna kitna difficult kaam ho jata hai.OuchLOL

And yes, I am thinking of adding some twist, abh tak decide nahi kiya hai lekin.Evil SmileLOL

Aww! Thanks love! Hug
Chandnii. Goldie

Joined: 11 December 2013
Posts: 2239

Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Persiko


madam hum kumzor dil ke hai...

Itna rulaya na karo Hume...

An plz next update me Kuch galat na ho

Hhahaa.. Afraa! 

I hope you're getting a better grip of why things are the way they are ? !Smile

I'm not sure lekin shayad thoda aur rona dhona hoyega
Chandnii. Goldie

Joined: 11 December 2013
Posts: 2239

Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac


is baar bhi pehla like and ist spot meraDancingParty
pichli baar tune pm ni kiya ni to aaj meri head trick ho jaati naSleepy

this was so painful to read yaarCry
such emotional things u can write so well
to pehle to uske liye thumbs upThumbs Up
then came the horrible past
and how much she'd seen and gone thruOuch
but still itni acchi insaan bani wo to kabiliyat taarifClap
i liked it when asad patiently supported her
just hope dono ke beech aage koi problem naa ho
kyuki the point u left us is making me worried yaar
kuch to he ...
i want to know more
pls continue asap
yar how can u end there???Angry
i want update
pls chandnii
pretty plsEmbarrassed

Aww, Surbhi .. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Big smileEmbarrassed
It's a bit difficult to write such emotional and sad stuff.

Hhaha.. you guessed it right... I'm planning on a little twist maybe... lets see.. ! Evil Smile

Update will come only after I have thought of what next  to write and when I get some time to write! 


*Goes and hides*

m happy ur gladLOLWink
yeah i understand its tought o write those sad ones
being a writer myself m running a story where the horrible past revolvesSleepy
haww!!!!!...now m becoming hell curious to what this devilish mind of urs is planningStarStarStar
okay write when u feel like
as a reader i have to wait i guessTongue

Haa! See, some one understands how it gets difficult to write some times.. and things get delayed then! EmbarrassedLOL

I'd love to read your story! Hopefully soon,Smile
Even I don't know re.. Maybe temporary seperation! LOL or permanent perhaps! LOL

Sochungi fir likhungi..

Aade logo ko shayad shamja bhi nahi end ka part. That there maybe some twist, so koi reactions mile nahi ke dont put a twist or put one so yes, I'll see kya karna hai! EmbarrassedLOL

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Chandnii. Goldie

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Posts: 2239

Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ABI-

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by -ABI-



Pretty update kya hota hai ?ConfusedLOL

Anywhoo, thank  you, glad you liked it ! Smile

Aww Abi,
sorry .. maine galat padha..LOL

you found the update pretty interesting! Smile

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Chandnii. Goldie

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

res soon Tongue

Rada, where have you been ?

Gayab hi ho gayi thi .

Hope you're doing well?

And unres when you get the time. it's okay! Smile

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