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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 43)

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Posted: 10 June 2015 at 2:55am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Mine Big smile

Unres Embarrassed


OK. I know I am a slow writer and even a slower reader. But itna slow bhi nahin that it would take me 2 hours to read that. Am telling you Mona, zaalim zamana dushman humara TongueLOLEveryone... EVERYONE! had something or the other to discuss with me tonight. N then, hubby dearest came back early from work n took my tab wanting to do office work Confused why did he even come back early was beyond me Angry

Hahahha.. It's absolutely fine, Chocs. .. I understand! LOLSmile You still find the time to stalk and catch your spot! EmbarrassedCool

Anyways. I read the update And definitely loved it. This is not just a deal anymore am telling you. Its become much more from the time they have started sharing those kisses Blushing. Am now only waiting to see who realises first and who confesses first. 

Thank you  darling Choco! Heart I wish I could keep it this simple and make them see right away why it shouldn't be a deal but more ! Confused

Loved it completely my sweetheart. Waiting for the next part already Embarrassed

I haven't even thought about writing the next part! OuchLOL

Probably after you post a couple chapters of your story! Embarrassed

Love you ! Hug
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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

Mine ;)
lol aaj me har ek ka thread stalk kar rahi hu
i hit the 1st like
unres
wow!!!
its just wow how a writer like u can write the same thing with 2 different person's prespectiveClap
great job


Hey Surbhi,

Haha..

Aww, thank you so much, darling! Hug

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajanshul

It's amazing

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ABI-

Well Similar to previous one
but
was on Zoya's pov
so,
I still it

Hey Abi,

Had to put in Zoya's point of view too! 

Thank you so much ..
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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by life4me

Wonderful update. Please continue soon.

Hey,

Thank you so much ! Smile
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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

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unres, 
First, this chapter was mindblowing, exceptionnel, wonderful, brilliant and stratospheric and I can add more and more adjective to describe this one and it won't be enough.
I know you will say that I am exagerated a bit, but NOT-AT-ALL. First, because it was unexpected and second, because I didn't expected this kind of chapter and third, because this is what I love the most in stories: emotions. 
You write, no... You painted such an amazing chapter, full of emotion, showing Zoya's inner battle between her mind and heart. And this is what I like to read and to write about.
Zoya's pov was really really beautiful, heartouching, you show so many shades of her: hesitation, confusion, clumsiness, confidence, even her love. This chapter is a delicacy and you describes very well  the up and down in her heart, in her body and in her head. You didn't miss any part.
You gave me as a reader a beautiful travel throught all this different and mysterious compartment, heart, body and soul. You merged perfectly all of them, and because I am a girl, this chapter touched me more because I went throught all this battle in my life. Not in the same situation, but I can understand how it works, this non-stop battle between close partner but yet so far when feelings came in between. I feel like emotion was acting like a beautiful girl and the heart-body-soul were 3 youngs boys fighting for her LOL (I know I am crazy Sillyand I assume).
I will finish with one word to describe your chapter, even if I know it will not make justice to how I feel after reading this. It is just P-E-R-F-E-C-T. You don't need to change any word in it, because the emotions that escaped from your chapter was in the right place. It was not only intense between character but the chapter was full of it.
Beautifull and well written piece. I am so glad that I came to your story.
I am in love with this chapter. Totally 




Hi Rada, hope you're doing fine now?! 

Aww! Thank you so so much, Rada! You really are way too kind with your words. Puts a big big smile on my face! Big smileEmbarrassed

Yea, I thought I needed to add in every aspect of the changes she felt and all that she was going through..

We can relate to it more while reading if we've been through a similar situation. 

Haha, no no.. not crazy.. I liked your heart -body-soul comment! LOL

Again, thanks a bunch, Rada. I've read and re- read and then again read your comment. It's so sweet of you to take out time and write in detail how you felt about the chapter! HugBig smile

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asifiqbalsh

Zoya PoV was awesome
Both thought the same & then ignore it.
Hope they will realise what that attraction is. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Hey asif,

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it! Big smile

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