Originally posted by: Crazzyasyafan
Read the 2 parts in one go
nice piece of workso deal is sealedBut wating for the project to start
Originally posted by: Crazzyasyafan
Read the 2 parts in one go
nice piece of workso deal is sealedBut wating for the project to start
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Hahahaha π. No problem, use it as much as you can π ~~~ Fully intend to ! π³π "Choco Meri Jaan'Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback. Yea safely said π. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride ππΌ ~~ π² I absolutely loved that story! It was needed for her to cry so much! π But yes, Thankyou so much di , Your words mean a lot! β€οΈAnd trust me, you are an amazing writer π ~~~ If you say soπ³ [Modesty is soo my thing!π€£]But seriously .. Aap se learning! Reading and learning. Still to get there! πMwah π€ Mwahh Mwahh ! π€
Originally posted by: radadolcevida
sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine.however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent.
Mona darling how r u?π Jassy , Mast hu main. Tu bata ?π
sorry 4 d late comnt No problem ! Till the time it comes.πbut i just loved d updtit was super se bhi uparπ Aww. Thankyou so much ! Glad you loved it ! ππ³it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally differentπ³ othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & Tehzeebπ Oh! They're totally different from those shown in the serial! πso AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long timeπ³but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelings1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather π. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid Asadπ²ππthey want each other but don't want strings attached??They've their own reasons for not getting involved with each other or anyone for that matter.Yes, they've been attracted to each other from the beginning but never acted upon it because of their reasons![you'll know in the further updates as to why..]1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herselfboth r excited & looking forward 2 d process of making a babyπ€£ but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.πYes, Her thinking is very progressive yet somewhere she is kind of reserved,youll know soon. and she doesn't want to adopt because she wants a child of her own. Being sodern doesnt mean you donot want to have babies?!!! ππ kuch bhi haa Jaz ! π₯±πAnd i know thoda confusing lagega jab tak full story I don't put up. Sorry, but you just got deal with the confusion! π Ask questions, I'll answer w/o revealing the aage ka story if i can! πbut anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happilyπ & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining himπ& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactionsπHhahahah.. Thankyou Jassy. I'm glad you liked it ! πwho says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darlingπ wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya meneπ€£ ~~~ Hahahaha.. And I must add I love your tagline ! πππDekh maine tere andar ke writer ko jagah diya hai. Abh tu bhi likhna start kar ! πLove uTake careSee uπHahahah.. Come see me , Love you too ! xPS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SSπ²π‘ it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.π It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby makingπ€£ omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. π not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past rememberππ Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plzHahahhaa.. π€£Okay, khush hoja, I'll have to convert this into a FS or a SS!Yes, likhan toh zaroor hai, but bahut difficult hai mere liye waise likhna.. leme see and try ! Aur tujhe pata hai na, woh sab stories convert toh kar di maine to FS, lekin aage hold par chalegi ! π³π Hopefully yeh complete kar pau main.& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mindπHahahha.. Jab time milta hai likhna tab hi aati hu main! π
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
@ radadolcevida most welcome to hop on anytime π€ ~~~ Agreeed !Mona, see I told you π π ~~~~ Yes, You're amazing, you know ?!!!!! πβ€οΈ
Oh wow what a deal
I would definitely put one like tht on the table with tht sexy manBut they sure this deal can just be platonicBcuz they both have some serious sexual tensionThey have feelings they r denyingOh good asad definitely seal the dealZoya want an all week thing not a one night thingLove it continue
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
OMG π². Learning from Me βΊοΈ. Now I feel like hiding my face, sharam aa gai mujhe βΊοΈπ€β€οΈ
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