New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 46

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anopama

@anopama

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice update

Very emotional

Wow Zoya pass what can I say horrific

I can't depict whose pass is more bad

Zoya is so broken and damaged from tht

But still she wants a baby and asad want to know why too

Guess she want to share love but she saw how love destroy her parents

And tht is y she don't want love and a relationship

Aww how asad try to comfort her

He tells she is fixed she is perfect

Aww main hoon na hope he stand by his words

Continue soon

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Yeahh u updated..:)
Mind blowing update..
I dont know why are u not happy wid zoya's past.. but this was something so so emotional..
I got goosebumps reading this..
zoya has suffered so much..! Loved how asad took care of her..nd told her to be there always..
awesome update..
plz plz update soon the next ond nd do pm me.. I didnt received pm for this nd the previous one..:(

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Very Well written and emotional part chandinii..
Zoya's past was really horrible...i mean for a little girl to witness that and then to become a person she is truly applauding.
I just hope it doesn't turn in the wrong way now...whatever AsYa shared...
Interesting update.
Continue soonish.

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful...meaningful chapter...

Zoya's past was horrifying... But like the way asad try to support her...

What asad said is only what he felt...

What could be the answer of asad's question...?

Plzzz...update soon...

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ayat

@ayat20

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Felt bad for zoya...

Hope asad always stands for zoya n never leaves her

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don girls

@don girls

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting
Zoya past was dark and sad emotional type

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sonia

@sdusa06

Newbie

Posted: 8 years ago

it was well written update..👏
it was very emotional update ...made me really sad 😔😭
I really liked the fact that asad and zoya are trying to share each other harsh painful ugly past...which would bring them more close to each other and have a better understanding.
The most adorable moment was asad trying to support zoya and light her mood 😳
The end was not expected because the way it is left with the question ...it is giving worry feeling as to know what will happen next...
Can't wait to for the next chapter. plz update soon. 😊😛

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very emotional update
Zoya past was hurtful. She shared that with asad & he hold her. Hope they will open with their reservations & confess what they feel for other. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Mona darling wonderful part👏👏

thoda zyada emotional tha agreed

Zoya's past was really horrifying I understand now why she is reluctant 2 embrace love even if she may feel it 4 Asad.😭

But it was really unfortunate as well a sweet loving family got destroyed just bcuz of doubt

I don't get it why her mother always used 2 smile & bear his every abuse was is it bcuz what he doubted was true or she felt their love will change things soon or just 2 keep Zoya away from their dark side.😕

D way she broe down telling d tale & Asad was their 2 support her was fantastically penned.👏

It ended again on a cliffy now what's Zoya's reason 2 have a baby I also want 2 know 😳😉 so 4 that updt soon Mona darling cuz I m impatient insaan.😆

Love of love hugs again 4 a sincere effort🤗

PS- itni late lateefi har baar nahi chalegi updt next part soon😉😆

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
mine

yay!!!!
is baar bhi pehla like and ist spot mera🥳
pichli baar tune pm ni kiya ni to aaj meri head trick ho jaati na🥱

unres
this was so painful to read yaar😭
such emotional things u can write so well
to pehle to uske liye thumbs up👍🏼
then came the horrible past
and how much she'd seen and gone thru
but still itni acchi insaan bani wo to kabiliyat taarif👏
i liked it when asad patiently supported her
just hope dono ke beech aage koi problem naa ho
kyuki the point u left us is making me worried yaar
kuch to he ...
i want to know more
pls continue asap
yar how can u end there???😡
i want update
pls chandnii
pretty pls😳

Aww, Surbhi .. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! 😃😳

It's a bit difficult to write such emotional and sad stuff.

Hhaha.. you guessed it right... I'm planning on a little twist maybe... lets see.. ! 😈

Update will come only after I have thought of what next to write and when I get some time to write!

😳

*Goes and hides*

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