Originally posted by: jas91resπunresok here I m wid my super late comntπ³π³both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV1st it was Asad'sit stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's trueπearlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreedππGharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khanππhis monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nicetrue both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admitπthey felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KVπ³their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 readSoon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops readππboth shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each otherD love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b thereππΌnxt came Zoys's POVshe was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra nightπshe kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 laterπ³πZoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliyeπ³πShe was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of himAll his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart β€οΈshe feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.ππHahaha.. Hi Jassy! π³Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?I missed you so mch. :(Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! ππI think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!πππMona darling Fantastic piece of work ππAww! Thank you Janemann! :*I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as wellYeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! π΅Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likhoπLove u sweetuTake care alwaysπ€Love you too , babydoll!You too! π€P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!βοΈMwah! x
Originally posted by: cutie15
Whattt..???? Nooo π€’
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..
Originally posted by: jas91
Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujheπ‘π‘Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! π€’π€’π€£yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kyaHahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)aur hume wait karke stane ke liyeππupar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! π€Maarungi teko! π³Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! π³π
Originally posted by: shailu123no yaar π π π continue this
Originally posted by: mona12345
Hahaha,,Hi Cutie,you guys sure are lovley people!πYeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,
Originally posted by: mona12345
Oye I will keep giving my lovely comnts bus tu likti reh tabhi toh main comnt de paungi na. Take care muwaahπ€
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