Originally posted by: ChocoBerryAbsolutely rocking update Mona.
OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting π. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal π as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married.Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bπLoved it dear its just so so awesome πππΌLove you so so much dear π€Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us πChocoo Merii Jaaann !! β€οΈ [ haha..snatching your line] πThat^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so so much ! ππ³Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughππ³AnywayπI'm just so so glad you liked it ! π€β€οΈLove you so much and more choco di ! βοΈMwaah ! x
Originally posted by: PrettYSmileSoo damn interesting...
Seriously uneeeq one ...
U HAVE TO UPDATE SOON...TUMHE ASYA KI KASAM;)...:)...:D
Originally posted by: kobebAwesome update pls continue soon! :)
Originally posted by: mona12345
Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! β€οΈ [ haha..snatching your line] πThat^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so so much ! ππ³Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughππ³AnywayπI'm just so so glad you liked it ! π€β€οΈLove you so much and more choco di ! βοΈMwaah ! x
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Hahahaha π. No problem, use it as much as you can πSweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback. Yea safely said π. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride ππΌAnd trust me, you are an amazing writer πMwah π€
Originally posted by: radadolcevidaI came across your story and I read both of the chapter. I must , woow, I really love it. π
everything was really good, the idea, the writting, even the deal π³Interesting to see that both were attracked to each other but acted only professionnal way. I really love her audacity and Asad's naughtiness.it's just sad that it's only TS, we would have enjoy their "fake" honeymoon or should I say that week to fall on love πBrillant story and brillant idea, I really love. I hope you will update soon, can't wait to see how they will take the next step now.
Originally posted by: fatima30This is written so so well! I love it!
A very very interesting story cannot wait to read on!
Asya want each other so badly...they'll break the deal pretty soon! lol
Update soon
Originally posted by: cutie15This is jusr so amazing..!!!
Loved it .
this is very exciting. ..
looking forward to the next update. .
update soon plss..!!
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