SS-We Are Family 2 :Thread 4:Last Part/Pg 71, Epilogue/Pg 77 : 31 May - Page 55

Part 22






Edited by kkmouli - 8 years ago

Epilogue

I enjoyed reading this story very much.Will miss this story and Mansi badly 😭 I loved the way Mansi teamed up with Maan and irritated Geet.she is such a adorable cute naughty kid.Now her twin brothers have also joined her team.Finally Maan got his happy family.very beautifully written 👏 👏 Mansi's cute antics and her moments were very beautifully written through out the story which always made me smile 😛 Thanks for giving up such an amazing story 😛 Edited by snowgud - 8 years ago

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I know this story has been finished but still I could not comment on last three parts..

So here i am as I have promised you to comment on each and every part..😊

Part 20

This is something which I did not expect..

I have seen people blaming Geet for causing pain to Maan and I remember saying that I will not blame Geet until you disclose the actual reason..

Now when I got to know the reason I dont know what to say..

I seriously thought there would be much more to it.. So I am slightly disappointed..

Sorry this not to blame you or make you upset..

I hope you want a genuine feedback rather than someone saying The update is nice..

I always felt bad for Geet thinking what she must be going through..

But this update has completely one hundred percent taken my heart for MAan..

He was sooo angry that he even called his Grand father with his name which he never ever did before.. 

That shows how much of anguish he is hiding within him..

He is utterly broken with Geet signing the papers..

At one point while reading even I felt that Geet would tear the papers..

But the moment she signed the papers it didnot take me a minute to think that her fear is much more strong than her love for MAan..

And when Maan said the same thing I almost felt like crying.

Finally he said about Rajveer being dead and Geet is confused with that..

Seriously if later Geet realizes her mistake which I think she did by now and then if she knows what she has lost still I would be sooo happy with Maneet unison but not completely..

But then that is what love is!! Right!! Loving and Accepting each other with their flaws..

I dont know what to say about Geet..

I want to scream at her, curse her, blame her for doing this to Maan but at the same time I can understand her fear and her fear filled love which made her take this step that makes me pity her..

Maan is completely broken now he left the mansion(Okay I have read the remaining parts but I am going to write as if I am reading it the first time.. hope you wont mind)

I know he cannot leave his family and go away like that.. May be he needs time to calm his mind but what I am curious about is how will Geet mend her broken relationship..

And where is Maansi..

This is one more thought I had while reading this update..

What is she going to do?!

Surely Maansi has bigger hand in getting Maneet together before I hope she does the same now even..

Loved your comment... gosh this is wat i accept from my readers.. a healthy and good criticism and thank god i have one of my reader like you coz this will help me improve...

and as per geet's reason.. i wanted it to be simple coz every time we show something big.. so this time her unreasonable fear without knowing the truth was my target

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Epilogue

 Maneet on a holiday with their kids and having fun time..

Finally the end of WE ARE FAMILY has come..😭

Dont know what else I can say..

Seriously loved it immensely..

I love your work dear the way you bring the emotions out with simple words..

I never came across any huge words or complicated sentences..

But then those mere words has the power to touch our hearts..

I am not exaggerating thinga but this is what I felt reading this story..

It truly touched my heart..

The story is very simple but the way you portrayed the emotions and feelings of each and every charecter..👏

I like each and every charecter of this story.. Everyone had a role to play in this story than a mere charecter to fill the space..

Sorry if I could not appreciate their role in my comments but what i said above is true..

Finally All the Best for your future stories and I give your readers another beautiful piece of work..

I thoroughly enjoyed this one..😃

Omg.. u know wat u make me fall in love with ur comments coz i just love the way u say something good as well as something tat will help me improve more..

@sdlife19

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Loved your comment... gosh this is wat i accept from my readers.. a healthy and good criticism and thank god i have one of my reader like you coz this will help me improve...

and as per geet's reason.. i wanted it to be simple coz every time we show something big.. so this time her unreasonable fear without knowing the truth was my target

Okie.. today i have broken record in finishing my meal..  😛😆
Edited by kkmouli - 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by-kkmouli

Okie.. today i have broken record in finishing my meal..  😛😆

Thank you dear for not getting upset because i was really scared thinking u might get upset..

Its my pleasure if i could help u out in any way possible..😃

i know comments hav the power to improve or even spoil writer's imagination and writing..

you are always a good writer dear and i seriously dont understand how could u simply shake our hearts with simple words.. that is the main thing which attracted me to ur stories.. i can never get tired of saying this..😃

Coming to geet's fear i understood what u wanna show.. 

finally i understood onething.. this ff is completely totally qbout maan's love..

him blackmailing geet and getting married just to stqy close to her bt not accepting maansi just bcoz he thought she is rajveer's child.. then causing pqin to geet just to nt shw his weakness his love to her.. repenting after knowing truth that he couldnt stay beside her wen she is facing verythng alone.. giving all d happiness after knowing truth.. then again got shattered when geet left him once again still easily forgiving her simply because he loves her..

The complete ff is about Maan's true love for geet.. here i am nt saying geet's love is nt true bt definetly nt strong as maan's love..

so even though i hav issues with geet's reasoning bt now i am OK as anth bhala toh sab bhala..😉😆

OMG... You know in both my We Are Family 1 and 2 no one actually got the main concept of the story... It was a part family story but the main concept was about Maan's love.. his selfless love and his struggles to have geet closer and love her by either showing anger or something else and hats of dear.. I mean u are a genius for me coz you are the first person to get deeper into my story and know the real about WRF and I cant just say how much happy I'm coz this is the biggest honor a writer can have where the reader goes deep into the story..

and Yes.. i do encourage criticism but not something tat is beyond and specially criticism when some readers compare a fiction to real life and argue and the way u analyze the updates i just love it... and i would love to have this from you for all my stories even if if means u are late in commenting but i will wait for tat...

And about simple language.. I  just want to make the story simple.. And tats the reason i use both English and Hindi coz at times we cant express  better in English so its a must to use Hindi for me to get the right emotions...

And one request if you ever have time and have a blog account i would love you to read my First Paranormal Story on Werewolf.. I hope u do consider this request from me coz i would love someone like you to read and tell me where how I'm going with a tats story..


And i hope u have eaten well for dinner 😛
Thank u dear😛
Edited by sdlife19 - 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by-sdlife19

OMG... You know in both my We Are Family 1 and 2 no one actually got the main concept of the story... It was a part family story but the main concept was about Maan's love.. his selfless love and his struggles to have geet closer and love her by either showing anger or something else and hats of dear.. I mean u are a genius for me coz you are the first person to get deeper into my story and know the real about WRF and I cant just say how much happy I'm coz this is the biggest honor a writer can have where the reader goes deep into the story..

and Yes.. i do encourage criticism but not something tat is beyond and specially criticism when some readers compare a fiction to real life and argue and the way u analyze the updates i just love it... and i would love to have this from you for all my stories even if if means u are late in commenting but i will wait for tat...

And about simple language.. I  just want to make the story simple.. And tats the reason i use both English and Hindi coz at times we cant express  better in English so its a must to use Hindi for me to get the right emotions...

And one request if you ever have time and have a blog account i would love you to read my First Paranormal Story on Werewolf.. I hope u do consider this request from me coz i would love someone like you to read and tell me where how I'm going with a tats story..


And i hope u have eaten well for dinner 😛
Thank u dear😛

Edited by kkmouli - 8 years ago

Awesome chapters !