Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice..

Continue soon..

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Julie

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Posted: 8 years ago

what a beautiful story. I do not think you have offended anyone. In fact you have brought an important topic to light.

I do not even know where to begin. Madhu and Trishna's friendship is beautiful. From the beginning their relationship was about accepting each other and giving the other strength.

Madhu lost her eyesight and Trishna lost her father and brother. Two people who became everything to each other.

RK's behaviour is understandable to me now. His shock, his loss is so painful.

Though RK & Madhu are strangers to each other, they already have a bond between them. Hopefully with time and patience, that bond will get stronger.

I am looking forward to the next part.

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candle_light

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

nice concept
beautifully written 😊
waiting for the next part cont soon 😊
i have a great desire to learn braille since years but cant able to learn as there is no such instutions near us
😔

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harshu...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow !!! Awsm story ,
interesting start ,
I luvveed the topic very much ,
Nd nice charactersketch ,
Rk is a doctor nd madhu a teacher ,
haiye !!! rishbala's hug in rain ,
Madhu nd trishna ws best friend
nd trishna asked rk to give her eyes to madhu .
nd rk did the opreation ,
me thinking how madhu killed trishna ????
waiting for the next part ,,
keep writing nd keep rocking ;)

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Swati

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Awww...😭😭
Naa kasta pattu oru emotional subject ah vachi story eludhu na nee comedy panra?? Aww...😭😭😆
Boss unga mulai ye mula... Epadi neenga plot ah guess pannenga?? Naa apadiye shock agiten... Yes...rk will not accept madhu's love... He will say he could see her sister in her eyes lol... 😆😆 neenga sonna maathiri kannu matum dhan un thangachi dhu mathadhu ellam enadhu dhanu open ah sollala naalum oru mathri solli rk va accept panna vachiduven... I will make madhu tell...rk when u do romance i ll close my eyes in pleasure so no issuse just touch me baby..😆😆
Enakum serious ah stories eludha theriyadhu...adhu unaku theriyum... But i really want to write a message conveying story so wrote this one...
Glad u liked it...thanks dear...
Next part will be a bit more emotional i guess but with a happy ending... So enjoy...
Hehe... Nee sonnadhuku aapuram dhan enake thonuchu andha scene nee varuvaayana padadhu scene madhiri irukunu Lol...
Loved ur crazy funny comment...
Thanks dear...

Sudha, when i read this story, same thought had crossed my mind😆
Anyway Nice concept! Beautiful write-up! Principal Bittuji & teacher Madhu, Uncle bittuji & niece madhu's bonding... Madhu & Trishna's true friendship... RK & Trishna's bonding... Madhu's guilt... RK's feeling of attachment with madhu... everything is brilliantly written!
Waiting for the next part! Thanks for pm me!

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HappySoul-4va

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Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

again I got logged into MB forum and saw ur TS..gal...this is truly beautiful...

so the AAnkhen thing...i am waitign for the mystery to unfold...

Thank you for this TS sweety..means alot

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful story

Rk staring at Madhu

The reason is his sister's eyes

It's so touching

He loved his sister but he explaining how

He done his duty and attended her funeral

Why is Madhu blaming herself for Trishna's

death

Trishna donating her organs and the eyes to

her best friend

Amazing story line and characters

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tavamm

@tavamm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Mind blowing ts...sudha!
loved d concept! !
Waiting to know wat md did to trish?
and feel sad...more blind ppl in india(thanks for the infor).
thanks for the pm
looking forward to the next update.

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jalebi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Interesting story.
Loved the choice of topic and highlighting the importance of eye donation.
Waiting to know the backstory.

Thank u so much dear...

Glad u loved it...

Lets make a change by creating awareness ...

U will get to know the back stoey in next part which will be the final part too...

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkajol
Interesting story...
Nd also interesting character sketch...
Thanks for d pm dear...

Thanks dear...

Welcome

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