ISHRA SS: Katra-Katra (Horror) - Page 8

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by vidya_prasad


Wow...Pallavi di
Loved it totally
you managed to keep us in suspense through out the story

At first when Raman called up Shagun - I was shocked.Kya kar raha hai Raman
Through out when he was acting - I was like raman calm down babay woh iske laayak nahi hai.Don't do that
The way raman acted in front of shagun and exposed her...too good
so ishita wanted to make raman realize she wasn't dead in a landslide but was murdered by shagun
yeah...Shagun is dead

I love you Raman.
We will meet Again. ...was so sweet
What Divyanka knows raman's name!!! how
end karte karte bhi suspense ha
it was the same familiar one - this is what ishita meant by we will meet soon?

bold: yes.
Will respond to d rest of ur comments soon. 😊
Posted: 8 years ago
yaar pallavi brilliant yaar to good I was sure she got killed by shagun after you say he got familiar earing I guess it n you shown it wow

the way he make her reveal the truth was to good too

so she is death but met divyanka in plane wow love that too
but why finish it in a suspence place

he regonise her glint in her eyes what does that means yaar she has been save n she know his name too wow please clear me

thx for such awesome ss dear
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by sukanksha


I am going to comment for part 3,4 together.
Part-3
Fishy fishy
Ishita not going with him but reaching later.
Then dhaba b usi ne choose Kia.
Then table bhi 'koi humein dekh na sake' type
Then eating in one plate.
C.I.D.- Abhijeet kuch toh gadbad hai.

Ishita! Kya kar rahi ho tum! Tum khaana kam khaa rahi ho aur mujhe zyaada kha rahi ho!

Hahahahahahahahaha


Next... Bhole bhake Bache aisi baaton par Ni bolte.. Hawww naughty girl...
Toh bus itna kahungi. It was ahem ahem...

Part 4.

You just clarified what I imagined about the ghosty...

She is dead eh toh pakka... N he dreamt or gone there still kaan-fused.
But kahin Raman Marne toh Ni wala to become the tingu Tara.

I love this song chadariyaa jheeni re jheeni.

N last but not the least Mai aj b thoda darri. Galti meri hai I always read it in night.

Sorry for being late (as always).
N thanks for the ON TIME pm... :)
Sukku! 🤗
Thanks for putting ur comments as u read the story..they r great fun to read 😆👏
See u r soo smart..u noticed all dose elements where ishita behaved fishy..all of dem.kudos 👏👏

N u guessed it correctly that she was dead 👏

bold: this cracked me up totally. 🤣 Infact I have incorporated it in the next part. 😆

glad u liked d song.
Yey! i scared u again 😆😆

Thanks again for all dese comments..u know how much i love them. 🤗


Posted: 8 years ago
r Edited by peace.. - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Anum_says


Oh God... awsome and emotional update Peace...
i m still cnfused... ishita is alive or not...
awsome update...

p.s i hope ishita zinda ho
sorry for responding late..i know u read last part too 😊
glad u liked dis part so much 😃😃
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Anum_says


this was brilliant @peace...
i was about to cry bcoz i cant digest tht ishita is not alive...
but then aeroplane wala scene parh k acha laga...

but is line ne mjhe cnfuse krdia...
''Raman recognised the glint in her eyes..it
was the same familiar one.."


plzzz clear kro k iska mtlb kia hai...

aww..my apologies if  i hurt you! glad u likdd aeroplane scene.

As for d last line, i leave it to ur own interpretation, but u can consider dese:

Divyanka is the same soul as Ishita
Ishita's ghost entered Divyanka's body
Ishita=Divyanka


Posted: 8 years ago
yaaarrr horror story... 
well written.. but m a bit darpok.. 
but i read all the 5 parts in 1 go.. 

n how do u get these ideas.. 
m amazed..
looking forward to see more of your writings..
:)
please ishita ko zinda kara dete 😛
Posted: 8 years ago
amazing ss. loved it.
kind of horror one, but  nice.
😊
Posted: 8 years ago
Ishita no more is so painful to read. Raman getting intimate with shagun ws ewwwee yuck! The only thought disgusts me but again as a part of yr story it ws great. Raman killed shagun. Superb happy!

At the end u mentioned raman n divyanka became life partners right! Beautiful ending! Loved it!
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by avni_19


Ishita no more is so painful to read. Raman getting intimate with shagun ws ewwwee yuck! The only thought disgusts me but again as a part of yr story it ws great. Raman killed shagun. Superb happy!

At the end u mentioned raman n divyanka became life partners right! Beautiful ending! Loved it!
hey raman dint kill shagun. Ishita's spirit killed shagun. Will comment on d rest of ur comments soon.

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