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PraJa FF || Fragnance of Love || chapter 1 teaser updated 8.5.15 ;) (Page 3)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 7:37am | IP Logged
CHAPTER 1 TEASER "Listen I just .. just don't want you to mess my things and room.. U go and sleep in another room please!! Don't try to rule me!!! I am the P.S. ( pratap singh) and no one can rule me!!" the 16 young girl jumped on the bed beside the 20 years handsome hunk was about to lie down after giving a clearing note to the crazy girl whom he married a few hours ago! The young girl sniffed and put her short front hair aside with her index finger stylishly! " What the..." pratap just glared at her! " bade aya the P.S. Listen mr. Akdo! I am now your wife and I have equally rights on your everything! And your room is now my room! Mom told me!! And your bed is now not only yours! Itz half mine and half yours!! You sleep on that side and I will be on this side! And don't make my mood worse! Waise hi I am here without my family because of you and dnt worsen it!! Hmh!" The young man just glared at her! Then he said-" Just .. Just.. Too much!!" and lied down on the bed!!" Go to bed Idiot!! Tomorrow you will go to your new school here!" the young girl frowned while lying down on the bed -" what bad would have happened if there was no trance of study?? I hate it! Omg! I also forgot to take my mobi here with me! I hate him!!!" And both of them went to sleep frowning at each other ... ...

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 7:43am | IP Logged
As I said I will give teaser n fade away!! Tada guys!! I won't update until I get enough response! ROFL ROFL I have exams 2! Those who want pm buddy me! Sorry fa bearing me! I am ready fa jhutha chappals! ROFL

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Kyab teaser tha Riya - matlab bacche ko ice-cream ka dream dikha kar asli cheez ka wait karwaogi...aisa nahi karte re - please please super sweet please chapter 1 toh poora dedo na...

All the best for your exams and haan zyaada gayab mat rehna - badi mushkil se humko new new stories milti hai read karne ko agar gayab ho gayi toh kya hoga humara

Love the teaser and cannot wait for the full chapter

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Hi  RiyaStar
You can call me NonieBig smile
I liked your prologue and chapter 1 teaser Smile
I came to know about your story through Garima's PM LOL
PM me when you update the first chapter Day Dreaming
Accept my buddy requestHug

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightlover29

Kyab teaser tha Riya - matlab bacche ko ice-cream ka dream dikha kar asli cheez ka wait karwaogi... aisa nahi karte re - please please super sweet please chapter 1 toh poora dedo na...

All the best for your exams and haan zyaada gayab mat rehna - badi mushkil se humko new new stories milti hai read karne ko agar gayab ho gayi toh kya hoga humara

Love the teaser and cannot wait for the full chapter

ROFL I am like a bird re! Gayab toh hungi! I write stories in JA forum- Love me like you do ( it has a new thread as at 1st thread sme rude gals accusd me of plagiarism n badmouthd me) , Fragnance of love ( ya ya I have a JA story in dis name 2) , the shadows of your heart!! These were ff! Nd os- that's my teddy bear! A moment to remember! What the... ! Together forever! Yours!! Check them love! There are awesome writers in JA forum 2 like here! And thenkew!

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nonie12345

<font size="4" color="#ff3366">Hi RiyaStar</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff3366">You can call me NonieBig smile</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff3366">I liked your prologue and chapter 1 teaserSmile</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff3366">I came to know about your story through Garima's PMLOL</font>
<font size="4" color="#ff3366">PM me when you update the first chapterDay Dreaming</font>
<font size="4"><font color="#ff3366">Accept my buddy requestHug</font></font>
accepted! And thenkew ! Ya Garima is a really lovely friend! Love ya!

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Kya yaar riya cliffhanger kyun de diya? Confused
Anyways awesome update and waiting for the first part eagerly
Would be glad if u check my stories too since I'm also a new writer Smile Big smile

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