Originally posted by pari0706
lovely update. loved the explanation of GR and how he felt pain at JB's reply. you nailed it very well.
also loved how little sagar was saved i bet GR will be very happy and now they might know where Veer was because of little Sagar
Amazing punch from Ajab loved her.. she really is a hero.
i also loved Pratap's reaction
On a different note... i finally managed to complete my HP story.. do read and let me know how the final part was π³
Hey Pari
Wow the story is complete - will definitely read it from the beginning as soon as I get some free time - I have an assignment due on Saturday so will be busy this weekend - all my weekends are being eaten up by the studies I tell youπ
Glad you enjoyed the updateπ