Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16 (Page 6)

VijjuShrenu_MB IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhumjhum

Heart touching update Vijji Cry. thank you jhumiSmile
Really this so called society n their so called rule no recognition for talent Angry. i feel pity for society and its thinking
Cause of Shlok Astha live a hell life but how easily he throw her away Angry. Avdhoot is such real strong pillar for Astha n now he will teach Shlok good lesson for hurting his girl so badly. every girl should have a father like avdhootSmile
Thanks for PM n waiting for Avdhoot action Big smile. you're welcum buddySmile

thanks for commenting jhumiSmile

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VijjuShrenu_MB IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolhi1988

awesome update... thank you hiyaSmile
astha's journey after accident was very overwhelming..CryCry 
this society is so baised Angry yup she faced a lot Cry
astha's baba was her great supportEmbarrassed yes buddySmile
shlok super angry ...whatz new in that yar, he always will beLOL 
baba promising to make shlok suffer..
hope shlok realises his mistake... lets seeShocked
continue soon... sure buddySmile
thnks 4 d're welcum hiyaBig smile
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Originally posted by prince_mb

Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Wow that was an amazing update. thanks a lot sonaHug
Really heart wrenching.
I am proud of Astha. me 2Smile
Hope shlok regrets big time. he willWink
I want him to suffer please don't let her forgive him easily. sureSmile
Hope he works harder to get her back.
Tfd pm. you're welcum buddyBig smile

thanks for commenting sonaSmile
I am waiting eagerly for next update Viju.Wink

will update tomorrow buddyBig smile
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by quirky_senorita this two shot?

no yar... three shotWink

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In agnihotri manshion, she was pacing back and forth in frustration. She thought shlok has changed, but no..., today she again saw the glimpse of old shlok, the sadist and a phsyco whom she used to abhor... with her entire being.

What happened to him that he changed again? Who changed him again? Did he had any altercation in his amity? Too many questions in her mind which were constantly distrubing her. She want answers to all her questions ASAP.

She wants to catechize shlok regarding his changed behaviour, but she don't wanna risk by waking a lion in him. She thought abt the source from wer she would get answers to her questions. Yes his allies. She knew how all his friends were..stupid, rowdy and mulish just like her son. The only sensible is siddharth among the whole group.

She took her mobile out and was kinda hesitating whether to call him or not. But nothing seemed more important to her at that moment than getting answers to her questions. She threw away all her hesitation into the gutter and dialed his num.

He saw the caller id and surprised as to why she was calling him and that too at this hour. He kept all his thoughts aside and attended the call. He greeted anjali and she too wished him back. She just said "sid plz cum home its urgent" and disconnected the call.

10mins later sid reluctantly reached AM. He stood at the doorway, and saw anjali sitting  on the sofa in living room thinking deeply aboout something.

"He recollected the events that happened 1month before. He still remembered how he got humilated in the same place for loving her daughter sayin that he was behind her daughter's money. Omg how all rich mom's nd dad's forget that, a man won't stay in his/her's daughter's place but will stay at his place after the wedlock. It may be a hut, cottage or a small single room, but that will be their palace if understanding and trust really exists b/w two lovers . Soo sick with rich people.

He did no mistake. He is neither a theif nor a liasion. He is good in all the ways and will give that love to her daughter which a rich people like her will unrequited. But the thing she gave him is that she made her goons to beat the hell out of him which he can't unrequited.

His only mistake is that, he was born into a middle class family and the major problem for lovers in this damn society is damn caste. Why and who discovered this caste? Who born first? The man or the caste? The man born first not the caste. Then from wer did this ghost "caste" came from? Well someone who is suffering from indigestion has discovered this "CASTE" (i assume).

From that day she stopped jyothi from goin to college. She house-arrested her. When jyothi catechized about the same... that why she is doing this with her own flesh and blood, she slapped her tight sayin she brought a black mark and marred her family's reputation and caged her in her room. Making her confined to the 4 walls of her room may be it was her bilious to implement such a sordid plan on her own daughter. She warned him that if she spot him in the precinct,then she would doom him and his family by goons. She thought that when she enlarge the distance b/w jyosid, they would forget each other and jyothi will marry the one whom she choose for her. But she failed to realise that "DISTANCE MAKES HEART GREW FONDER"   

That very same day he vowed not to step into this house again, but fate once again made him stand in the same place, wer is feeling suffocated. Though the door kept opened he still knocked on the door. 

Anjali saw him "sid get in" she said. No aunty im fine here. It would be great cachet, if you appraise me the reason for your call said by looking into her eyes though he was standing a few feet away from her. She looked at him intently.

"Middle class family though lacks dinero, but won't lacks in self respect. That is only thing which matters to them the most. More than their lives. That is their dinero, that is their appitude, that is their strenght, the day they lost it they were equal to a corpse. Money once lost can earned again but self respect once lost can't be earned. They believe in that principle and that is the only thing which appertains to them".

Having no other option she went to sid nd slowly started the conversation. She first explained the havoc that shlok has created in his room and then catechize the reason behind his behoviour. Sid explained the whole incident that took place this evening. How they met each other in face book, proposed each other via  fb, how she had changed him from rowdy to a human with her messages. Every single thing he had explained to her...

By the time sid ended explaining the whole story, Anjali was burning with rage. "What? Shlok got into this situation cuz of a lame girl. How can she cheat on my boy? How dare she to do that? Cuz of that bitch my son has again turned into rowdy. If she wants to love, she has to fall for someone of her kind, may be blind, deaf, dumb or may be a lame like her. But out of all these, she choose my son. A perfect man for an imperfect woman. May be she is behind my son's money. I'll teach her a lesson. I'll make her to pay for breaking my son's heart. I'll show her the place, where she exaclty belongs to" She said all these in a single breath and concluded every thing by her own.

Sid got perplexed by hearing her words. "how can you say that aunty? How can you forget that its aastha who changed him from a noman to human. You're only thinking about shlok. but its shlok shlok who humilated aastha infront of all our friends. Shut up sid, just shut your mouth she screamed her lungs out.

She took her mobile and dialed some numbers "i want aastha kirloskar entire details now with in two minutes" she said and disconnected the call. Exactly 1min 30sec later she received a call from the same num which she dialed few sec back. She attended the call and note the address of aastha.

She moved towards the parking lot and was abt to get into the car but sid stopped her "Aunty a small advice... plz don't do any such thing for which you regret later". She looked at him "Mr.Siddharth shinde im in no situation to receive advices from a middle class person like you and moreover those who plays with my childerns heart, they have to pay for that very badly. Once you had, now its aastha's turn" she said and drove to aastha's house.


To be Continued... 

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 8:50pm | IP Logged

Note : This story is not meant to hurt anybody's feelings in any way. I just want to pen down something different. To share my thoughts regarding the sufferings of physically handicapped and the sufferings of middle class family in this so called society. I just wanna convey that "failures are part of our lives. They were stepping stones towards success. If we face a failure, we shd not give up instead we need to keep trying on it till we reach our target "Success" and the more we fail... the more strong we becum. I hope you guys understands this and underpins meSmile.    

Secondly Guys i thought that i would end this story in three chaptersShocked but it seems like it would take two more chapters to endConfused. So guys plz do pardon me and bear me for two more chaptersCry. Its a preety humble requestSmile. Thank you deariesSmile love you all Hug

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Subhashiniiiii Goldie

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Very well written
Anjali is so stubborn ...Her piont of views totally diffrent Confused
hmm another head ache is coming for Astha
sid is cool lover boy..hope he change somehow Shlol's mind

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the beautiful updateBig smile
ausum updateClap
So now anjali is a typical rich,conservative ,orthodox motherAngryfor her society matters everythingAngry rather than her childrens happinessConfused 
Sid loves jyothi,but anjali seperated themAngry
Now she wanted to know the reason of shlok's change of behaviour???but when she knows she is going to confront asthaConfused
I hope astha's father should be presentConfusedthat he can give proper answer to this sought of peopleAngry
I hope anjali should get some sense that due to astha only shlok is aliveConfused
But i doubt they are made of different kind of thingAngry 
Seriously.middle class family or handicapped all are human being  rightConfused everybody has equal right in happiness,But some people does not understandAngryFor them society matters everythingConfused
I think with time people views are changingSmileHope this sought opinion also changedSmile
Waiting for ur updateDay Dreamingupdate soonBig smileHug

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