Originally posted by: charanyaajohho viji beautiful update. waiting fr next update..
Thanks fr the pm
Originally posted by: jhumjhumAmazing update Vijji but I want more ๐ ๐. Thanks a lot di...even i want to give you more๐
So Anjali n Avdhoot know each-other that's for sure but how that's the question u keep me hanging now u have to update soon samazla ๐! @blod...ji badi tai๐What Astha's mother do for her education???? So many question yet to be answered eagerly waiting for next part n thanks for PM dear ๐ค.Thanks for your comment di...will update soon...love you๐ค
Originally posted by: dv19Viji..marvelous..
The society ,people,caste,religion..
Really writing and reading and relating in real life very very painful..
U hv very good command over language..
Keep it up..
Originally posted by: SubhashiniiiGood update
U explored middle class experiences ,desire ..syruggle very wellkeep it up
Originally posted by: sathurajPart 1:
wonderful start dear...arrogant shlok felt in love with a girl whom he didnt saw before...when he saw her with clutches he was so upset...and behaviour so rudely...without even knowing the truth that because of him only she is in this state...people forget to learn general manners...how can he say said words to a person who is affected physically...thanks for the super update...will read and comment on the rest part soon...
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