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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
so this is my first time writing anything so please ignor all mistakes I make ... So here we go ...

Okay so this starts after the whole retro-themed party.   

Dr aliya house   

Aliya was sleeping peacefully whiles dr veer was just starting at the badge he found next to aliya.

Veer mind - you wanted to known is there a reason to why I am here, well the reason is you dr aliya and soon you will come to know about it as well.   With that he carefully placed the badge on the side table next to her and pulled the blanket over her and tucked her in. With that he looked at her serene face for a few moments and went to sleep.   

Next morning:   Aliya looked a bit refreshed but the scenes of malivika and ishan still played in her mind, but she was determined not to let it show and be happy for her best friend. With that she hoped that today would bring some happiness into her life. Thinking this she came out of bed and notice she was holding her dad's badge like she does every morning. With fear of losing it, she started searching for it under the pillows and blanket, which is when she notice that it was carefully placed on her side table. Feeling content when she saw the badge a smile automatically reached her lips, that when she noticed that she was still in yesterday's party cloths.

Aliya mind - why I am still wearing these cloths, I thought I changed out of these last night. Wired. Oh well I must of been to tired to even bother to changed.   Glancing at the side of the table, aliya notice that it was 8:50. She has to at work by 9:30, she started mumbling to herself and rushed to get ready.   

Throughout this she failed to notice that someone was observing her every movement since she has woken up. It was none other than veer. With a soft smile, he continued drinking his coffee.    

At the same time, at life beat hospital

Ishan had cane in early as malivika had to finish her research for today's surgery. Ishan was not sure but he was not getting good vibes from dr veer from the moment he meet him. He is greatfull that dr veer helped with the racket, but he did not like the looks that he giving to aliya. All the knew was dr veer is big trouble. Taking the last sip of his coffee , he moved out of the canteen and head towards malivika cabin.     



Edited by don girls - 17 May 2015 at 4:37am

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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Index 

Part 1 - Page 1 (above) 
Part 2 - Page 2 
Part 3 - Page 4 
Part 4 - Page 5 
Part 5 - Page 6 
Part 6 - Page 6 

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Edited by don girls - 17 May 2015 at 4:37am
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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
hey pretty
veer is positive character or not?
do update soon
pm me when you update

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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Hey hello! I am jessicaHeart
You have written beautifully... i loved your storyHeart
Especially when you wrote that veer was noticing each n every move of aliya..hehBlushing
Actually these days i 'm liking veer-aliya interactions..
Are you going to continue this???
I love it..so its a request plz do continue...

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 2:11am | IP Logged
nice start...
hi...i am ashly...me n Jessica r fans of veer-aliya pair...

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 3:30am | IP Logged
nice start
loving it
do cont soon...
n pm me if possible..

bdw m Soniya..

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pd786

hey pretty
veer is positive character or not?
do update soon
pm me when you update

Hey 
I am not sure yet whether to make veer a positive character or not 
still thinking about it 
i will update soon when i have time to write it down 
and will definitely pm/or scrape you 

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jessicarh

Hey hello! I am jessicaHeart
You have written beautifully... i loved your storyHeart
Especially when you wrote that veer was noticing each n every move of aliya..hehBlushing
Actually these days i 'm liking veer-aliya interactions..
Are you going to continue this???
I love it..so its a request plz do continue...

hi jessica, 
thanks for your comment 
i am starting to like there pairing as well 
i will update soon when i got time to pen down the part 

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