MaNan New FF -Just Married UPDT (part21 pg144)) - Page 15

its too cute too lovely loved it dear cont soon n thnx for the pm

superb upadate loved it.
include navya also na...
thanks for pm..

Super awsm update!! It ws so lovely..beach..icecream..walk n talk..gn msg..so sweet..waiting fr manik's doc..i.e nandu 😉

hey... nice update ... continue sooon... :)

Awesome update!!! This is seriously the best fanfic I have ever read!!!! LOVING IT!!!!

AWESOME update dr.i loved it .update next part soon.

awesome story...just loved it ...continue soon👏👏

First of all sorry for late reply...

It's was awesome...
I just love the way u write..
Plz continue..
Loving it..

Yaar it was so good such amazing friends planning their friends date with his would be wife...so cute I wish everyone have such friends...n now coming to their date it was simple yet beautiful how much understanding they share they have...the beach their ice cream..their talks their walking and smile on their faces while talking to each other...n the concern they show to each other...and the most lovely part their good night messages n in that also the one where manik says wouldn't have taken it until his mom tell him to do so but took it because someone else has told him to do so...awww...its just they met for the first time but looks like they have some deeper connections...and nyonika what a loving and caring mother she is ...n I jus wish kabhi who show mein bhi kabhi itni concern ho manik ke liye...n not to forget our evil twins who r always evil to do something good...n jus love cabir always bringing manan closer whether its in your story or in the show...now want to see maniks reaction when nandini will come and nandinis reaction when she will get to know manikhas fever it will be so much good...n one more important thing to mention u really write beautifully the way u think and portray its jus amazing and I must say that u should write more n more it will jus polish u more as a writer keep writing such good stuff and satisfy your crazy readers like me...n thanks for the pm..update soon will wait for the next chapter...lots of love...