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SS- My Arrogant Angel- Chapter6+Epilogue Page25 (10/05/15)| COMPLETE | (Page 26)

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Loved it!!! Nandini and I will return back to this and read again and again I think ;)

Nandini's comments were
Di!!!

That was so beautifully written. I liked how Nandini rushed to give Manik first aid and how he fought for her :)
The whistle part... Not so good... I think it could have been skipped...
I liked how Nandini admitted that she didn't like brooding Mr. Malhotra and she worried that he will return to his ways once she would go to Akash.

The fact that she stood for herself and in Nandini-Akash scene, I could exclaim "ha! In your face mister." that was my favourite :)

The prologue... I liked that Nandini was not telling their story to their children and how Manik threatened Aman over the phone :)

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
both part n epilouge was awesome u penned it amazingly loved it so much such a cute finishing thnx for the pm dear n r u cont it with season 2??
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Like it !!!! R u serious , I love it
fireroad99 Goldie
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
i just love it
it was really good
cute and conise 
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful.. . A happy beginning... Looking forward to Se2..
Keep writing...
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
Your written skills and the way expressing of character feelings are too good..I just enjoyed throughout... Keep writing... Looking forward for another awesome story from your end
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Awesome it's Soo superb
It's so simple n cute n much more
Just love the way how it is executed
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Amazing! I could find my eyes teary... You have penned it so well! Kudos!

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