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SaHil OS - Where You Go, I Go - Complete on Pg 2! (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by darkice7_12

beautifully done! Clap 

I really liked this sensitive Aahil, who cared about Sanam's state of mind and not going all macho to get his wifey back immediately. He softly inserted himself into her sphere, used his charm to make her pay attention to him, was there when she came running and tried to get rid of the bad memories with his kisses. Day Dreaming

Beautiful, Mahwash22. Hug

Thank you! I always enjoy reading your awesome feedback Hug They are always so warm and really makes me keep writing. <3 Really!

I really wanted him to make his own space in her life again... by his charm and being rather collective. Embarrassed 

I personally, really enjoyed writing this. WinkDay Dreaming Thank you for enjoying this, Heart

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahil333

First off.. I love the title so much Thumbs Up.
 
What a brilliant OS this is...YES!

Aww.. Thank you for this warm feedback. You just know what makes me blush and smile for days - even weeks, trust me! Wink Your awesome! You're always there whenever I post a story and I love it. Heart 
 

My heart went out for Aahil when he saw her for the first time and thereafter saw Shaad with her Cry. But our hero is so classy and very patient.
 
I lolled when he deliberately bumped into that liar, that was clever of him LOL.

ARI is all about being classy, determined and patient. He will get his love back soon. Embarrassed 

"Tell me, Jannat. Do you love your husband?"  She didn't expect that Smile.

Love that he was so straightforward.
 
The intimate moment in the elevator...so beautiful...and out of nowhere she called out his name "Aahil"...I was like...so happyDancing Embarrassed.

I would be lying if I said that I did not enjoy the elevator scene myself! I mean this is how Our SaHil roll; Blushing Wink  They would be doing much more than that in part two.. LOL. 

 
Oh...I was so proud of Sanam that she stopped  him and prevented to being lied again by her fake husband. I was like...YES, you tell him girl!!!!LOL


Sanam has always been determined and knew what she wanted. This is what I wanted to express teh minute she "came back." - She has values and knows who she belongs to! I was totally smirking when I wrote that scene. LOL
 
And when she remembered everything, I was so happy for her. Especially when she questioned Shaad and told him "how dare you"!!!! Clap
 
I love this line where Sanam made it very clear to him, haha!

"I'm Aahil's! I'm only his - I belong to him. He has the only right to touch me and not you!"


You know, I was smirking so damn much, while writing that scene. I was like; I'm so sure that every one on the Forum is going to looove this. 
LOL

And then the face off...ufff...OMG! how dare you Shaad! Angry. He continues to lie!!! AngryLOL

For a moment I thought Aahil was not going to punch him. I got the feeling that he would just let him go, but then shaad did something unforgivable. He reached out for her and that's where Aahil snapped and gave him a punch and he fell on the floor LOL. Thank God for that  ClapLOL.

It was not my idea to let him punch Shaad, but when I heard people were expressing for me to do that in the story, then I thought; Hmm.. Why not... LOL

Love the ending...SaHil forever Heart Hug

Awesome story.

Thanks for the pm!

Thank you so much! Personally, my favorite part is the ending! How he asked Sanam weather Shaad had touched her. The way he responded to it, and kissed her. It was so magical for me to write that scene. I'm really touched that you loved that part. Heart

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1788shreya

Nice os 
Loved it 


Thank you! Glad to know you enjoyed it. Smile 
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

amazing story thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much. I'm happy to know you enjoyed it. Smile
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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Beautiful
Lovely
Amazing

Please show writers! Take some hints!

Thanks tons

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Posted: 12 August 2015 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
this was just amazing!   Clap I can't believe the writers killed Aahil Cry Cry this is truly what should have happened. shaad should have been negative and he should have been beaten up by Aahil. but they killed Aahil instead! Disapprove
this OS was fantastic!!! if only the directors read this! Cry

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