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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 97)

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Posted: 30 October 2015 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
nice .. write about poorva and meher

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Posted: 31 October 2015 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
That truly was a beautifully written os conveying a heart touching message...
 Just loved this concept...and HATS OFF TO U FOR PULLING THIS PIECE OF IDEA SOO GRACEFULLYClap
I m truly awweeddd with it..
Just reminds me of beauty n beast...Wink
Shyamal n aakashi...are completely poles apartn its true in tidays world too beautiful girls select their grooms n boyfriend based upon looks n not character...

I got a beautiful lesson..never ever will I judge any one based upon there looks...I actually dont do that thoughLOL
Shyamal is very caring person...mr snake kshiji is absolute loath to humanity...
Tomatoes jootas n cow dung Dead on him...pathetic person..
Thank god shyamal was there to avoid abortionStar
Aditi n priya are just made for each other...no wonder they are sooo much in love...priya is too sensible n akashi abit insensitive. ..but it still gives a perfect sister bond..
Aditya..hayyyeee. .hum to already fida all gala on him...
U won my heart jazzz after giving this bonanza updateHugHeart
Thank u for writing n conveying  a beautiful message with beautiful love stories of two unique n adorable hodis

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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples) Episode 54 Maan Geet

I got the idea from the malayalam movie Priyamvadakku Oru prenayaleganam,but i changed the story.
Since this OS series is based on old couples I have chosen a child artist from the old TV soaps.The character Vedika is taken from Jassi Jaissi Koi Nahin.

I dedicate this OS to khwaishfan who has been asking me to write on Maaneet for a long time.

 
I want to be your wife

Seeing the lady who came for the job interview Maan Singh Khurana was shocked.He doubted his own eyes' honesty.
He:your good name?
She:good morning Sir.I'm Geet Handa.

Flash back...

Maan:Sweta...you are not ready yet?Party must have already started.
Sweta:I'm coming Maan.Have some patience.
Sweta came dressed up with their daughter Vedika.
S:I had to dress up Vedika also.That's why I became late.
 
V:Papa...see how mumma has dressed me up.
Maan kissed her:My dear Vedika darling.You are a Barbie doll.
Vedika smiled.
S:And I?
Maan looked at her eyes deeply:You are the Goddess of beauty.
She blushed.

...


Sweta:Maan promised to come early.But see how he broke his promise.

At least on wedding anniversary can't he come early?

Vedika:Mumma.if papa does'nt come will we be able to go out?
Sw:Don't worry beta.Papa will come.We will get ready.
They got dressed up.Sweta rang up Maan:Maan...are you not coming?Did you forget that today is our wedding anniversary?

M:Sorry Sweta.I got stuck up in the meeting.But i am on the way.I will reach soon.
S:Ok.
She cut the call.
S:Vedika...papa is coming.We will go to the gate.
V:Wow!Papa will come and we all will go out and enjoy.

They went near the gate.Suddenly they saw Maan's car coming.
V:Papa has arrived.
Sweta was so excited that she tried to cross the road to reach him.But suddenly a vehcle came her way and hit her.She fell down dead.Vedika screamed:Mummaaa!
Maan screamed:Swetaaa!
After that incident Vedika has'nt spoken.She went into deep depression.


Present...

Geet resembled Sweta except the hair.Sweta had curly hair while Geet had straight hair.But Sweta used to iron her hair sometimes which made Maan feel that Geet is the exact copy of Sweta.
Maan interviewed Geet.
M:Miss Geet...Sorry to say that your performance was so bad that you can't be given a job here.
Geet became upset.She pleaded:Please Sir...I will try my level best.For me this job is a necessity.My mom is sick.She is suffering from stroke. I need money for her treatment.
He thought:Her financial level is so bad that she is willing to do anything for money.
M:I will give the best treatment to your mother.Not free.You have to work for me.
Geet was surprised:Sir!
M:But your job is...marry me and be my daughter's mother.
Geet was shocked:Sir!
M:Don't think I have fallen for your beauty.I am least interested in you.I can't give you a wife's rights.I won't even touch you.But for my daughter's recovery I have to do it.
G:What do you mean sir?
Maan opened his wallet and showed her his and Sweta's wedding picture along with the picture of Sweta holding their daughter Vedika when she was a baby.

Geet was shocked to see her look alike Sweta.Maan told her what happened in their life.Maan was in tears recalling his tragedy.
M:I want my daughter back like before.For that I want you Miss.Geet Handa.

G:Sir...I pity your daughter.I can help you.But i can't marry you.
Maan got irritated:You value your mother's speed recovery or your self respect?Decide.If you give more importance to your self respect you may never be able to cure your mother.Don't forget that.
Geet's eyes became wet.
Finally Geet gave him a node hinting her decision to marry him and Maan admitted her mother in the best hospital.They had court marriage.Maan's Dadimaa Savitri welcomed them.She could'nt believe her eyes.:
What a miracle.Just like Sweta.
They took Geet to Vedika.
Maan:Vedika...see your mumma has come.
Seeing Geet,Vedika's tears flowed down.Feeling her tears Geet felt sad for her and hugged her.
Maan and Savitri became emotional.

Geet took care of Vedika just like Sweta.

One day...
Vedika opened her mouth:Mumma!
All were surprised and happy.Geet hugged her:My child!
Maan:Thank you Geet.Because of you my daughter talked after a long time.
G:No need of thanking me.Vedika is my daughter.
Maan felt an unknown happiness hearing that Geet has accepted Vedika as her own daughter.They shared an eye lock.

Mahi...

Unknowingly he cupped her face in his hands.Geet was stunned.She pushed Maan.
Maan came back to his senses.
G:How dare you touch me Mr.Maan Singh Khurana?

I came here to be Vedika's mother,not your wife.You are so cheap that you broke your promise that you won't expect anything from me as a wife.
M:I am sorry Geet.I don't know how I touched another lady forgetting my Sweta.
G:I am leaving.I can't stay with a dirty man like you.It's not safe for me.
Maan was shocked:Geet...please no...if you gi Vedika will know that you are not her real mother.

Nahi Jeena Tere Baaju
Nahi Jeena, Nahi Jeena
Nahi Jeena Tere Baaju
Nahi Jeena, Nahi Jeena

Suddenly they saw Vedika watch them.She was crying.
V:You are not my mother?Then who are you?
Geet and Maan were upset.Suddenly Vedika fainted.They screamed:Vedika!
Vedika got admitted in the hospital.The doctor came:It's due to stress that Vedika fainted.Vedika is a kid.Giving tensions and stress is not good for her.Anyways now she is alright.
All  were relieved.They went to Vedika.She was crying.Geet hugged her and wiped her tears:Vedika beta...I am your mother.
Savitri came:No need of lying.I told her the truth.It's better to tell her the truth.Otherwise she will come to know the truth from outside and get more wounded.
Geet looked at Vedika tearfully:Vedika beta...I may not be your Sweta mumma who gave birth to you.But it's also true that I am your mother and you are my daughter.I love you that much baby.
Vedika's tears rolled down her cheeks.Maan and Savitri became emotional.
V:If you love me that much why did yiu tell papa that you are leaving the house?
G:In anger I said that I am  leaving the house,but trust me...I was not planning to leave the house.If I had left the house I would have been holding your hands.Because I need you with me always.
Vedika cried hugging her:Mumma!
Geet kissed her crying.Savitri and Maan were in tears.They discharged her and went home.

Maan went near Geet:Thank you Geet for staying back for Vedika.

Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki
Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee

 
Geet  smiled silently.

M:Now I understand why I got attracted to you.It's not because I saw Sweta in you,but because of your beautiful heart.I respect you as Geet who brought back our happiness.

Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki
Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Tu Ki Jaane Pyaar Mera
Main Karoon Intezar Tera
Tu Dil Tui-Yon Jaan Meri

Geet became emotional.:I can't live without Vedika.But it is also true that I stayed back to be not only as Vedika's mother,
 
Geet came closer and held him tight:but also as ...Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan could'nt believe it.

Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki
Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Tu Ki Jaane Pyaar Mera
Main Karoon Intezar Tera
Tu Dil Tui Yon Jaan Meri

Maan was very happy.
They sat down together looking at each other..
 Maan held her hand:Geet..do you really love me?

Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki
Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee

She nodded blushing:Yes Maan.And I want to be your wife.
He smiled happily.

Mere Dil Ne Chun Laiyaa Ne
Tere Dil Diyaan Raahan

M:I love you Geet.
G:I love you Maan.

Mere Dil Ne Chun Laiyaa Ne
Tere Dil Diyaan Raahan
Tu Jo Mere Naal Tu Rehta
Turpe Meriyaan Saaha
Jeena Mera..Hoye
Hun Hai Tera, Ki Main Karaan
Tu Kar Aitbaar Mera
Main Karoon Intezar Tera
Tu Dil Tui-Yon Jaan Meri
They shared a romantic eye lock leading to a affectionate embrace.

Main Tenu Samjhawan Kee
Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee(Humpty Sharma Ki Dulhaniaaa]

Mahi...

The end


Edited by jasminerahul - 01 November 2015 at 1:16am

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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 2:27am | IP Logged
beautiful n emotional story
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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Superb os
Very emtnl
Loved it
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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 3:02am | IP Logged
pyar toh ho hi jata hai na...

awesome story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...


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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Nice story 
emotional one 

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Posted: 01 November 2015 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Awwwnnn super cute story.. Geet comes as vedikas mother and falls in love.. Suoerb..

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