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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 90)

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Posted: 04 October 2015 at 6:16am | IP Logged
This is so awesome story .Jai and Bani are both orphans,Loved the intro part of this story,beautifully explained.Jai and Bani met in the park.Bani seen her friends Rano and Sahil,Ranveer and Rani being romantic.Jai and Bani continuous meetings in the park made her and Jai more close. he is middle age and she is young.Jai was feelong pain to express his feelings to Bani to know abt her feelings.He wanted me her to marry her to his nephew but his nephew likes someone else.Bani later confessed his feelings to her and so did he and nice that his nephew is also happy with his girlfriend. Thanks for the pm .continue soon

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Posted: 04 October 2015 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Wooow beautiful writings
Its sooo romantic and touching
Great job
Keep it up Wink
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Posted: 04 October 2015 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Loved the bebo and amrit one thanks for the dedication, loved it to the core,beautifully written. Bebo was shattered by her fav teacher death.she lost her ,she was sad and her smikr had disappeared. Amrit wanted to bring smile on to her face.He asked to her to change into an anarkhali.he decorated the place beautifully with candles and flowers. It was romantic special birthday for her.they cut the cake and sang and dance. They couldn't sing Jeene Laga Hoon properly. That sweet convo was indeed sweet.
Loved this story .
Thank you so much .
Waiting for other stories 
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Lovely os.
Superb choice but I Naveed watched that kind of show.
My one and only is ipkknd.
Nice.
Tf pm.
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 42(Vansh Iccha)



Dedicating this to sanghita0000 who loves Vansh Iccha

 Don't leave me...


Vansh realised the depth of his mistake now.He misunderstood his loving wife Iccha to be having an affair with his brother Veer.Now he understands Iccha's innocence.He felt prick of conscience when he realized that he punished a poor innocent girl by ignoring her love for a long time for no fault of her's.
Vansh was guilty.He went towards Iccha:I am sorry Iccha.I hurt you a lot.
She raised her eye brows and looked at him:It's ok.Anyone can make mistakes.
He was relieved.
But Iccha's next few words gave him a shock.
Iccha:Vansh...today you had asked me to leave this house..So now it's time for me to return home.
That moment only Vansh remembered that during his continous fights he had asked her to leave the house after holi.He could'nt look at Iccha's face.He did'nt want her to see him becoming weak hearing her exit.She looked at him to know how he reacts.

ICCHA:Why are you not saying anything Vansh?

VANSH:What should i say?There is nothing left.Right?

Iccha was broken.
She thought:Even if i go it does'nt matter for Vansh.
She tried to be strong by controlling her tears.


Iccha started packing her bag.
She touched her bosom.She felt her heart beating fast.
She remembered the Holi celebration which took place on the previous day.
Vansh was drunk.Her friend Tapasya made her drink bang forcefully.In the drunken state Vansh and Iccha reached each other.They coloured each other's cheek.


Vansh caressed her face.She closed her eyes.
Vansh:I love you Iccha.
Her face blossoms hearing his confession.
Vansh:Why don't you love me?
Iccha:Who said I don't love you.I love you a lot Vansh.
They shared an emotional eye lock.

Present...
Her mind said:Vansh,why don't you stop me from going?Why are your heart made of stone?During Holi under bang's effect you confessed that you love me.I remember it Vansh though you forgot it.
Vansh said in his mind:On holi,under bang's effect you yourself expressed your true feelings towards me.Still you are going back?
Vansh looked at Iccha packing her bag.
Vansh said in his mind:When you go away from me i find my life strange Iccha.
Vansh's eyes sang:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee..

Vansh said in his mind:Without you i feel i have no identity.When I was destroying my life immersed in drugs you only saved me.What kind of a man am I?I am very bad.If i was good  i would not have hurt an innocent girl like Iccha.

VANSH:Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hoon, Kya Jaane Main Kaun Hoon
Koi Yeh Samjhaaye Mujhe, Kaise Main Yeh Gum Sahoon
Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hoon, Kya Jaane Main Kaun Hoon
Koi Yeh Samjhaaye Mujhe, Kaise Main Yeh Gum Sahoon
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee

Vansh said in his mind:Without you my world is full of darkness.When my life was full of darkness you came up with light.With your exit light has gone forever.Again i can feel only darkness everywhere.
VANSH:Phirse Andhere Chhaa Gaye, Khoyee Ujaale Ki Kiran
Kal Raahon Mein Phool The, Ab Hai Kaanton Ki Chubhan
Phirse Andhere Chhaa Gaye, Khoyee Ujaale Ki Kiran
Kal Raahon Mein Phool The, Ab Hai Kaanton Ki Chubhan
Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee

Iccha looked at Vansh's face.Her eyes followed his eyes.She could feel pain in his eyes.
She said in her mind:Why do i feel that Vansh is very upset?Why do i feel that your pain is mine too?Ever since i saw you you have been there in my dreams also.Tell me Vansh.what bothers you?What makes you upset?

She moved towards Vansh and looked at his face.
Her eyes spoke to him in a musical tone:
Tum Hi Kaho Kya Baat Hai, Mujhko Lage Tum Apne Kyon
Jabse Dekha Hai Tumhe, Dekh Rahi Hoon Sapne Kyon
Tum Hi Kaho Kya Baat Hai, Mujhko Lage Tum Apne Kyon
Jabse Dekha Hai Tumhe, Dekh Rahi Hoon Sapne Kyon

She said in her mind:When i am away from you i find my life very strange.



ICCHA:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Chhaaon Bhi, Dhoop Bhi, Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum..

VANSH:Iccha..?You want to say something to me?
She nodded her head.
He was eager to hear it:Then say...
ICCHA:If others see me leave  theyall will be very upset.If they come to know about our marriage's truth they will be shattered.If they see me go they will ask a lot of questions.I may not be able to answer their questions.I can't face them.So i am going without biding 'good-bye' to them.Before they come back from Kasi i am going.
Vansh who expected Iccha to tell him that she can't go away from him was shattered hearing this.He realised that the worst moment in his life has reached.
ICCHA:Bye Vansh.
For a moment he could'nt believe that she was going away from his life forever.He was numb.He wanted to tell her not to go.But his lips shivered.

He turned back as he did'nt have the courage to see her going.Iccha was really upset.
She said in her mind:I told him that i am going.Still Vansh did'nt stop me.

Iccha took her bag and left the room.Suddenly Vansh ran after her.She turned back only to see him once more.Her eyes was filled up with painful tears.Vansh had some hope.But his hope shattered when she turned back and put her foot forward to get out of the house.That moment he broke his ego and held her hand.
She turned back and looked at him with a shock.Her bag fell down.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
VANSH:Please don't go Iccha..please...
Iccha could'nt believe her ears.She stared at him unbelievingly.
ICCHA:Why?Why should i stay here?The duration of our marriage is over Vansh.I think you forgot the date.Holi was yesterday.after holi you asked me to leave.

VANSH:Let the duration get over.But please don't go away from me.Life will be dry if you go.I want you Iccha.

Tear drops fell down from her eyes.
Iccha said in her mind:Without you where can i go Vansh?How will i tell you that my life as well as my heart are only you.How will i make you understand you that for me everything is you.
She told him that she cannot go away from him though music:
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum
Tum Bin Ab Jaaoon Kahan, Raah Bhi Tum Manzil Bhi Tum

He was relieved.
He uttered her name with surprise:Iccha!
She smiled with tears in her eyes.
VANSH:Iccha,you are my heart.You are my life.My heart is beating only because of your presence in my life.
She became emotional hearing his words filled with love for her.
He sang from the bottom of his heart for her:
Kaise Main Tumse Yeh Kahoon, Jaan Ho Tum Aur Dil Bhi Tum
Tum Bin Ab Jaaoon Kahan, Raah Bhi Tum Manzil Bhi Tum

They both looked at each other's eyes and sang.
ICCHA:Mujhko Yeh Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajnabi
Chhaaon Bhi..
VANSH:Dhoop Bhi..
Vansh and Iccha together:
Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee...
VANSH:Chhaaon Bhi..
ICCHA:Dhoop Bhi..
Vansh and Iccha together:Har Naye Pal Hai Nayee..{Sailab}.
He extended his arms towards her.Forgetting everything else she ran to his arms.They wept embracing each other..


They forget everything else being with each other.
They put an end to their painful past and drowned in love and romance through out their life.

The end

 




Edited by jasminerahul - 04 October 2015 at 11:25pm

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Posted: 05 October 2015 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Amazing story
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Posted: 05 October 2015 at 12:19am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome OS! well written!
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Beautiful os
Loved it

Finally they r together and hppy

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