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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 85)

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It was awesome.
Just perfect .
Amazing written.
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 39(Nahar Saloni)



I wrote this specially for coolhi1988  who is a great  fan of Nahar Soloni.


Complexion in love

"Saloni...i love you.Will you marry me?"
"Nahar proposed to me showing me a diamond ring.The diamond was shining.It is just opposite to my complexion i felt.I'm dark.But the diamond which Nahar showed me is pure white.Nahar was fair and handsome.All the girls were mad about him.But i wonder what made him fall for me.Because people found my complexion as a bad omen.I could not imagine marrying Nahar even though i had feelings for him.because i did'nt want others to laugh at us.Black and white combination.So i rejected him".

"Sorry Nahar.I can't.I'm getting married to Ambarish".
Saloni left leaving Nahar.Both of them were in pain.


"He must have felt that i have insulted him.But he did not lose his temper.He did not bicker.But tears dwelled up in his eyes,He was estranged from me.I got married to Ambarish.He was clumsy.But i saw a life partner in him just because he is dark like me.So that he will understand my feelings.But what happened was just the opposite."

Saloni was excited to go near Ambarish.
"I'm pregnant.We are going to be parents."
"Is it true?"He asked.
"Yes".I shook my head.
"We don't need a baby.Have an abortion".
"What?"I muttered,because i could not believe what he said.
"Kill this creature".
Saloni is dying mentally inch by inch.
"Why?"She asked.
"Because this baby will also be dark like us.This baby will be a comic figure in the society.I don't want that to happen".
Saloni was shocked.Even though Ambarish is also dark he does'nt want a dark baby.
"No,i will not kill my baby".I cried loudly.
"You will".

He took her to the hospital forcefully.She howled like a wolf.She was insane.
She did not have any option to escape from the abortion.Her baby was brutally murdered in the hospital.There was relief on Ambarish's face.Saloni could not tolerate him being happy even after his child's death which happened because of him.Without forgetting her culture she spat on his face shocking him and stepped out of the hospital.
She went to a lone area and cried.A familiar hand fell on her shoulders.She looked at him.
She was surprised.
"Nahar!"
Forgetting everything she found solace in his arms.He took over her pain to release her pain.

Their friendship grew stronger than before.
One day he came again with flowers and the same diamond ring he had offered her before.Saloni was surprised to see the ring

"You did not give this diamond ring to anyone else?"I asked.
"No.It is always for you".He replied.
He knelt down and asked in a sweet tone,
"Will you marry me?"
"But i'm already married.I had an abortion too.If not I would have been a mother".
"You are not married now.You are free from her so called hisband who killed your motherhood along with your baby.And have dreams about our future baby".
His words brought a smile on my face.
"But the baby will be dark.Ambarish could'nt tolerate a dark baby even though he is dark.But you are fair.How will you tolerate a dark baby?"I said.
"So what?I love your complexion.I will be happy if our baby have your complexion".

"He surprised me again.This time i could not resist my emotions.I extended my hand with a smile.He slipped the diamond ring on my finger.


I became Nahar's.


And as I doubted our baby is dark like me.But our baby is his darling.He doesnt care about the baby's complexion.He sees a glow in the baby's complexion.Nahar,me and our baby form our magical world".



The end





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Lovely update 
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Can u write on anurag and perna from kasuti zindigi
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Posted: 29 September 2015 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
have already written on them
 
 
 
Originally posted by pixi_nightingal

Can u write on anurag and perna from kasuti zindigi
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Posted: 30 September 2015 at 1:25am | IP Logged
superb lovely story...
loved it..
thnks 4 d story...
thnks 4 d pics...
sweet sawri...i still remember her..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thnks 4 d pm..

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