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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 80)

drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 September 2015 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 35(Rahul-Milee,Jeet Soni)

Dedicating this to Sydell who would like  to read on Rahul-Milee.

Fairy tale moment

It was Rahul and Milee's first date.
Even the sky smiled witnessing their cute romance.

Never in the wildest dreams Rahul and Milee thought that after their date their happiness would shatter in a moment.When a truck hit Milee he was shattered.

In the last moments of consciousness Milee held his hand tight in fear.

MILEE:Rahul...Am I going to lose you?

It pierced his heart.

RAHUL:No Milee.Nothing will happen to you.We both will always be together.

Her eyes got closed before his words could relieve her fear.
But her lips murmered something which were not clear.

He carried her in his arms

and rushed to the hospital crying.

RAHUL:Doctor...please save my Milee...I will do anything to save her.

Dr:Calm down,we will try our best.

Milee's family came.

The surgery got over.But what the doctor told was not pleasant.

Dr:Surgery is over.But Milee has not regained consciousness yet.If she does'nt gain her consciousness she might slip into coma.

Milee's family cried in pain.
Rahul screamed:Nooo...Milee can't leave me and sleep always.

He cried.

Milee's brother Jeet and his wife Soni wept seeing Milee critical on the bed.
Jeet cried:Milee,please wake up.

Rahul was restless:See cannot sleep always.I told you that sleeping too long is not good.Wake up Milee.Your Rahul  is waiting for you.
Holding her hand Rahul burst into tears.

Jeet :Why did you take Milee for a date Rahul?If you had'nt taken her for a date Milee would not have been in this condition.
Rahul cried:It's my fault.

Soni felt sad.

Soni:Jeet...please  don't blame Rahul.What is his fault?This accident did'nt happen because of him.Rahul's love for Milee is so strong that it will surely get you back your little sister Milee.

Jeet wept silently holding Soni's hand.

Rahul's tears rolled down his cheeks.He went crazy.
RAHUL:Milee has to come back to life.What will I do to bring back my Milee?

Suddenly he was reminded of the fairy tale Sleeping Beauty' which he has listened to when he was small.The prince who kissed the sleeping beauty to wake her up from her never ending sleep came into his mind.

Forgetting the surrounding Rahul kissed Milee's forehead.All were shocked to see that.

Jeet:What is Rahul doing infront of us?

Soni:Control yourself Jeet.

This is my Rahul's love for Milee.

Slowly Milee opened her eyes.Rahul was very happy.He caressed her head:Milee!

Milee's lips shivered:Rahul!

All were surprised.

MILEE:Rahul...did you kiss me?

RAHUL: I was reminded of the Prince who kissed the sleeping beauty to wake her up.I felt we were also in the same situation and may be my kiss would wake you up.

She smiled:You know Rahul...I always wanted my love story to be beautiful like the fairy tale Sleeping beauty.You made it possible.You made our love story a fairy tale.You are my Prince Rahul.

He smiled happily.

Both of them held each other's hand smiling forgetting the surrounding.

Jeet and Soni smiled happily.

Gunjan:I told you Jeet...Rahul's love will save Milee.

Jeet smiled emotionally:Yes,you are right.Rahul is my Milee's Prince.
Jeet touched Rahul's shoulder:Sorry Rahul.In that moment of depression I blamed you unnecessarily.You are the best for Milee.Because of you only Milee is back to life.
Rahul and Milee smiled emotionally.

The End

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 September 2015 at 4:49am | IP Logged
the os is really good
Rahul and mile jeet and soni combo
so Mille met with an accident and this made her bro jeet blame Rahul who took her for a date but Rahul finally made his love back
i love the ending 

-Dellz- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 September 2015 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Really loved Rahul and Milee story .
Milee and Rahul were a happy couple 
They had a date but by fate .Miles came across a accident.
Her words pricked him.He took her to the hospital.
The doc words also made him more sad
Jeet and So I were sad ,jeet cursed Rahul for Milee to be in this state .
Soni tried to calm jeet.
Rahul was reminided of the sleeping beauty story and kissed her and she woke up.
It was indeed a fairy tale story .Milee always wanted her life to be a fairytale and so it happened.
Jeet regretted for what he said .
They all 4 lived happily ever after.was a beautiful end.
Thanks for dedicating the part to me .

Edited by -Dellz- - 27 September 2015 at 12:45am
newmoon18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 September 2015 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Nice one
Loved it
PriyaSweety-Anu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 September 2015 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM.Smile
It was So Nice Os.Smile
The Whole OS was so Beautifully explained.Smile
Please Write like this.Smile

heemasomani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 September 2015 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Its an amazing os 
loved it
coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 September 2015 at 2:23am | IP Logged
armaan-riddhimaan os was just superb...
loved it...
armaan killing d goons coz they wer harrassing riddhima.. & got 12 yrs jail...
riddhima supporting armaan throughout... & waiting 4 him...
thnks 4 d pm..
sorry for late comment...

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