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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 78)

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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Excellent work.
Love to see Aki and pa.
Lovely couple.
Shy and romantic.
Tf pm.

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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Not a cupid actually.Payal went to her husband Akash who is also a doctor when she had eye allergy


Originally posted by Jayeeta_06

lovely os...Thumbs Up...the kajal became the cupid for Akash and Payal...ClapClapClap...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...

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Posted: 20 September 2015 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
they were already married.Payal went to meet her husband Akash (Who is a doctor)only when she had eye allergy

Originally posted by newmoon18

Awsme one yr
They r married
Superb chemistry

Keep smiling
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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 12:08am | IP Logged

Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 34(NK-Lavanya)



NK Lavanya was never a jodi in IPKKND.They did not even meet each other.But the viewers wished to see them as a pair on the show.So in most of the ffs they were a pair.But still they never not a jodi on the show I did'nt think of writing an OS on them.But my friend Sydell requested me to write an OS on them.I could'nt refuse it.


What the gift made her realize...


NK:Hey Lavanya ...I have brought a gift for you.
Lavanya couldn't believe it:Gift?For me?
NK:Why are you so shocked?Do you think that I am not capable enough to gift you?
LAVANYA:No no...nothing like that NK.I am just excited.
NK:Really?Then open my gift and see.
He gave a wrapped gift.

With excitement Lavanya tried to open it.
NK was becoming impatient.
NK:Why are you taking so much of time?You are opening slowly as if the gift wrapper would feel pain.Give it to me.I will open it for you.
Lavanya murmered:The person who gave the gift itself is opening it.Very funny.
NK took it from her and tore it to open it.
Lavanya opened her mouth in 'o' shape.
LAVANYA:You tore it?
NK:So what?It's just a paper.Not the actual gift.
He took out the gift.
Lavanya couldn't believe her eyes.
They were tools to repair bike.

LAVANYA:What is this?
NK:How is my gift?You liked it?I am sure that you are impressed with my gift selection.When you have these tools you don't have to worry about your bike.
Lavanya suppressed her laughter.
She took it back from NK.
He smiled happily and confidently.
La:Usually men gift girlish items like ornaments,dresses and flowers to women.But you gifted me tools.Very funny.
NK was embarrassed.
La: Ok I am going.
NK:Bye.
Lavanya walked away.

While driving the bike she thought of the gift scene and laughed.
LAVANYA:This NK is so funny.Do anyone gift such tools to a girl?He is crazy.
Suddenly her bike got stopped.She tried to start it again.
LAVANYA:Oh!What happened to this bike?Now what will I do?
Suddenly Lavanya was reminded of the tools NK gifted her.
With a smile she took the tools and repaired the bike by herself.
LAVANYA:If I didn't have these tools with me now I would have suffered as there is no work shop near by.
Suddenly she remembered NK.She smiled.
LAVANYA:When NK gifted me these tools I made fun of him.I found him crazy.But actually his gift helped me today.You made my day today NK.I need to thank him now.
Lavanya drove to NK.
NK was stunned to see her back.
NK:You came back?Why?
LAVANYA:I had to come back.Because...
NK:Because...
LAVANYA:Because when I was on the way I realized that I had forgotten to say 'thank you' to you.Thank you NK.I really loved your gift.No one else can give me such a wonderful gift.
NK smiled feeling that he was on cloud 9.
LAVANYA: Today you gave me a gift;the price of which you are not aware of.
NK:I know it's price Lavanya.I only paid it's money.
LAVANYA:No NK.I didn't mean that.What I meant is...while giving me the gift you didn't know by gifting me what a big help you were doing to me and while receiving the gift I didn't know that I was receiving a priceless gift from you.

NK stared at her in confusion.
NK:I don't understand anything Lavanya.
Lavanya looked at him emotionally.
LAVANYA:What I meant is...today once again God made me realize that you are a priceless gift by him. Once again I realized that you are also a part of my life.An inevitable part.

NK was numb.He didn't know how to react.


Both of them looked at each other silently...A long silence...but their silence spoke a lot about their hidden affection towards each other.

LAVANYA:Ok NK.Bye.I am already late.
NK simply nodded as he was still in shock.
Lavanya walked away.NK kept looking at her silently. NK recollected the words she uttered to him...He got the flashes of more  hidden words he saw in her lovely eyes.Slowly a smile appeared on his face.
While driving the bike Lavanya blushed thinking of her moments with NK.

The End

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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Thanks for PM,Dear.Smile
It was So Different and Very Interesting OS.Smile
The Whole OS was so nicely explained.Smile
Please write Like this.Smile
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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 1:06am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written
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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Superb amazing os 
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Posted: 21 September 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
sweet os...Thumbs Up...Nk gifted Lavanya a box of tools for her bike...Cool...when she got it she made fun of him...Ouch...but that gift helped her when she needed it to repair her bike...ClapClapClap...she showed her gratitude towards Nk...Approve...they realized that they had something special between them...Wink...loved it...HeartHeartHeart...thank u 4 pm...Big smile...

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