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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 55)

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Posted: 27 June 2015 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Amazing Story

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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 1:28am | IP Logged
When I started watching Indian soaps..
Kumkum was the first show !!!

I loved it n the beautiful jodi,of course..Smile

Thanx for writing this OS..
Sumit-Kumkum were so cute..so much in love..
Keeping fast for each other... feeding each other..

Naughty Sumit n shy KUMKUM..
(BTW,Kumkum was so chirpy in the showEmbarrassed)

She lost her eyesight but it dint lessened his love for her..

Awww ..
So touching !!!!
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Lol..

I started it by imagining DD as Muskaan with Rahul
from DMG LOL

hmmm...

Rakesh n Amna as Muskaan n RohanSmile
A very well-written OS..

lOVE made her a better person..
But I hope he'll let her dreams come true after some period !!!
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Shravan -Saanchi..
A really cute couple..
U wrote quite a different story bout them..
He sacrificed his life to be with her in hereafter..

Arjohi OS is the best in this thread..
So romantic Day Dreaming

Beautiful pics,dialogues..Big smile
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS 
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 23(Vikrant Sarita)


Dedicate this to 
Nisha Kankaraj Preetha who loves Vikrant Sarita.



Horoscope and love


Sarita looks at her wedding pictures and cries.
Her marriage with Vikrant was an arranged marriage.After marriage unknowingly Sarita fell in love with him.Vikrant is a caring husband too.Sarita  decides to confess her feelings to him.
Vikrant reaches home.He looks upset.
Sarita:What happened Vikrantji?Why are you looking so upset?
Vikrant hides his pain:Nothing.It's just that I am tired after the office work.
Sarita:Ok...then I will bring tea for you.
Sarita goes to the kitchen to make tea.She put the gas on.While walking around her saree's pallu caught fire.
She creams:Ahhh!
Suddenly Vikrant comes .He gets a shock.
He screams:Saritaaa!
He pulled off her saree and put it down.He saw a bottle of water there.He pours water on her saree and get rid of the fire spread.
He looks at Sarita:Sarita...are you alright?
Suddenly he realizes that Sarita is half naked.She becomes conscious when his eyes fall on her.She covers her front with her hands.
Vikrant turns back.
Vikrant:You go and change Sarita.
S:Yes.
Sarita comes wearing a new saree.
Vikrant is weeping.Hearing Sarita's foot steps he wipes his tears.
Sarita smiles:Vikrantji...I will make another tea for you.
Vikrant:No need Sarita.I don't want tea.I want to say something to you.
She smiles thinking:Is Vikrantji is also planning to tell me what I am going to tell him?That...that he loves me?
She blushes.

Vikrant reveals her a dark truth.
Vikrant : Sarita...I met the astrologer.He said he made a big mistake in evaluating our horoscope.The horoscopes got exchanged and it was not my horoscope with him while seeing whether yours matches mine.
Sarita:So what Vikrantji?Our wedding is done.
Vikrant:Sarita...now the astrologer got the real horoscope and he looked at both our horoscopes again.He revealed to me that  being his wife is dangerous for your life .According to astrology my wife will die.
Sarita is shocked.Tears roll down her cheeks.
Vikrant:I had'nt believed it completely.But I was confused.But after your fire accident I believe in the astrologer's words.Sarita,just go from here.Otherwise you will die
Sarita is silent.Her eyes are wet.
Vikrant shouts:Just go
SARITA:No,I won't go
VIKRANT:Are you mad?You will die
SARITA:No Vikrantji.I won't die
VIKRANT:Sarita,don't b foolish .
Sarita embraces him from behind.
SARITA:No Vikrantji.I have faith.I won't die.I'm sure.Savitri saved her husband's life.I know that like that you will save my life.I trust u that much Vikrantji.
Her words touch his heart.
Vikrant becomes very emotional:Sarita?
SARITA:Yes Vikrantji.today you saved my life.God has made you my saviour .If the astrologer was right I would have died in the fire accident.But I was saved by you.
Vikrant is touched by her words:But Sarita...try to understand...today you escaped,but you may not be able to escape from such accidents always.Your life is short as long as you are my wife .
SARITA:Vikrantji...you may be right.But it's ok.I'm happy to die as your wife
Vikrant is shocked.
Vikrant's mind tells him:Vikrant,you are lucky to get a wife like Sarita who is willing to die for you .But you should not put her life in danger after knowing the truth.
Vikrant:Sarita...just go...
Tears come out from Vikrant's eyes.He looks at Sarita's eyes.
Her eyes r filled with tears:I beg you Vikrant.Please don't send me away.
Vikrant feels sad:No Sarita...go...
Sarita weeps:May be because  you don't love me.That's why you want me to go away from your life.
Her words prick his heart.
Sarita:Even though you don't love me,please don't send me away.I won't ask you to love me.but please allow me to love you .
Vikrant can't control himself. Vikrant pulls her closer to him and shouts at her:Who told that I don't love you?If I don't love you then whom will I love?

Sarita is surprised.
VIKRANT: I love you Sarita.

Sarita is surprised.She smiles with tears in her eyes.She runs to his arms.Vikrant embraces her tightly .
Sarita:No horoscope can separate us.

Vikrant:I won't let death come near you.Like Savitri saved her husband Nala I will protect you at any cost.
Both of them smile shedding tears.

The end


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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Superb
Horoscope r rubbish really
If hearts meets nothing can separate them
Same hppnd here

Beautiful
Loved it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 11:35am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm awesome OS! Well written! Love cannot separate ppl!

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