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Hi Jasmine! as i promised here i amHug...first of all thank you so much for the dedicationBig smile..just read monsoon love story of Abhya and Pia ...enjoyed reading it. loved the concept and the narration. OMG! your writing style is very much improved it is too good too. keep writing dear.Clap

 

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Aw! my ever favorite RoKaTongue ...and the  scene u picked were ever green scenes.loved reading it which brought back my  sweet old kasturi days.Thank you very much dear.keep rockingClap


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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 12(Archana Manav)
I dedicate this to Zebali,zoya789,taahir004 who love Manav Archana.
 

 

 

 

 
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya
 
The lead actress of the serial Pavitra Bandhan's audition was conducted by the makers of the show.

The middle class girl Archana who wanted to make it big in the TV industry got a phone call from the production house.

"Miss Archana Deshmukh?You are selected as the heroine of our show Pavitra Bandhan'.

She jumped with excitement.

Arc:Thank you so much.

The popular actot Manav was already chosen as the lead actor of the show.

 

Location...
Archana comes out of the car in a black short top and jeans.Manav was surprised to see such a beautiful lady as the heroine.He had a special feeling towards her at the first sight itself.

The director introduced Archana to Manav.
"This is Archana".
Manav shook her hands:Hi Archana.
Archana was excited.
Arn:Manavji...I have seen your serials.I am a big fan of yours.
Manav smiled:I am happy that you are my fan.But don't call me Manavji.Call me Manav.
Archana smiled:You are so down to earth.
Manav smiled.
The director came and narrated the script to Manav.
"Manav...Archana will play your  on screen brother Anuj's love interest".
Manav was sad that Archana is not his heroine,but Ankush's heroine .Ankush plays Manav's onscreen brother Anuj's character.He was upset to call her bhabhi during the shoot.
After 2 months...
Then comes a big twist in the serial as well in his life.In the serial Archana becomes a widow and Manav marries her.

Manav was very happy with the track.Because of the track he could play Archana's husband's character.But still thoughts about the future gave him tension.
He asked the director:How long will i be Aradhana's(Archana's on screen character) husband?I doubt whether like we usually see in other soaps,the dead husband will come back and Aradhana will go back to him.
The director laughed:Being the hero of our show,you should not see it as a normal stupid serial.Our show will be a pure love story of Veer and Aradhana.Aradhana will always be there with Veer.
Manav was really thrilled.But he was a bit upset about not having romantic scenes with Archana eventhough she is his wife.Because in the show Aradhana has not accepted Veer as her husband as she has not forgotten her ex-husband.
Months passed without no love.Manav was fed up.
But later  they decided to make Aradhana fall in love with Manav .Because of the public demand.they plan to shoot their consummation scene.Manav was very happy.Manav was dreaming about it.But unfortuntely Archana refused to do it.The director forced her to do it,since its essential for the story.
Finally Archana said: I will do it..but  only if all the people except the director ,Manav and camera man go out of the room.
The director agreed.Manav became happy.
Archana was very nervous.
M:Archana...don't worry.I won't make you uncomfortable.
She smiled.
They started shooting the consummation scene.Manav touched her softly..Archana did'nt feel bad.In fact unknowingly she got lost in him.
 
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar

She thought:What is happening to me?Why I feel nice when I do romantic scene with Manav?
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar
 
After the take,the director clapped:Awesome...you guys have amazing chemistry.
Manav-Archana smiled.
Manav:I hope I didn't make you feel uncomfortable.
Arc:I should thank you Manav.Usually heroines feel uncomfortable with love scenes because of their co-stars.But you are different.Working with you is really comfortable.
Manav was very happy.
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar

Manav-Archana pair became popular..They become very good friends too.
 
They sh0t for an intimate rain scene.
Both of them were living that sensuous rain scene.
Itni mohababt saha na sakunga..
Sach mani zinda raha na sakunga..
After reaching home Archana sat  thinking about Manav's soft touch.

Archana's birthday party took place.
Man:Happy birthday Archana.You look stunning.
She blushed:Thank you Manav.
He couldn't take his eyes off her.

Manav came with a beautiful pendant for her.
Archana with a surprise:Thank you so much.
She wore it.
M:You look really beautiful now.
Archana blushed.

Tujko samloo ye mera zimma
Main hu to kya hai jane tamanna

Archana gives the first cake piece to Manav. He fed her back.

Ab jeena marana mera janam tere hath hai..
Maine kaha na sanam ..ab tu mere sath hai..

She thought:Manav has all the qualities of my dream hubby.He cares for me,he treats me like a princess though he is the Prince of TV.

To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa

Star plus decided to shoot a Jodi special episode ...
Manav-Archana reached.

All the jodies of Star plus stood in a raw.
The men were asked to drap saree on their partner's body.Archana was shy when Manav draped saree for her.Archana felt a special sensation passing through her body.
The jodies were asked to sing a song for each other.They sang looking at each other. They were very happy singing for each other.
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar
Manav-Archana came together for the star parivar award show.
 

All the fans surrounded them for autograph.Manav-Archana won the favourite jodi award at the star parivaar award function.They received award together.
M:Thank you Archana for being my best on screen partner.
She was very happy because though Manav acted with many actresses he admitted that she is his best heroine.
Dil ke chaman ka hasna to dekha Jagi nazar ka sapna to dekha..
Ese bane hum ek jaan ek dil tu hai ke main hu Kahena ho mushkil..
 
Arc:Thank you Manav.If you were not my hero,Veer-Aradhana's chemistry would not have been so great.
He smiled.
Chota basanti hai tu ..tan hai gulabi mera..
Do rang milen ke baad hote nahi hai juda..
Manav-Archana did a romantic dance at the function on the hit  romantic track which is used in their show.People were jumping with joy when they were performing on the on the stage.
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(2)
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar.(2)

After the function...
M:Archana...will you come with me for a dinner date?
She blushed:Sure.
 
To phir samhal..le me chala .. Jana kaha ..aa dil me aa
 
That night they both went to a restaurant for dinner.The whole hall  was reserved for them as they needed privacy.
Manav :Archana,we are close friends.People have accepted us as a great couple.On zoom channel,they conducted a poll regarding which on screen Jodi the viewers want to be a real couple.We got 91 percent votes supporting our marriage and i also feel that we rock on screen.Why can't we rock offscreen too? I'm sure that we will make a good couple like Veer-Aradhana.Archana,will you marry me?

Sathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kiya..
Maine kiya tera intezar .itna karo na muje pyar(

Archana was surprised.She never expected it though she wanted it to be like this.
 
 
She couldn't control her happiness.
A:Manav,i was waiting for this moment.I love you too Manav.

Sathiya ye tune kya kaha beliya ye tune kya kaha..
U na kabhi karma intezar.maine kiya hai tumse pyar

He was very happy.
They melted in each other's arms.
 
La..lla..lasathiya ye tune kya kiya beliya ye tune kya kaha..(Love).
 

 
 
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Edited by jasminerahul - 07 June 2015 at 11:23pm

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