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Old is gold(OS series on old tv couples)Epi 59 pg131(MriAra,MihirPurva (Page 16)

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Abhay pia r my fav couple. Lovely os

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fabulous  update loved it 
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Thanks for the pm dear i must have missed this out otherwise i can never leave any AP story they are my all time Fav  Hug
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Old is gold(OS series on old TV couples)Episode 7 (Prem-Heer,Ranbir-Kanya,Rahul-Muskaan)










I dedicate this OS to Mirraza ,Meerab,Sydell,AASUS who love Prem Heer 


Prem got ready for his brother Ranbir and his sweet heart Kanya's engagement party.
Muskaan entered his room.
"Prem..are you ready?"
"Yes Muskaan.I am ready".
" are dressed.But you have to smile.Only then your dressing will be complete",she teased him.
" are my best friend.You know everything about me.Since Heer left me I have not smiled".
Muskaan's face became dull.She became upset.
"I know that Prem.But today you need to smile.It's your brother's engagement.They will be upset if you are upset".

Prem kept quiet.
" will smile today.I have a surprise for you",she said.
"Surprise?Nothing can surprise me Muskaan.Let us go."
Prem was not at all excited about the surprise.
Muskaan's face became dull.
She said in her mind, "Being your best friend I tried my best to make you smile.At last I am going to be successful.I am sure that today you will smile seeing my surprise".
Prem and Muskaan went to the hall.
Muskaan was still sad.
"Hope Heer understands Prem and does'nt leave him again.If she hurts him again...poor Prem".

A song was played.
"Ishq hai,Teri aankhon ke matvaale
Kaajal ko mera salaam
Zulfon ke kale kale
baadal ko mera salaam
ghayal kar de mujhe yaar
tere paayal ke jhankar
hey soni sone,teri soni,
har adaa ko salaam

Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq,Salaam-e-Ishq Ishq
Suddenly Prem's eyes fell on a beautiful lady.
Prem could not believe his eyes.
Muskaan started dancing.She pulled Heer to the dance floor.
They both started dancing.

Prem's eyes were fixed on Heer.

After the dance Muskaan went towards Prem.
"How is my surprise Prem?"
Prem did not know what to say.
"I know that you are really happy to see Heer.I knew that only Heer can be a surprise for you.I met her accidently and I brought her here".
"Thank you so much Muskaan.This is the most beautiful surprise",Prem thanked her.
She smiled,
"Ok.No thanks in friendship.Right?"
"Yes",Prem smiled.
His eyes searched for Heer.
He went to the balcony.As he expected Heer was there.That was Heer's favourite area in his house.
"Heer!" His lips shivered.

She turned back and looked at him.
They both looked at each other emotionally.

"Dil ne jise apna kaha - (2)
bekhabar woh hain wahan, jane pal jamin aasman) - (2)

mile najar unase par behaya tanha bato me bhee keh naa sake
dil kee bat yeh juban, abb hai hulchul, pal pal peh pal
dhunde hai unko dil, ke chal jara unke hee manjil
bole raj dil par, abb woh hain kaha
dil ne jise apna kaha - (2).."{Dil ne jise apna kaha}.

Prem broke the silence.
"Heer...why did you leave me and go without even biding good-bye'?"
He looked very upset.

Tears dwelled in her eyes.
"I am sorry Prem.I made a big mistake by doing that".
Prem,Rahul,Muskaan and Heer were best friends in the college.Prem and Heer had feelings for each other.One day Heer left the college without informing them.
" you know how much I missed you?"
Prem asked her with pain.
"I am sorry Prem",Heer apologized with pain.
He held her hands.
He looked at her eyes deeply.
"Just because you left me I could not say a very important thing to you.Do you know that?".

She said in her mind,
"Prem...I know what you are going to say.Muskaan had told me what you could'nt say because of my unexpected exit.But still I want to hear it from you".
"I love you Heer",Prem confessed his feelings.
She burst into tears.
Her tears made him upset.
"Heer...I can't stand your tears".
"Prem...I too love you",she opened her heart.
He smiled.
"I know that you love me".
She cried.
"I am sorry Prem.I did'nt know that you had feelings for me.I thought you and Muskaan were dating each other.I was broken completely by such unnecessary thoughts.That's why I left the college suddenly".

Prem was shocked.

"When I met Muskaan only I realized that was wrong".

Prem looked at her unbelievingly.
"Heer...I just can't believe this.Three of us were the best buddies in college. How could you think that we would hide such a big secret from you?Yes,I hid a secret from you.We hid from you that I love you.Because I was waiting for the perfect occasion to confess my feelings.But I was too late".

Prem turned back.
Heer held his hand.
"Prem...are you angry with me?"
Suddenly he pulled her towards him.
They shared a romantic eye lock.Their eyes told each other what their hearts longed to tell each other.

"Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Usko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na]2

[Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na ]2
Dil Ne Tum Ko ...Sapne Buno Na
[Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na.."{Jhankar Beats}.

Prem said,

"Heer...Muskaan was planning to disclose something to us.But before that itself you left.She is in love with Rahul.Last month they got engaged".

Heer was surprised.
He showed their engagement picture in his mobile.


Heer smiled.
"They look so grand.Because of my stupidity I missed the function".

Muskaan came there.Seeing them together she felt very happy.
They broke the eye lock.They were shy to face her.
"I am sorry to disturb you both.Actually everybody is waiting for you guys",Muskaan said.
"We are coming Muskaan",Prem said.
Heer went towards Muskaan.
She hugged Muskaan.
"Thank you Muskaan for giving me my love.Only because of you I got Prem".
"Hey Heer...don't be so silly.I don't want you to be too emotional ok".
Heer smiled.

Heer asked,"Muskaan...I heard that you and Rahul..."

Muskaan blushed,

"You heard right.In fact Rahul has reached now".

Heer was surprised,

"Rahul has come?It's been a long time since I met him".
They went to the hall.

Rahul was surprised to see Heer.
"Yes Rahul...I am back to be with Prem forever".
Rahul smiled,
"That's really good yaar.I am very happy for both of you".

Ranbir and Kanya exchanged rings.They were very shy.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Ranbir opened his heart before Kanya,

"I love you Kanya.Thanks for coming into my life and making a rough man like me soft and romantic.If you hadn't entered my life I don't know how my life would have been".

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Kanya blushed,

"Love you too Ranbir.Thanks for making my life beautiful.


Har ghari saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai

He held her close with a smile.

 Tumse hi tumse hi(Jab we met).

Suddenly Prem raised his voice,
"There is another couple to get exchanged".
Everyone was curious to know who they were.
Prem's mother Preety asked,
"Prem beta...who are they?Break the suspense fast".
Prem held Heer's hand with a smile.
Preety smiled.
She became emotional.
"Prem and Heer are together?"
"Yes Maa..after a long time destiny brought us together",Prem said with a smile.
Preety became really emotional.
"I am so happy that finally you smiled after a long time.It's because of you Heer".
Heer smiled.

Ranbir and Kanya were very happy.

Ranbir said,

"I am happy that finally your wait is over and your Heer is with you".

Prem and Heer smiled.
"I will come now".
Preety went inside.
She came back in a few minutes with two diamond rings.
"Prem beta...put it on Heer's finger.And Heer...promise Prem  that you will be with him forever by making him wear this ring".
Heer became emotional,
"I promise..i won't repeat my mistake.I will never leave Prem alone.I will be with him forever".
Prem ,Muskaan and Preety smiled.
Prem and Heer exchanged rings.

Prem-Heer,Rahul-Muskaan and Ranbir-Kanya danced romantically.
Yahin doobe din mere...
Yahin hote hain sabere...
Yahin maranaa aur jeena...
Yahin mandir aur madeena...

Teri galliyaan, galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave, galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan, galliyan teri galliyan
Yuhin tadpaave, galliyan teri galliyan(Ek villain).

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 25 May 2015 at 12:41am

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Awesome update 
Watch whole show brings back a lot of good memories xx
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Nice old
Loved it

Keep smiling
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