Sidyaali SS:-I love u.(Part 14 updated on pg 12) - Page 3

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cooljav1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome loved it wish they show their kiss one day .. I hope that comes soon plz do write more I loved it 👍🏼

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cooljav1234
Awesome loved it wish they show their kiss one day .. I hope that comes soon plz do write more I loved it 👍🏼

Thanks sweetz for continuously reading my work n m also waiting for Sidyaali's kiss to happen in the show.

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anu_anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update

thanx for pm

continue soon 😊

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 5 spoilers:-

Sid:-Thanx Siyaali for being there even if m angry on u.

Siyaali:-Cauze mere alaawa tumhare gusse koh koi handle nahi kar sakta.

Sid:-Woh toh hai afterall Siddharth Rajpoot is not everyones cup of tea.

Siyaali:-Ok I need to go bye.

Sid:-No not now please.

Siyaali:-No Neeti must be waiting for me.

Sid:-No means no.

Siyaali:-Sid stop ur emtional blackmailing ok.

Sid:-Here m trying to spend some cozy time with my girlfriend n she being a stubborn is trying hundreds of ways to stay away from me.

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 5:-

Sid:-Thanx Siyaali for being there for me even angry on u.

Siyaali:-Yaa cauze I can only handle ur so called gussa.

Sid:-Woh toh hai afterall Siddharth Rajpoot is not everyones cup of tea.

Siyaali:-Ok now I need to go.

Sid:-No not now please.

Siyaali:-Aree Neeti would be waiting for me.

Sid:-No means no.

Siyaali:-Sid!!!!!!!stop ur emotional blackmailing.

Sid:-Here m trying to spend some cozy times with my girlfriend n she being a stubborn is trying hundreds of ways to stay away from me huh.

Siyaali:-Stop giving me those looks Sid n ya m waiting for somemore time per uske baad tum mujhe nahi rokoge.

Sid:-How sweet of my girlfriend.

Siyaali:-U r such a cheater always manipulates me some or the other way.

Sid:-Every thing is fair in love n war n rightnow its love.Now common give me a hug.

(Siyaali laughed at him n after sometime she hugged him)

Siyaali:-Sid I didn't knew that u can be this much cutter also.

Sid:-Afterall m irresisitable baby...

Siyaali:-Shut up u dumhead.

Sid:-U r dumhead not me.

Siyaali:-You.

Sid:-You.

(Sidyaali started laughing at their own fights)

Sid:-Haaa...haaa...we can never change.

Siyaali:-True n I don't this to change ever.I love fighting with my cute boyfriend.

Sid:-Me too cauze inn silli fights ki wajah se we come more closer to each other.

Siyaali:-Sid on a serious note can I ask u a question.

Sid:-Ask na.

(Siyaali snaked her arm around Sid while Sid held her from waist on a sitting postion on the bed)

Siyaali:-Sid will ur mon accept me,I mean what if she does not likes me.If that happens then have I to leave u Sid?

Sid:-Shhh...Siyaali aisa kuch nahi hoga;if I love u than m sure mom will also love u like me.And u don't have to go away from me m righthere with u so just stop overthinking.

Siyaali:-Its just that I don't wanna loose like my parents who passed away.M n orphan Sid n if aunty does not like that then...

Siyaali:-Siyaali I had loved ur pure heart n just cauze ur n orphan does not means that ki tu kisi ka pyaar deserve nahi karti n my mom loves the people who r good at heart ; status relly does not matterrs to her.Aur main tere liye toh puri duniya se ladd sakta hun u know that.

Hope u guyz liked it.

Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago

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cooljav1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow loved it plz do continue 👍🏼

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 6:-

(Siyaali was in tears but Sid kissed those tears n this brought smile on Siyaali's face but all of a sudden charneeti came.)

Neeti:-Oye tum dono ke romance karne ka time khatm.

Charlie:-U guyz were fighting some times back with each other acchanak seh yeh romance kahan suru ho gaya.

Sid:-Why u guys had to disturb us?

Siyaali:-Main chalti hoon Sid bye.

Sid:-Siyaali wait.

(Sid stood up n then he kissed Siyaali on her fo forehead ;Charneeti were dumbfounded.)

Sid:-Take care of urself n don't think too much.I'll talk to mom about us I know she'll understand.

Siyaali:-Hmmm...I hope so n thank u for understanding me.

Sid:-M always there for u.

Neeti:-Tum dono ko sharm nahi aati hamaare saamne hee ek dusre ko kiss karte ho.

Sid:-Chup reh tikkhi mirchi

Neeti:-Mujhe tikkhi mirchi bola tujhe abhi bataati hoon main.

Siyaali:-Neeti meri dadi umma maaf kar de na usseh aur yahan seh jaldi chal.

Neeti:-Nahi main isseh...

Siyaali:-Please .

Sid:-Dekha abb toh teri bff bhi meri side peh hai.

Neeti:-Woh iss liye kyonki meri bff ka tu bf hai warna tu toh mujhse pakka pitt taa .

Siyaali:-Haahaaahaaa...stop it guyz mujhe tum dono ko dekh ke bahot hassi aa rahi hai.

Neeti:-Accha bahot hassi aa rahi hai tujhe naa abhi gudgudee lagegi tab pata chalega ki hassi kisseh kehte hain.

Sid:-Same pinch Neeti main bhi wahi soch raha tha.

Siyaali:-Sid n Neeti please don't.

(Sid indicated Neeti to grab Siyaali from front n he'll grab Siyaali from back .Neeti was unable to catch her but Sid grabbed Siyaali from back.Now both Neeti n Sid were tickling her n Charlie laughing out loud at the trio.)

Siyaali:-Haaa...haaa...haaa Sid n Neeti please mujhe chod doh naa its tickling.

Sid:-Naa main toh bikul bhi nahi chodne waala.

Neeti:-Main bhi nahi.

Sid:-Aur hass na bahot hassi aa rahi thi tujhe toh.

Siyaali:-Bass live me guyz its hurting haa...haaa...haaa.

Sid:-Neeti chod de bichaari ko.

Neeti:-Oh tu phir seh boyfriend mode mein aa gaya.

Siyaali:-Kyon nahi aaega afterall he loves me haa na Sid.

Sid:-Ofcourse ,woh kya hai na main apni girlfriend ko pain mein nahi dekh sakta hoon.

Siyaali:-Aww...how sweet of u.

Charlie:-Guyz bahot ho gaya mazaak now go to ur dorm otherwise Kaamini mam ne dekh liya to hum sab gaye.

Neeti:-Sach mein abb hamein chalna chaahiye,chal Siyaali.

Siyaali:-Bye Sid.

Sis:-Yaa bie goodnight n if that Krissane...

Neeti:-Tu uski fiqr mat kar main hoo na

Sid:-Fine.

Siyaali:-Neeti chalen .

Neeti:-Haa chal.

(Neeti n Siyaali went to there room,there Krissane was waiting for Siyaali to burst our her anger on Siyaali)

Do read n give ur precious feedback.

Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 7:-

Krissane:-How dare u snatch Sid from me?

Siyaali:-Woh...

Neeti:-Oye chipkali tune suna nahi aaj Sid ne kya kaha tha woh Siyaali se pyaar karta hai tujhse nahi.

Krissane:-U be quiet n u miss bhenji I know very well tum jaisi downmarket cheepsters koh,tum jaiso koh toh ameer ghar ke boys ko fhasaana acchi tarah se aata hai.

Siyaali:-Bass bohot ho gaya Krissane ;main tabhi seh chup thi par iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum kuch bhi mere pyaar ke baare mein bolo gi toh main chup chaap rahungi.Chal Neeti sone.

Neeti:-Mil gaya na jawaab.

Krissane:-U can't get him cauze meri aur Sid ki family ek dusre ko acche seh jaanti hai n my dad never n ever says me no for anything.Sid's mom also likes me.

Siyaali:-Who told u that just because ur family is connected to Sid's family then Sid will come back to you,like relly.U can never understand the depth of love Krissane cauze for u its kind of a physical relations but for me n Sid its beyond physical relationship.Shaayad tumne abb tak Sid ka pyaar nahi dekha hai but jaldi dekhogi.

Neeti:-Aur agar tujhe nahi pata ho toh bata doon Sid iss relationship ke baare mein apni mom seh baat karne gaya hai aur uske according Sid ki mom deffinately haa hi kahegi.

Krissane:-Shut up .

(On the other hand Sid went to his mom's room to talk about him n Siyaali)

Sid:-Mom may I come in.

Sm:-Yes beta come in.

Sid:-Mom actually I wanted to talk u about something very important.

Sm:-What's the matter beta u r continuously smiling.

Sid:-Mom I love someone very much.

Sm:-Who's the lucky girl who changed u this much

Sid:-Mom its Siyaali.

Sm:-M happy beta finally u got someone who is a very sensible.

Sid:-Mom aap khush hoo.

Sm:-M more than happy beta but why u said so.

Sid:-Mom actually Siyaali ko lagta hai uski personal status ki wajah se aapki status pe asar par sakta jiske wajah seh shaayad aap hamaare relationship ko accept naa kar paao.

Sm:-Beta she's a female n we females r relly emotional in terms of r closed ones that's why she said that plus past mein joh uske saath hua hai uski wajah se she fears of loosing u.

Sid:-I know mom but abb main usseh samjha samjha kar thak chuka hoon ,aap hi samjhaao usseh.

Sm:-Ok don't worry ,u just bring her tommorow to my cabin.

Sid:-Yes mom I will,good night.

Sm:-Ya Goodnigjt n sleep well don't start dreaming about her ok.

Sid:-Mom...

Sm:-Now go.

Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago

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cooljav1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

Good wish urmila was really like this in the show

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nawshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey diksha, just read all parts in one go. Great story! Loving sidyaalis nokjhok and hope sids mum really is happy for them! Looking forward to the next part!

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