Posted: 8 years ago

You are not a stain and I cannot rub you off of me,

You are not a wound and you will not heal,

You are not a scar and you will not show,

You are not a teardrop and I cannot wipe you away.

 

You are neither a memory I can erase,

Nor some picture I can set on fire.

 

You are the last sliver of hope and also the first,

You are the light irradiating my dark insides,

You are the foundation of the person I have become,

You are the reason I am not the person I once was.

 

I cannot escape you,

I cannot hate you,

You are not a stain or a scar or a tear or hope or even light,

You are me, I cannot change you, and I can just control you momentarily.


-thegameison

 

Posted: 8 years ago
This is deep, K! Almost a reflection of the transformation I went through few yeas ago! You know that feeling that just won't go away, no matter how far you come along from there. It takes a one tiny mention, one tiny memory and it's as if you had never moved on. This is what these words remind me of. Damn, girl! You should write more often! This was beautiful <3 
Posted: 8 years ago
brilliant piece of work...  keep writing... 😊
Posted: 8 years ago
wow..!! amazing !!
it was really gr8
thanks fr d pm :)
ps- keep writing more :D
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful..brilliant wrk👏
awesome loved it

Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful!!
This is just amazing! 
Keep writing girl!  =)
Posted: 8 years ago
This is brilliant, dudes and you know it.  I'm pretty sure everyone goes through this stage at some point in their lives and thus if not all, most people will relate to this writing of yours. And for those who have been through will understand the emotions behind this beautiful piece of writing and how it reflects them just so truly. 
Posted: 8 years ago
This was amazing.. 
Just beautiful.. 👏👍🏼

Posted: 8 years ago
K, sheer and utter brilliance! I don't know what made you write this, but this really reaches the soul. The pain, the agony, or maybe even love is so beautifully emoted, really. You can really connect with all these emotions, even if never felt them. You're a genius writer K, and seriously, you inspire me in all true sense. Though, I am not even remotely close to how you write. Beautiful, loved it. 
You should write more of poems! 
N. 🤗 
[And an extra tight one, for you-know-why 🤗]
Posted: 8 years ago
brilliant poem with depth
osm

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