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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! Beautiful, those are! Loved them, especially the second one!! You must continue writing shayaris! I'll be waiting for them! Edited by Radhikerani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Wow!! Beautiful, those are! Loved them, especially the second one!! You must continue writing shayaris! I'll be waiting for them!

thank u so much Pro.. glad u liked those..
second one is my fvt too..
thanks a lot for ur comments..😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
^ thank you Aishu.. (=
@Pro.. thx pal..saw ur edited post.. (=
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9

oye hoye akki tu too chupi rustom nikli...

kya shayari likhi hain...loved itt...

thanks a bunch yaara.. glad u liked those.. *hugs*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Akki ji the shaayri was beautiful 👏
Thanks for writing the words and their meaning,it helped me to understand a lot ⭐️
Bahut khoobsurat tha please do continue ⭐️
*love*
Sanju 😃

thank u so much Sanju..
i'm so glad to see ur comments..
yeah! i thought that will be usefull (=
thanks a lot for appreciating my work..
love
-Akki
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Posted: 9 years ago
😲 😲 []Haila!! kya likha hai..
👏 👏
Its just Superr se Uparrr.. ⭐️
Bohot pyara likha hai di..
Aur di.. dnt gve me any credit to motivate u vrna main to khushi mein balloon ki tarah foolkar fatt jaungi.. 😆
Literally it was amazing..
luv uhh!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jollygrl

😲 😲 []Haila!! kya likha hai..
👏 👏
Its just Superr se Uparrr.. ⭐️
Bohot pyara likha hai di.. 

thank u so much dear.. was waiting for ur comments.. 
i'm so glad u liked it..

Aur di.. dnt gve me any credit to motivate u vrna main to khushi mein balloon ki tarah foolkar fatt jaungi.. 😆 

haha...calories coming in my comments...🤣

Literally it was amazing..
luv uhh!! 😳

thx a lot..😳.
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Posted: 9 years ago
its definitely lovely dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
thx buddy..<3
glad u liked those..
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Posted: 9 years ago
u p d a t e

heyy guys.. here are two more shayaris from my side..
not exactly shayari actually.. but a few lines.


1) yaad hai..?
..
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wo jo darakhton pe likhe the kabhi naam humne..

2) zamane ka khauf nahi hai mujhe..
gar, tum hi hans diye mere ikraar-e-mohabbat par...?!


darakht: Tree

guys, i'll not be sending PMs for updates in this thread.. may be with FF/SS updates PM, i can send one.. so please follow-up with the title if any update is mentioned..

please hit the like button and leave ur comments/suggestions
thanks..
love..
-Akki
Edited by itsokaysammy - 9 years ago