Hui main Parineeta I've become a married woman TS Last Part pg2

Posted: 8 years ago
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Hui main Parineeta I've become a married woman Part 1
Its Samud version of my Old KriYa TS with some changes.
 

Kumud and Saras were two lawyers.They fell in love.A mature love.
Once Saras suggested:We both love each other and every evening after parting our ways we tell each other that we miss each other.Then why don't we live together?
She was wondered:Suddenly..how is it possible?Marriage is not easy.We both are so busy.
SARAS:Do you think that lovers can live together only after marrying? Is sindoor on the forehead  needed for a lady to live with the man she loves?
KUMUD:No.I don't think so.
SARAS:Then what's the problem?
KUMUD:Society..
SARAS:Forget about others.We will live together.When we get time we will get married.
She smiled:What you said is true.

They took a house for themselves.
They entered the house together holding each other's hand.

Saras held her hand tight.
SARAS:Kumud...I held your hand and I will always hold your hand till the end.This is enough for me to make you mine.Now you are a Parineeta;a married woman.
She became emotional:Yes,now i am a Parineeta.
They shared a beautiful eye lock.
 

 Night...
Saras sat near his blushing Kumud.
hoth tere mai ke pyaale
kajrare naina tere
maathe par sinduri subaha
julfho main raina base
 He held her closer.

saansein yeh teri hain
dhadkan bhi teri hain
jeevan yeh tera hua
tere hi choone se
 She could'nt stop blushing.
They came more and more close to each other.

tan man saja mera
hui main parineeta
 
Their lips met each other's and explored each other passionately.

jiya dole haule haule
kyon yeh dole janu na
jiya dole
kyon yeh
janu na..(Parineeta).

A fine morning...
Kumud wore a beautiful saree.
Saras could not take his eyes off her.

She was shy:Saras..why are you staring at me?

SARAS:I have to admit that my wife is very pretty.

She blushed.

Kumud:Your love made me pretty.
Saras:Really?If my love during yesterday's night made you this pretty every night I will love you.May be in the morning also.
She was shy.
He held her closer.They shared a passionate eye lock.

He poured love on her again.
Night...
KUMUD:I have a surprise for you.
SARAS:What?
She closed his eyes with her hand.
She led him to the terrace.She took her hand off his eyes.
They saw the stars in the sky together.
Kumud:So beautiful.Right?
Saras:Very beautiful.This night will be special for us.
They smiled.
They both lay down looking at the sparkling stars.

 
She held his hand:I never thought i would get a soul mate who is so loving.Saras...thank you for making me a complete married woman without marriage.

He held her hand tightly:When we both are together we are complete.

She smiled.

Months passed...
Kumud started going higher than Saras  in her profession which created problems between her and Saras.They both had to do the same case.Kumud's client won the case.
That day Saras did'nt talk to her at all.Kumud felt sad.
 
 
She thought:Saras is gloomy as I defeated him in the case.But I was helpless.My client was on the right side.So I had to make him win.
At night Kumud got inside the room .Saras was already slept.

She caressed his head.

KUMUD:Saras...i know that you are upset.But please don't be angry with me.You only told me that i should do my job well.Then now why are you cut up with me?

She was very upset as he did'nt respond.
It was very hot as there was no electricity to run the fan.Kumud waved the paper fan for him.

Unknowingly she slept off in between.

Saras opened his eyes.

He said in his mind:I heard everything you said Kumud.I am not angry with you.In fact I am happy for you.

The next morning...
She woke up.She did'nt find Saras around her.She went to the balcony searching for him.
She saw Saras going on his bike.

She became upset.

KUMUD:Without even biding Good bye he left.

After some time Saras returned.
KUMUD:Why did'nt you even tell me that you are going out before going out?
SARAS:Kumud...this is not a court to question me like this.Don't order me.If you think that you can rule over me let us part our ways.

She was shocked.

She shed tears:Saras...i did'nt expect this much from you.I thought you will come back with a smile.But you broke my heart.Is our relationship that weak?

His heart pained.
 

 
Without answering he went inside.
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice 
they both decided to stay together before marriage
saras is not upset with kumud then why he was saying to part ways
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful story yr
Loved the starting


Update next soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Jasmine :)

I liked the new concept, 
The first part was amazing, I loved it

So Saras and Kumud are lawyers and they are in love
so they decided to live together without marriage
without caring about the society
and their passionate moment together was very romantic
and the pics suited the scene 

But after that, Kumud and Saras
bought fought the same case and it was Kumud who won
and she thought that Saras was upset with her.

And in the morning Saras went away without telling her anything
and when he got back, they had a dispute and 
he wanted to part ways with her,

What reason is there behind it?
and hope both of them come together again

Eagerly waiting for the next part,
Update soon 

Thanks for the PM

Take care...😊
Posted: 8 years ago
congrats! thanks 4 da pm! lovely update
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful story n amazing start they r going to stay together before marriage
Awesome update
Posted: 8 years ago
SO  ROMMANTIC...THANKS FOR SHARING
Posted: 8 years ago
Nicely written first part. I liked it very much. The title is also well suited to the story.😊

It was good to see that Samud being so much in love with each other took such a bold step of living in together without thinking much about society. Marriage looked a formality for them as they had already become one by soul and heart. πŸ˜‰ At night they share a cute romantic moment and make love to each other. The song from the movie Parineeta looked so perfect with the situation and all the pics you added were also as per the dialogues. Saras teasing in the morning also very enjoyable. But it looked weird from Saras's side  if he was not angry with Kumud as she defeated him in a case, why he left early in the morning without informing her and on return behaving so rudely with Kumud. So are they going to part their ways? Hope they don't get separate and become one after clearing all their misunderstandings between themπŸ˜•

Waiting eagerly for the second part of this TS. Hope you will update soon😊
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing Start of the story
Posted: 8 years ago
intersting concept...
amazing start...
both samud r lawyers.. & also competitors...
they love each other.. but being in same professions & standing against each other make their relation bitter...
hope they wil learn to keep professional & personal lives seperate..
so excited to read a samud ts after ages..
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

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