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Ariya ff : Magical Pyaar

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Mai kayi dinoo se iss story ke bare mein soch rahi thiSmile
I am greatly inspired by reading the stories of Satrishi, Megha and Ariyabestfriend Didus Big smile
This ff is started on their conformity so jitni gaaliyan milegi wo inke saath bhi share karnaLOL
Iss story mein maine Harry potter ka female version ghusaaya hai  
So thoda bohot Harry Potter ka gyan hoga to accha hogaLOL
So here i present 
      MAGICAL PYAAR 
Xora case ke 8 months baad ki baat hai
ETF mein sab hai Ayesha ,Liza,Saakshi ,choree and samjun
Bus kami ek insaan ki hai
ETF ki paheli ladki
Shree ki best friend 
Chotu ki little sister
Rathod ki best student
Aur Arjun ke liye ...
Ek aaisi ladki jiske saath Roshni ke baad paheli baar dhang se baat ki
Jiski ek smile uski thakan door kar deti thi
Jiske saath pyaar par apne views share kiye
Jisko paheli baar goli chalane aur kisi ki jaan lene ke guilt se bahaar nikaala
Jiske Thank you ka jawaab diya 
Jisne Arjun Suryakant Rawte ko galat saabit kiya
Jisne uska dil jeet liya
Jisse wo ...pyar karne laga tha 
RIYA


Aaj bhi wo charo kabhi Riya ko bhool nahi paaye 

Aaj Riya ka birthday tha
Chaaro uski yaad mein doobe the
Teeno girls kaam aur chit chat mein busy thi to kisine notice nahi kya

Achanak phone ringing se sab log khayalo se waapas aaye
Commisioner ka phone
Rathod:Jai hind sir
Commisioner:...
Rathod: Ok sir Jai hind

Saakshi :Kya hua
Rathod :Aaj ek naya officer join kar raha 
Tabhi koi aadmi aaker kehta hai :Can I meet Sameer Rathod
Rathod :yes main hi hoo
Aadmi: Main Kunal Raizada.New joining.Encounter and Undercover  Specialist . 3rd in Command of ETF.
Rathod:Oh yes Comm. ne bataya 
Rathod Kunal ko sabse milata hai
All except Arjun :Good Morning Sir
Rathod:Abhi tumhaara Cabin ready nahi hai kal tak ho jayega
Kunal:It's okay sir no problem
Rathod:Shree ise office aur kaam dono dikhado
Shree:Yes Sir
Shree office dikhata hai Kunal ko
Kunal:Yaha ek cabin khali. hai Kya main yaha apna cabin bana sakta hoo?
Wo cabin Riya ka hai(Meri story mein office change nahi hua sirf renovate hua tha jisme Riya ka cabin chua bhi nahi gaya tha)
Use dekh kar Shree ko Riya ki yaad aati hai
Iss cabin mein jab Riya ki maut ke baad wo aaya tha to use ek alag sa laga jaise Riya abhi bhi aas paas ho
Wo yaadon mein kho jaata hai
Kunal ke bulaane par waapas aata hai
Kunal:Kaha kho gaye the aur tumne mere question ka jawab nahi diya
Shree :Kuch nahi Sir .Nahi Sir Kuch personal reason ki wajah se ye cabin hum nahi use karte.
Kunal:OK

Case comes
Case kuch gangsters ko involve karta hai
Case mein pata chalta hai ki ek bar mein jo mumbai ke slums ke paas hai waha ek gang jisne Pune mein 1.5 saal pahele bomb blast karaaye the aur jiske saara members par murder charges hai ek party rakhi hai apne boss ke birthday par
Waha undercover mein jaana padega kyoonki aas paas kaafi log rehate hai aur 1 Building baad ek hostel bhi hai 
Agar kuch gadbad huyi to bohot problem ho sakta hai

Raat ke 8 baje sab log gundo ki tarah saj dhaj ke waha pahuchte hai

Abhi yaha tak hi ab aapke comments par hi continue karoongi Smile
Pata hai faltu hai lekin agar aap log chahate hai to continue karoongi
And iss story mein Riya zinda hai vo kaise vo baad mein pata chalegaWinkEvil Smile


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Edited by BubliBag - 15 May 2015 at 7:30am

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 8:39am | IP Logged
wow sear tu tho kamal kardiya hei.

what a start hei.

dear eagerly waiting  to read more

cont soon.

PS:mujhse inspire hua...thank u...Lekin late  me math hona.

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
interesting starting. continue soon

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 9:11am | IP Logged
nice character
but plzzz make riya character dasu like she is expert in every field.
So samjun should proud on riya.
Continue soon
eagerly waiting for ur next update

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 9:51am | IP Logged
bubli ki bachhi 
tune stories likhna shuru kar diya aur hume bataya bhi nahi
aur seedha pm deke shock kar diya...Evil Smile
waise start toh bahoth dhaasu tareeke se kiya hai
kya baat hai bubli tu toh cha gai yaarWink
wonderful startingClap
all r missing riya...aur ye kunal 3rd in command
sabhi etfians in gunde styleWacko
hmmm...intresting
riya jinda hai...toh aur bhi intresting hai
awsme work dear..
cont soon
thanx for pm

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Awesome concept 
Lady version of Harry Potter Wink

Sounds interesting

Conti soon

And do pm me Big smile

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Awesome
loveit
Cont soon plzzz

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Posted: 12 April 2015 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Wonderful starting
Loved it very much
New character kunal raizada
3rd hand commander
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd thanks for the pm

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