Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
maths bunty main fail ho gaya🤣laxmi relax me😆
nice update dear but no nibir😔
but loved cousins bonding
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Cousins scene!! nice. i miss them on the show.
can't wait for cute talk and pillow fight
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Lovely update
Waiting for nibir cute moments together
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Beautiful update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
awwwh niceyyy...MISSED KABIRAAA WAAAY TOO MUUUCH :'/
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SONAL30

maths bunty main fail ho gaya🤣laxmi relax me😆

nice update dear but no nibir😔
but loved cousins bonding
continue soon and thanks for the pm

 
lol😆
glad u like that!!!
 
Laxmi relaxxx meee...😉
 
no nibir.. Sorry!!
next part will b full of Nibir I promise...
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Lekha.Mayur4eva

Cousins scene!! nice. i miss them on the show.

can't wait for cute talk and pillow fight

 
 
awww 😳
it feels great to hear such comments...
 
i'll update part 5 as soon as I complete writing the 6th part!!!
😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
thanx niku...

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

awwwh niceyyy...MISSED KABIRAAA WAAAY TOO MUUUCH :'/

 
 
awww u missed kabiraa...
sorry dear!!
I promise next will full of Nibir 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
hiii alll i m back with the update
sorry ...
for this much late guys...
mere ghar me renovation ho raha hai and m also busy with the college assignment!!!
not getting time to write!!!
now updating part5 but next part aftr this can take more than a week... I m still writing part 6 ! Don't know when will i complete it!!! So sorry in advance and keep calm & wait for part 6 bcoz i m sure almost all Nibirians will love part 6 ...
 
 
so here u go...
 
part 5:
Here Kabir was happy at first then started getting bored...
He have nothing to do..
He thought to read some magazines to time pass then still he was feeling so alone & bored!
He was badly missing Nisha!!
He thought to call her but  then stop thinking wat will he say to her???
He have nothing to talk to her!!
Kabir to himself: "kya baat karunga usse? Aur thodi der pehle Jo kuch Hua uske baad to..."
He then dropped that idea...
He decided to watch TV then..
He switched on TV & it was a music channel...
A song played...
Kissa Tera , Teri dastaan..
Chehra tera khud kare bayaan...
Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya ,
Tu maan ja, haan maan jaaa...
Kabir thinking about himself & Nisha and reminiscing the past events...
Kahi na laage mann, kya hai yeh sunapan aa ha aa ha...
 Mujhe tum bata do, koi to wajah do aa ha aa ha...
 Har ghadi abb khayalon mein, keh raha hai koyi
 Har ghadi mere khwaabon mein, aa raha hai koyi
 Is this love, maine na jaana aa aa aa aa ha...
 Is this love, tu hi bataana aa aa aa aa ha...  Is this love... can you tell me, is this love
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All this while Kabir imaging him and Nisha on tv instead of the hero heroine in song...
Suddenly something fell down on floor by curtain bcoz of wind flow...
And he came back to his senses...
Kabir to himself "ye kya soch raha Tha Kabir ?? Tu aur Nisha??? Pyaar? No way...
Tujhe pyaar nahi ho sakta!! Tu pyaar ke liye bana hi nahin hai... Aur wo bhi Nisha se ... kabhi nahi!! Bilkul bhi nahi!!! Stupid idiot duffer !! Kuch bhi sochta hai tu!!
Then again he looked at TV ...
The song was still on...
All we need is this feeeling of love inside of our heart...
Tune tera dil kisiko diya, baat yeh sach hai gar tu maan le ise...
Dil ka suku tune hi kho diya, abb haqikat hai yeh tu jaan le ise...
 Aajkal meri chaaho mein dhal raha hai koyi
 Aajkal meri saanso mein chal raha hai koyi...
He again imagined Nisha with him!!! And wat happened between them few hours ago!!
 Is this love, maine na jaana aa aa aa aa ha...
 Is this love, tu hi bata na aa aa aa aa ha...  Kahi na laage mann, kya hai yeh sunapan aa ha aa ha...
 Har ghadi abb khayalon mein, keh raha hai koyi
 Har ghadi mere khwaabon mein, aa raha hai koyi
 Is this love, maine na jaana aa aa aa aa ha...
 Is this love, tu hi bataana aa aa aa aa ha...  Is this love, can you tell me
 Is this love...
The song ended and
& He switches off the TV
And started scolding himself for thinking all this..
"Kabir tu sach me pagal ho gaya hai!! Ye kya ulta sidha soch raha hai?? Nisha teri wifey sirf 3 mahine ke liye!!! Iss relationship ka koi future nahi!! Teri destination to London hai...
Tera sapna tujhe bula raha hai kabiraaa...
Tu ye pyaar wyaar ke chakkar me nahi pad sakta!! Hargiz nahi!! Think abt ur dream only!! Focus Kabir focus... Haan yahi think rahega!! Aise free baitha rahunga to ye ulte sidhe khayaal ate rahenge , isse achcha k main dance practice kar lu!!"
Then he switch on music system and started practicing!!
At gangwals ,
Nisha enjoyed alot with her cousins...
They all had a great time together...
Its was 10pm now!!
Nisha was thinking how will she go back home?? She's still unable to face him...
Nisha to herself
"Jo bhi ho Jana to padega...
Yahan ruk bhi to nahi sakti !! Agar aisa kiya to sab ko pakka doubt ho jayega ke kuch gadbad hai..."
Then she bid a bye to all and leave from there...
After sometime,
Nisha reached home...
Kabir was sitting on sofa listen music...
Nisha entered in room , both looked at each other and but both hav no words to talk...
Nisha went to the washroom & changed..
Then she came to her bed to sleep...
Kabir also came near the bed.. She panicked...
But Kabir took the pillow & blanket and set his mattress on the floor...
Nisha was staring him shocked...
They switched off the lights but both of them were unable to sleep...
From their marriage till today there was not any single day when they did not fight!! It was kind of their daily dose...
But that day so many things happen..
First that bitter truth...
Then their emotional talk and that ...
Almost k**s ...
But that day they didn't fight with each other...
Nisha was lost in her thoughts , Kabir was staring at her.. And adoring his beautiful wifey ...
Just then Nisha turned to him..
He quickly closed his eyes and acted as he is in deep sleep...
Nisha was continuously looking at him...
A small smile came on her face and she said : "Sote hue kitna cute lag raha hai..."
Don't know why but weird thought came in her mind .. She felt like to just eat him...
Nisha self thought "what , what did i just thought??"
"Nisha Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya?ye kya utpatang chize soch rahi hai.." then she turned to other side closed her eyes and tried to sleep...
Where as Kabir open his eyes looked at Nisha and he thought "lagta hai so gayi"
He got up and went to the window side and stood by there...
He was looking at the moon in the sky & small stars around ...
Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder...
He turned to see...
"Kya Hua Kabir ?? Tu soya nahi ab tak??" Nisha asked!
"Nahi, neend nahi aa rahi... Aur tu??" he said
Nisha replied "mujhe bhi nahi ... "
Nisha stand beside him and both started looking at the moon...
There was  silence ...
Nisha then broke the silence & said "mujhe pata hai..." *smiling* "hum dono ko neend kyu nahi aa rahi!!"
Both looked at each other ...
Nisha was smiling where as Kabir was so confused ...
"Kyu???" he asked
"Kyunki aj wo nahi hua jo har roz hota h!!"
"Kya nahi hua??"
''Jhagda"
"Kya matlab??"
"Offo Kabir tu kitna bada duffer hai! Itni simple si baat bhi nahin samajhti tujhe..."
Kabir was still confused...
Nisha turned back to room & started walking ahead & said...
"hamari shadi se lekar aj tak ek din bhi aisa nahi guzra jab hum lade na ho!! Kisi na kisi baat par, koi na koi reason se har roz humne fight ki hai!! Par aj ..
Aj aisa kuch bhi nahi hua!!!
Hame adat ho gayi hai yar ek dusre se ladne ki!!! To Bina lade neend kaise aayegi??"
And turned to look at Kabir..
Kabir gave her a big smile this time and said " tu sahi bol rahi hai yar!!"
Nisha giving I m always right look said "main to hamesha sahi hi bolti hoon..."
"Oh really?? Drama Queen"
Both were smiling at each other and
Then suddenly Kabir became serious & grabbed Nisha's hand and said "promise me , tu aj ke baad kabhi royegi nai!!"
Nisha was stunned with this gesture of him...
"Kabir..." she was about to say something
"Ssshhhuuhhh..." but Kabir interrupted & said "wada kar Nisha!! Tu nai royegi Kabi ... Main tujhe rote hue nai dekh saktA..."
There was a silence in between them for moment then again Kabir continued saying "pata hai jab Tu ro rahi Thi na...
Bilkul bandariya lag rahi thi!!!!" and he burst out laughing...
Nisha was all shocked...
She shouted "Kabir tuu..."
And stared beating him!! Kabir was still laughing & Nisha getting irked...
She started throwing all stuff around on Kabir!
"Arey Nisha .. Kya kar rai hai..
Arey areee.. Mujhe lag jayegi...
Aree rukna , arey sun toh..."
Nisha was still throwing things on him!!
"Achcha baba , sorry !! "
Nisha stopped throwing the stuff...
"But seriously yar tujhe rote hue koi bachcha dekhle to bechara raat bhar so nahi payega!!" he again stared laughing out...
Nisha was hell annoyed
"Kabir Tu.. Tu kitna bada 'k' hai na..." And throw pillow on him!!
He throw it back and said "aur Tu mere 'k' se kitni 'j' hai na.."
And their pillow fight started!!
After sometime they both stopped as they were so much tired!! They looked at each other and laughed together aloud...
Then they cleaned the the mess they created while fighting!!
Kabir took his blanket and pillow from floor & put it in on bed again...
They made the pillow wall in between and both sat on the bed...
Both Nisha & Kabir was hell tired now!! They smiled at each other once... & then
Kabir said "thanx Nisha... Thanx for every thing!! Thanx for coming in my life..."
Nisha smiled at him
He then kissed on her cheek leaving her all shocked!!!
"Ab neend ayegi ..." he winked at her and sleep in his side!!
Nisha touched her cheek with her fingers.. smiled & blushed ...
Then she also lay down on her side to sleep...

To be continued...
 
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Omg that was amazing
Please update soon and if possible pm me 😊