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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on your new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really like how you shaped this chapter
Looking forward to how you continue
Please pm me when you do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love your other current FF but this sounds even better. I'm hooked. Can't wait for more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it... Felt Very bad for Khushi When she again got a huge blow from her grandmom's death... So Khushi is d ASR here ? With all d anger attitude... Really interesting concept n a more interesting name...White Rainbow... Continue Soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!!
Awesome story line yaar...
Really the way u depict khushi's emotions is just fab...
Love the bonding of khushi with her granny...
It reminds me of my bonding with my grandmother...
And i too seriously missed her...
I missed her talks; her undying love and what not...
Today this story of urs once again bring tears in my eyes... Sachi mei...
It brought back all memories of my life which i spend with my granny... 😊
Huhhh... So here khushi is the lady ASR πŸ˜†
She lost everything today coz her granny is no more with her...
Feels really sad for her...
What the????
Khushi's mother didn't die instead she left them and that's the reason shashi gupta desolated her.
Is this the secret granny wants to tell khushi on her 18 b'day or there is more to it??
I lyk the name u choose for this story...
We all know rainbow is known for the lovely colour combination it presents but u name it white rainbow...
It's like u wanna say that the colour of rainbow are replaced with white colour...
Let's see how will arnav filled this white rainbow of khushi's life with colour onve again... πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's stories like this that make me wish there was a 'love' button because 'like' is truly not enough to describe what I felt after reading it.
It was a phenomenal story. I actually had to control the tears from spilling over cause i was on the train when i read this story (i know, I know.. im a very emotional person..😳 but in my defence, the death of her grandmother was really a very very sad scene) 

The title is so interesting and it's filled with Irony,  it really makes one wonder what is going to happen because it's describing something that is beautiful and colourful (a rainbow) as a blank sheet of paper. I love it!

And then there is the fact that khushi is losing herself or maybe instead of throwing herself into work like ASR did, she will throw herself into dancing??

The first update itself holds so much promise and mysteries to be discovered. πŸ‘
I'm curious to find out 
What was the secret madhumati ji was speaking of because truly, what happened to khushi was like having a dying man whisper to you "I have 5 million dollars hidden in-" and die before he completes his sentence. 

Another thing I really want to find out is, is khushi's mother really still alive?! 

Will khushi's step-mother be the mother she never had or a complete B**** 

Is khushi ok? What happened to her?

And so many many more qns that im holding back because I don't want this comment to be too long (but I have a feeling it's already really long..☺️)

With love, 
Your "What The?!" Hiraah❀️

Edited by hiraah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story 
interesting prologue 
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the storyline has caught my attention already. Looking forward to it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful start. This Khushi is very strong n cam take anything tht comes her way. I wonder what's the family secret.  And why her mother left? Can't wait to read more about this.
Please do pm me the updates.