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SidNi FF : For All Eternity Part 20b,Part21 completed Pg49,Pg51 - Page 3

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Swalla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really good!
Omg dd in hospital from 6 months...waiting for next!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb starting and superb update yaar..👏
how can i miss this...
its k going to follow this regularly
cant wait to read next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very well written dear 
awesome update 
dont wry v all love to read longer updates only😊
will b waiting for d next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
I believe that women should be strong and independent. Roshni goes through a harrowing experience and she grows up over night. The Roshni that we see now  is hardened by the circumstances.
All she thinks about now is her family. They are her priority. The old Roshni is not lost and will definitely resurface when the couple gets back together. 😊

Please let me know if there is anything that you do not like or want it to be changed. Since the story is just beginning i will definitely try to make the changes😊

I basically like stories where things unravel slowly so this is what i am following here too. Please let me know if the suspense gets too much or if i go overboard.

I will try to update regularly. Weekends will be full of updates but i cannot say the same for weekdays.
Lastly, please do comment. It will help me understand if i am on the right track.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really loved the independent char of roshni in ur ff... There is no need to change anything bcoz from intro to part 2 everything went very well...👏 I'm always like twist in a story so u can take ur own time to reveal the suspence it's not matter for us but make sure we want ly +ve note of sidni story...😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! Again an update, that too this soon😃 Loved it. There were lot of suspense and I know it will only be cleared in the coming updates. So will wait patiently😊

And I have a suggestion. Could u give different colors for flash backs and present scenes?. It would be easy to read.😊Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: zoopassion

Wow!!! Again an update, that too this soon😃 Loved it. There were lot of suspense and I know it will only be cleared in the coming updates. So will wait patiently😊

And I have a suggestion. Could u give different colors for flash backs and present scenes?. It would be easy to read.😊Waiting for the next part 😊


I know..I just kept typing and it turned into another long one 😛
Thanks for the suggestion..i'll change it right away😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates dear... loved both the parts and u wrote it too well😊
waiting for the next one very eagerly
Edited by madhuharini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update soon plz plz cant wait for der fst meeting!