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Hey Choco,
Just read the chapter and what should I say? I'm speechless after reading such an emotional part. I had been anxiously waiting for AsYa to meet after the leap and here is that moment.
Shock. Bliss. Hurt. Agony. Restlessness. This was how I felt on seeing Zoe approach Asad. Seriously, you've written the scene and described their emotions so well that i could visualize the whole thing. I could see those emos flashing through their eyes.
It was brilliant. I love it.
Zoe's words that she jot down plus the ones she said to Asad showed a glimpse of the girl she had become now. She has changed, definitely, from what she was earlier. Maybe she hasn't changed just hiding behind iron walls to stop herself n her fragile heart from crumbling. Her words felt to me like as if she was reminding herself that now she couldn't risk the few limited happiness in her mother's life for her own no matter what. She couldn't be herself for a moment and embrace the man she loves so deeply.
Asad's little thanks on finding her finger devoid of any ring showed how much he still loves her. It definitely must have been painful to stay apart for so long. I hope he can break through her tough exterior without feeling defeated cox of her tough exterior.
Choco.. everything was pure beauty here. Loved it all so much.
Waiting...
Love lots lots n lots.. hamesha
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