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hello Vishakha, nice name. N FF title is also fine. Love the concept, but why did Kalpi ditch Raghav?Raghav's pain was very emotional n sad. Do continue soon and yes, your English is fine!
Originally posted by: lolorNice ff...why kalpi left raghav?...
Originally posted by: riaka??? Why kalpi left Raghav? What revenge she took?
Different and interesting story. Please carry on 😛
you'll get to know why she left but after sometime till then enjoy the story
Originally posted by: chahat4uhello Vishakha, nice name. N FF title is also fine. Love the concept, but why did Kalpi ditch Raghav?Raghav's pain was very emotional n sad. Do continue soon and yes, your English is fine!
thank you !!but honestly I sometimes find my name unique and different...and for the story you'll get to know the reason in further chappy😆😉
So guys I'm back with an update actually chotusa update...Sorry for the delay as my computer is still not working properly but enough to give an update...Sorry in advance if disappointed...And as for now no ragna scene in this story but asure you next chappy is full of ragna and ragna only because next part contains fb of ragna...till then enjoy this..
PART 2:-
There in one bungalow, one girl is standing near her window and is remembering the moments spend with the love of her life.
Ahan ahan ahan ahan
Ahan ahan ahan ahan
She thinks" I know...I know you would be hating me for betraying you", thinking this she closed her eyes and her eyes leaked a few drops of tears and wetted her dusky cheeks and then moved further down to her throat, neck, collarbone and further down only to be soaked by her T-shirt.
Oo re piya
Ohohhhooo Ooohooho Ohohoohooho
And then she opened her eyes and continued her thoughts, " and I also want you to hate me so that you would able to forget me and move on in your life but I will always love you till the last breath of mine..." thinking this she opened her eyes and gave a small broken smile to herself as she remembered some special, happy but at the same time painful memory and thought, "I remembered the day I realize I'm in love, that day onwards till we were separated I dreamt of a happy peaceful life with you, I dreamt of a life for us which will be full of love and happy moments and memory and here I was only the one who broke that dream of mine with my own hands...I'M SORRY FOR ALL..."
In faslon kaaa yeh faislaaa kyunnn dil ne mere kar liyaaa
Khud hi na jaaneee kaise jiyegaaa hoke yeh tumse judhaaa ahaahahaaa
"I can't tell you that the day you are thinking that I betrayed you that I cheated you for a mere revenge, I didn't betrayed or cheated you but I have to leave you or in a more appropriate manner I have to loss you so that you move on in your life and can live your life peacefully without any pain...as I know if have reciprocated your love that day then you might have been happy for the time being but then for the rest of the life you have to be in pain and how could I see that the person who I love to the core in pain and that too because of me...so I have to loss you in the hand of my ill fate..."saying this in her mind she couldn't control herself and her pain started to come out from her heart through her eyes in the form of tears...TEARS of pain, Tears of regret, Tears of hurt, Tears of LOVE that she was not that fortunate to have love in her life...
Main vari janvaaa... main vari janvaaa...
Satho ki ho ya bekassorrr hayee!!
Nadan is dil ki har khwahish ruthiii!!!
Sapne hue hain sare chooorrr
Piyaaa ooo re piyaaa
Piya re piya re piyaaa
People say that everyone is not fortunate to have found true love in their life but in her case she found her true love, her soul mate but she thought that she was not fortunate to have that love of her in her life as a life partner...if only she knows what god has planned for her and him...
Piyaaa oo re piyaaa
Piya re piya re piyaaa
Piyaaa oo re piya
Piya re piya re piyaaa
After some moments when she composed herself and her full of pain heart, as she wiped the tears that was stuck on her cheeks and some on the corner of her eyes that was threatening to come out... and said it aloud, "But I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU AND ONLY YOU...AND I CAN NEVER EVER BETREAYED YOU,NEVER IN MY DREAM, but I have to leave you or should I say I have to loss you so that you live your life peacefully "she talked with herself and her eyes again filled with tears that were previously threatening to come out from her eyes...
And by closing her eyes she let her tears flow from her eyes again down to her cheeks and then further down to her neck and then was soaked by her cloth she has worn..."I LOVEE YOU RAGHavvv..."...she yelled in her mind...and started remembering...
SORRY IF FOUND ANY MISTAKES OR ERRORS AS NO PROOF READING
AND YES ADJUST WITH SONG AS NOT GOOD IN SONGS SELECTION AND WRITTING
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TILL ENJOY...
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