4 ~His First Love~ Look on Pg 144! Note! - Page 27

beautiful chappy
maina was irritating jodha n disturbing her talking session with jalal😆
JJ scene was short but very hot☺️☺️jalal was lost in her😛
liked Jodha ruq n salim's bonding
surya is stalking jodha 😕he is interested in her..?
update soon

Awesome chapter as usual sammy 😃
jo reminising her beautiful moments with jalal and maina continuously irritating her like typical Indian mother😡
agreed she loves jo and want to see her settled in life
but why she is so much interested in hooking surya with her .
cant she see jo dont like him more
Liked the way jo shares each and every thing with jalal
so less chances of misunderstandings😉
and their passionate kiss in office uff😳
im still blushing.
phew bharmal caught them romancing today.
have to be careful from next time😆
this is really very chipku .im really getting irritated with this character.
bharmal doubts jo (quite common)
hope he supports their relation.
update soon
thanks for pm

thnx for the pm...the story is fab but i was expecting a bit long...anyways i hope after knowings jodha's relation with jalal her father will except it like her brother...hopeing to read soon...

Sammy 🤗

Awesome chpter n pm me nxt chpter when u update

Samy! Wonderful update dear. Oops growing suspicion on Bharmal's side 😲😲 and then Surya stalking Jodha😡😡 Really excited now. Please update soon.

awsum blossom chaptr...2 gd luved it...jallu is alwyz in romantic mood huh... 😉 😆 omg bharmal is suspicious over jodha's relationship ab kya hoga...hope evrythng's gone b ok...update soon...dnt delay... 😉

yeah...i too agree with ur views  ''rona dhona dont make a story epic''
the story becomes gr8 by story line how perfectly it can portray ur emotions and u did it fabolously👏👏👏
i loved the way u portray the characters and story progressing😛😛
and pls dont end the story soon, u can show their life aftr marriage😉😉 how they can cope up with their relations, understanding each other more often and make their bond more stronger

 
Edited by mamtasingla - 8 years ago

Wow! I love your points!! Dnt worry di we're with u n u r an awesme writer! Keep rocking

Edited by lovergirlalina - 8 years ago