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Okayy...

hey awesome prologue chandu.

nice concept

love to read d story.

do update soon.

n pm me whenever u update.

Oh My Effin' Lord!
What was that? Was that guy Randhir??

Damn! When the prologue itself can make me an emotional mess, I can only wonder what the entire fiction would do to me.
The perfection with which you've depicted the scene, the helplessness and the hopelessness, is commendable.
I'm spellbound to say the least... You've rendered me speechless..
I'm eagerly waiting for the story to start and the mysteries to unveil.
Update soonish!!!

Regards
Keya

Nice prologue 

Originally posted by: anudoll

Hey...It's really interesting...

Cont soon

Thank u so much! I will update it ASAP :)

Originally posted by: clars

OMG just luk at the cute little kid,wana go and 🤗her ,what an amazing pic u chose ,she almost luks their kid and RD is the father i guess ,lovely FF please do continue

Thank u so much! I will update it ASAP :)

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Wow it sounds intrstmg

Loved the proloug
So much mystery

Who's srishti
Rd daughter r what ?



Excited for update


Do update soon
Wtng



No pm arrrggghhh
Moi gussa

Aww..Im sorry..PMs delayed due to my pagal net😡

Originally posted by: Sagl

Haila :o aae ki hai 

Wo bachchi ko leke rd bhaga hospital tak 

Usne naam bataya srishti shekhawat 

But when doctor asked the relation 

Why was he fumbling 😕

Wo uski daughter hi hai na ?? 

Btw beautifully penned 

Muje smjh nai aata logon ko itne awsm ideas aate kahan se hai 🤔

Excited for this election partner 😃

Update soon 

Or else take maar from me 🤣

Aww..Thank u so much Partner😃

Originally posted by: Angel__Tamanna

Hey chandu ,
so u started a new story,
The banner itself is attracting me too much to read this story

Coming on prologue
It seems intresting,
Seems like srishti is Randhir's daughter
& i cant not stop from guessing that srishti is SanDhir's daughter & they would have seprated
May be 😕
Lets c,what you have planned for the story 😉

Thanks for pm,
continue soon

I think this comment is long enough to make you post next part asap 😆

P.S- The banner is supreb,please make 2-3 for my stories too 😳

Thank yu so much di..Sure I'll make banners for u..Scrap me about ur needs.. But please bear with me till the end of this month... I'll be hardly online due to exams..I'll PM u the banners s by first week of April😳

Originally posted by: shreeyoshree

prologe was lovingly pinned dear just loved it

ab ye shrishti koun hai yaar...
may be sandhir's daughter but wait why randhir was strammering when doctor asked his relation with her...

looks like INTERESTING VERY INTERESTING
continue soon
i want pms
jaldi jaldi
loved it
keep smiling
be happy forever

Thank you very much Sim..All urs questions about Srishti would be answered in the first part...