Originally posted by: ankitasenIt's awesome, very well written.
Thanks very much... glad you found it likeable.π
Originally posted by: ankitasenIt's awesome, very well written.
Originally posted by: Yashh...it was just WOW
Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-Firstly, welcome to the forum.π
Secondly, what a beginning! πβοΈ That was such a brilliant piece of writing..Awesome!
It was all just there, the love, the desperation, the pain..the need..And ahh, the awesomeness! π³
The kiss was super and for a moment, I actually believed he was sorry for the kiss and my heart sank..π But oh well, he just cannot be sorry for the kiss..BAS! π³ βΊοΈ
HOT ONE! Loved it..Brilliant writing..keep it up! :D
Just came across your other work, so just gonna run to read that one! :) Please keep writing! :)
Originally posted by: anshipriyavery well written..loved itπ
Originally posted by: ..Mehak..Awesone. :D
Originally posted by: greeniewow... Its amazing... It makes my heart very lite... Really very nice one... Loved it so much...
Originally posted by: LaSandySparkle with thunderstorm line is really awesomeπ
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